really nice town. i think your pear trees suit it as well however i would also add oranges to give it more of a variety and to also go with your path's theme. your pattern of flowers are a good choice and they are placed nicely however it needs a lot of work. if you want to put flowers around your path and you'll probably need a lot of them, the more types of white and yellow flowers the better. you could also experiment better and diverse combinations with them + it would be easier to finish.
there are still a lot of trees scattered around randomly on the bottom of your map, there is no path there either. i'm guessing this is just unfinished but i really do like how you've placed your fountain and how you've designed around it.
i'd also like to point out that your villagers are a good choice, most of them are in a similar colour theme but nevertheless it's good to have others that stand out.
library:
i was hoping you'd order your bookshelves and you have which is great. however, i would have less of them and add more space for tables and chairs to give it more of a cozy feeling than a cramped one. it is a gooood design for a library though
william's:
my favourite house. i love the first room, it's very colourful and i love the messiness of it. it suits what you're going for i believe. your room to the left is also well done, the furniture is greatly placed and overall the room is bright.
i like how you used the sweets furniture for your kitchen. i think that's clever and you've managed to pull it off. the only thing i'm concerned with is the ice cream freezer thingy. i think it's out of place and should be removed but that's just my opinion.
you've got a lot of nice food in your kitchen and although they're only desserts they blend in with your sweet furniture.
there's not much furniture in your room to the right but i do like how it's plain and simple. the bathroom is lovely and i like how it's designed symmetrically, i was concerned that you wouldn't have a bigger approach to a realistic house so i was relieved when i saw your bathroom. i personally like the more realistic houses.
the upstairs room is gorgeous and has a cute feeling to it however i would have had this in the basement and the bathroom upstairs. it just makes more sense to me
school:
kind of plain but it's fine, it's very easy to tell that it's a school. i would add a lunch room and a playground.
7-11:
a nice little shop, everything is placed nicely though i would have it bigger and make it more colourful.
so a lot of your flowers are out of place and it's not easy to tell where to go at some points since there's no path to lead me. when i go closer to the train station though it gets much more developed and neater, i like how you've put money trees and pears together. they are a nice combination
i have no issues with where you've placed your PWP's, they are all a good choice and they're easy to design around.
so yes, i like your town but it's very underdeveloped. i think it'll look great once you put more work into it and finish your flower placement and paths. i like how you've made things a real town would have and i see that you're already going creative with it.
small tip: add presents at the plaza to give the player a better and more interesting experience
sorry if i rambled on too much about your houses ;