tsun's dream review service

[radical6]

aye i like visiting dream towns and i want the dreamer badge
idk list your dream code and ill check it out
please list it in your post. don't say "check my sig" etc or ill ignore you
also i dont mind tips in tbt bells
reviews might be crappy if i'm tired, sorry about that. you can come back and ask for another if you changed some stuff.

also if you wanna review mine it's 5600-2168-6758. Please ignore the stuff on the floor and Canaberra ruining my path, lol. and the random flowers everywhere. im breeding, ya. and rui and rosies houses aren't complete lmao.

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Tarakdeep
Springpup
Berrypop
MC4pros
xsy

 

[tarakdeep]

mines in my sig the second code

 

[radical6]

mines in my sig the second code

I can't really read that.

 

[tarakdeep]

4600-2456-0517

 

[springpup]

i'd love some feedback on my town! i'm thinking of resetting. DA is 4100-4166-4561!

please note that Rhonda and Aurora moved into the middle of my paths and i tried my best to fix it. Also, the grass around Rhonda's house is bad because muffy lived there and then moved, only to have Rhonda move into virtually the same spot. Gaston and Spork are two villagers i'm currently trying to get rid of and that's why there are no paths leading to their houses. Chadder is moving away in a few days and-again- moved into the middle of a path.

 

[TheGreatBrain]

Me please.I have two in my sig.Both are cute, but I have had Joy the longest.Thanks.

 

[BerryPop]

Mine is 5100-3625-9746

 

[radical6]

4600-2456-0517

Spoiler: review

First Impressions: Really cool plaza! Though when the water connects back up it looks a bit weird, but it's still cool.

The path looks a bit weird by the bushes and gold roses. It just suddenly turns into 3 tile path. The pink lily by the southeast corner of your town (south from Phoebe's house) looks a bit off there. The pink and blue bushes there look weird too. Maybe place a PWP instead? I love what you did with the cafe though, cute. Your train station is also pretty cute. You have a bit too many flowers, so it feels kind of cluttered. Mostly because it's different colors and types of flowers at once.

Houses
Museum: The first room isn't anything special, but the layout for it is good. The left room is your average old space room. Back room is alright. Not too sure what the theme of this character's house is supposed to be, because of the sloppy room. I thought this was supposed to be a museum but it looks like it's just random sets.

Jinora: Rococo room seems kinda weird to me as the main room, but whatever. Don't have much to say because it's mostly sets. Cute cafe on the right side though, but I probably wouldn't use too much of the sweet's furniture. Idk, it just doesn't blend right with the minimalist furniture. Maybe you can try using alpine?

Akiza: Okay, I guess.

Tarkdeep: The music for your first room doesn't match at all. The gold series doesn't really match Stale Cupcakes. I would've put more of a bold, upbeat song instead. The purple rococo room is okay, but the throne looks weird in there. The back room with the princess and mermaid set is okay. Some of the furniture looks okay, but some of it doesn't go with each other. The throne in there is weird too. I would use a different floor or wall paper. Top room looks like it's just a picture and zodiac room? So not much to say there. I actually like the basement though, that's cool.

Nothing much else to say.

i'd love some feedback on my town! i'm thinking of resetting. DA is 4100-4166-4561!

please note that Rhonda and Aurora moved into the middle of my paths and i tried my best to fix it. Also, the grass around Rhonda's house is bad because muffy lived there and then moved, only to have Rhonda move into virtually the same spot. Gaston and Spork are two villagers i'm currently trying to get rid of and that's why there are no paths leading to their houses. Chadder is moving away in a few days and-again- moved into the middle of a path.

Spoiler: review

First Impressions: Some of the flowers don't really match the path. A one tile path is okay I guess. Your town could use some more trees and bushes.

The clock by the town hall just has a bunch of random flowers. My town is like that too though, but I plan to clean it up. It's kind of weird when there are two bushes on one side and one bush on the other. I like the cherry and peach tree section though. The campsite just seems to have a bunch of random flowers again. Maybe put a pwp somewhere. Your town actually pulls of diagonal bridges quite well because it's a one tile path. I don't like how in the southeast corner of your town (by the bridge) it's like red and white roses and red and white cosmos. It just looks weird. I would change the cosmos. You have a bunch of space by Spork's house. Fill it up with a PWP I guess?

Houses
Cayley: Not too much to say, the rococo room is common. (I have it too lol) but at least you add some different furniture in there. Top room is cute.

 

[MC4pros]

4100-3756-8919 Ignore the mess on the ground and horrendous flower placement and incompleted paths; my town's still a work in progress!

 

[tarakdeep]

thh for the review

 

[radical6]

Mine is 5100-3625-9746

Spoiler: review

First Impressions: Uh, a bit confused about the clothes on the ground. Not the best outfit in the world. I'm not a fan of the brick path. One tile paths are kinda skinny and hard to stay on. Two tile paths are better, imo.

You kind of have random PWPs placed everywhere. There are two fountains next to each other with no flowers or path connecting up to it. There's a random outside chair. The zen PWP by the bridge looks weird. The water doesn't really go with your path. When your path starts to zigzag with the bamboo by Goldie's house it's kind of annoying. Your town really needs a lot more flowers and organization, there's just random PWPs everywhere.

Houses:
Kara: The main room is interesting. Kind of random, but creative. Your right room has cool furniture that kind of blends in together.

 

[Xsy]

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4900-2179-2720

But let it be known:
-Iggly ruined a path, so that's why the area around his house seems ... unused. Waiting for him to move.
-Goldie kinda ruined an area too. Both of these people need to leave my town.
-I have put 0 effort into my house. Literally none. Its just a mess of crap that I just needed to drop somewhere.
-Bank's house is a nice little bank, though, so feel free to check that house out. :3
-There are a few gaps here and there I'll need to fill with more flowers, but I'm too lazy to get those done now.
-The beach is where I store my spare flowers... nothing special there, either.

Other than that, I would love any ideas or criticism.

 

[radical6]

4100-3756-8919 Ignore the mess on the ground and horrendous flower placement and incompleted paths; my town's still a work in progress!

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First Impressions: Soo, a minecraft themed town? That's okay I guess, but meh. Creative I suppose since I haven't seen that yet.

The bushes seem to be kind of random. I would stick to one or two type of bushes for each row of bushes. I like the picnic area, though it looks kind of off with the grass tile. The upper part of your town could use a lot more flowers. Can't say I really like the path and grass tile that much, the grass would look better if it was a bit darker. Don't really have much to say since you said to ignore everything else.

Houses
Vrinda: The alpine series is kind of ugly by itself. I really like what you did with the gyroids in your rococo room. I thought it was an actual song for a minute. And uh your back room is blocked. The basement I can't tell what it is tbh.

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4900-2179-2720

But let it be known:
-Iggly ruined a path, so that's why the area around his house seems ... unused. Waiting for him to move.
-Goldie kinda ruined an area too. Both of these people need to leave my town.
-I have put 0 effort into my house. Literally none. Its just a mess of crap that I just needed to drop somewhere.
-Bank's house is a nice little bank, though, so feel free to check that house out. :3
-There are a few gaps here and there I'll need to fill with more flowers, but I'm too lazy to get those done now.
-The beach is where I store my spare flowers... nothing special there, either.

Other than that, I would love any ideas or criticism.

Spoiler: review

First Impressions: I like the square thing you have going around your plaza.

I don't really get why the path suddenly changes to brown, but alright. (I'm guessing bc of the H in front of your mayor's home. Also interesting flag, lol). I personally don't like how the flower types change next to each other. (Ex: rose - tulip - lily etc) but that's just me. They just seem kind of random. I get that it's trying to match the colors I guess. You need more bushes than trees. The path isn't very interesting. Also when the flowers suddenly change (ex Erik) it looks kind of weird. I saw that you did that with black roses too and it looked kind of awkward.

Sorry, don't have much else to say ):

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

I hope you enjoy Gensokyo
4300-4163-3538

 

[xanisha]

I would love it if you would review my town <3 My da is 5200-3732-3031

 

[Labrontheowl]

You can visit mine if you want, I'd like to know your opinions c: it's like 87% done, I recently finished all houses and pwps so I'll be updating the town soon ^^'
5900.2651.0857

 

[mayorgeorgia]

Hi! I would love some feedback on my town! My dream code is: 6300-2839-5269

 

[TheGreatBrain]

Well, I said mine was in my sig, so it was ignored.lol. 3600-3965-9382.

Town of Verona.

Well, first of all, I really like your pink paths and the cherry blossom trees.Very pretty.Cute face standees.Love the main room in Kallie's house.Back room looks great too.Your town is lovely.I would suggest finishing and fixing your paths and arranging your flowers a little more orderly.Other than that.Nice town.

 

[ethre]

Can you review my dream town? Thank you! :3

4800-3468-9192

 

[radical6]

jesus christ this took forever and im so tired

I hope you enjoy Gensokyo
4300-4163-3538

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First Impressions:I really like the water and tiles around the tree. It's really nice. Path is a bit meh though

I really like how you pulled off the zigzagging paths. It looks great when they connect to each other to the rose arch. I notice the bushes kind of change randomly in the same row but I'm guessing that's intentional? But it looks a bit off to me, but that just might be because I like symmetry. Other than the bushes, I don't have much else to say. Your town is great! Though, I feel like the path doesn't really match with the water.

Houses:
Yukari: Cute main room and your back room is pretty unique! Gives a nice outside calm feel. The right room has a bit too many plants imo. The top room is really cool, though the dress in the back looks kind of weird there. Your house has a general theme, except for the basement. It just kind of changes suddenly.

Reimu: Reminds me a lot of Yukari's house in the first room. The left room looks kind of weird with the wall. The gyroids in the top room and the gray things by the eggs look weird in the room. Mostly because the whole room is more of a cloudy cute look, not much of the zen stuff.

Marissa: I like the main room. The bookcase looks kind of weird there, though. The autumn room looks weird with the aurora screen tbh. Not really sure why there's a lunch tray in the top room though. The basement is my favorite room, very cute.

Alice:The path to the house is kinda weird because there are bushes blocking it. But anyway, the wall and flooring don't really go with the alpine. And the gyroids don't really go with the song playing in that room? The knights in the back room don't really go with the rest of the room idk. The basement is also really creative.

Really nice town!

I would love it if you would review my town <3 My da is 5200-3732-3031

Spoiler: review

First Impressions:I've seen this candy pattern a lot. Also, I really like how the town hall connects to the plaza. You got a really lucky map.

The red and orange roses by the town hall look kinda weird. You kinda have way too many roses, but not many trees and bushes. The candy patterns don't really go with your path at all. The bushes at retail seem like you just kinda planted random bushes. But yeah, you seem to have way too many flowers in your town. It's okay to just have grass sometimes y'know.

Houses
Shaina: The ice cream in the main room on top of the entrance looks kind of weird. The tower doesn't really match your rococo room (the right room). The lamp looks kind of weird on the floor. Your ice room is okay, but the red chair looks out of place there. I personally don't like the gold roses in the princess room. (Also what's the music for the music box in the princess room?).

Charming: Cool main room, heh. I like the symmetry.

You can visit mine if you want, I'd like to know your opinions c: it's like 87% done, I recently finished all houses and pwps so I'll be updating the town soon ^^'
5900.2651.0857

Spoiler: review

First Impressions: Cute paths!!!
The stairs kinda look realistic, though I wouldn't overdo them. IMO stairs look more real if you can put trees and bushes by them. There seems to be no path after the bottom bridge by the plaza. The top part of town by the train station looks kind of weird with the black flowers. Mostly because your path is pink and pastel so the black flowers don't really go. I assume you're breeding flowers because they're just kind of randomly placed by your house (Leeda), which is fine. But yeah, you have kinda too many flowers and they don't seem to really have a pattern.

Houses
Leeda:Not much to say since most of it is sets but the chairs in the back room (Princess room) by the table with pictures looks a bit weird. I don't think the music really fits the regal room too much. World map looks weird in the ice room upstairs. The mush room needs something in the center.

Kuro: I have nothing to say since it's mostly sets. I'm guessing the basement is incomplete.

Alex: The floor doesn't go with the 7/11 room. Like at all. The wall doesn't really match either. Not much to say since the rooms aren't complete.

Hi! I would love some feedback on my town! My dream code is: 6300-2839-5269

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First Impressions: ayee i remember using this path. its nice.
When the path goes by retail it's kinda..funky? I know you were trying to connect it to the plaza and you can't do anything about the rock and pond, but it looks kind of weird. Your town has a bit too many roses. When your path moves up by the train station it looks weird. Make it connect a space or two to the left instead. You don't have many trees or bushes. The path by Ruby's house looks really weird. It looks weird again by Georgia's house. And personally I don't like the yellow roses by the path leading down to Georgia's house, but it's your town.

Houses
Flora: The first room is kinda empty in the left and center.
Clara:Cute 7/11 shop, I guess.
Georgia:Not much to say, it's just sets. Maybe add something more colorful to the regal room. The painting in the princess room doesn't really go there. Add a table in the Pave room. Maybe some low table or something?

Well, I said mine was in my sig, so it was ignored.lol. 3600-3965-9382.

Town of Verona.

Well, first of all, I really like your pink paths and the cherry blossom trees.Very pretty.Cute face standees.Love the main room in Kallie's house.Back room looks great too.Your town is lovely.I would suggest finishing and fixing your paths and arranging your flowers a little more orderly.Other than that.Nice town.

yeah sorry, i said i would ignore sig posts. but heres the review. also ty

Spoiler: review

First Impressions:Cute outfits. I like the patterns around the tree a lot.

Though, it's kind of confusing to find the path, it doesn't really connect to the plaza. Anyway, cute snow theme. I like the ice skating rink a lot. Though I feel like the cedar trees seem to be randomly placed in the winter side of town. The train station part of town seems kinda empty on the left. The purple brick path doesn't really connect to anywhere. I'm guessing this is fall? But it's right next to spring so idk. For spring I would personally replace the cedar trees with regular saplings. (Also I like the QR for the sewer a lot. If you could link me the qr that would be really cool). I don't really like 1 tile paths, they're skinny and don't look that nice imo. I would probably just stick with purple and pink flowers for the spring part of town. The bushes kind of look weird by Grizzly's house. I feel like spring is a lot larger compared to the other seasons, and the fall sections aren't connected to each other which makes it a bit harder to follow.

Houses
Annie: Good fall/Halloween themed house. I don't really like the floor in the library room, but it goes with the table. It doesn't really match the wallpaper imo. The wallpaper doesn't really match in the right room.
Snow:Cute house for Snow! Can't think of anything that would fit the theme better. Nice job. Maybe add a birdbath or a birdhouse or anything like that in the back room.
Noel:The left room looks kind of meh, idk. I don't really like the floor. And I can't really tell what it has to do with winter. Is it a mess hall for santa and his elves or something? The music doesn't really go in the right room. Idk, I feel like that song is more of a spring song.
Ella:Omg I love her house. But in the royal ball room I would add a mannequin in there, it just looks kinda empty. Get rid of the king maybe and put someone else in the royal ball room? I can't tell what the jester downstairs is. The evil stepmother? Also if you could put in the fairy godmother in that would be really cool.

Can you review my dream town? Thank you! :3

4800-3468-9192

Spoiler: review

First Impressions: I personally don't like how there are trees in the middle of the path.
Your town could use a lot more flowers in some parts. There's a bunch of space by the rose arch, maybe put a pwp or some more flowers there? Or connect up your path through there to Mew's house. I would add some more bushes in the northwest corner of your town. And a lot more flowers, yeah. The bamboo by Whitney's house looks a bit odd.

Houses:
Shaymin:I love the back room! But I would turn the hedge stand or w/e on the left around. Cute cafe downstairs, but the brewster's gyroid is facing the wrong way.
Candy: Cute library o: I plan to do the same thing in my town. Upstairs is a bit empty, could use a table or two.
Celebi: Cute school!! I plan to do the same thing like this as well, heh.
Mew: wow what a beautiful room. though i dont exactly understand why theres a roman soldier there lol.

okay im finally done. sorry if your review was short, i was tired