Review the Dream Town above you!

[Candy_Rose]

Also: no sweets set? it would fit perfectly with your town!

Sadly, I haven't unlocked Gracie yet ;~; So I don't have the sweets series yet.

Thanks for your review and yeah, my town and player houses are still a work in progress. I just got the game last November as an early birthday present.

To the below poster, Please SKIP my town and go dream about Flykk's town of Woodhall DA: 7900-5047-6540

 

[Nooblord]

I want this one!

The paths are so cool and unique! They look very soft and sweet (if that makes any sense) compared to the bright pastel pink paths. You even put some clovers among the path! I found Poppy to talk to next to the town plaza. She looks fabulous with her fishing rod. The wisteria trellis looks great with the forest of bamboo leading up to it. Your cube sculpture also had some nice symmetry going on with the hedges (I'm a sucker for symmetry). Your PWP placement is great! Everything is easily visible and I don't have to go running around to look for them. It's a shame Shari moved in front of your house. You could have connected it to the main path. I would also recommend more flowers in some places, but it looks great overall!

Onto SEM's house! Holy crap that's a nice bathroom. I never expected marble and the cabana series would look good. What are the lion heads on the wall called? I need to get some of those for my bathroom! xD I also really like the left room. It had that rugged theme that reminds me of a bar. The lighting in the upstairs room was perfect. You have a little study in your basement! The tribal masks seem out of place however.

Your town is great! It was very original and incredibly gorgeous. Good luck finishing that 5%.

Thanks for the review I try not to have too many flowers around fruit trees so the fruit has somewhere to drop, and I have quite a lot of fruit trees, lol. The lion heads are called leo sculptures and is part of the astrology series.


Woodhall

Great color coordination of the flowers, guessing you're working on surrounding the plaza with red flowers which would look great. The aurora lights really contribute to the dream experience. I love simple paths that are easy to navigate, so that's a huge check in my book. Your current group of villagers is amazing, I really want Flora in my town. Your house is really well-furnished, simple but classy, wish the rest of the rooms were more completed, they do look promising however. Nice library in the basement. Good luck on the progression of your town, looks like it's heading in a good direction.

 

[candiedapples]

Reserving this spot to dream of Nooblord's town!

EDIT:

Nooblord, you have a great lineup of villagers. I especially like Drago and Frita. Overall I found it easy to navigate through the town. I would agree that there could be more flowers, though you used some pretty color combos. I enjoyed the nautical/modern theme of the homes and buildings, but i thought that the classic police station didn't fit in as well as the other PWPs, especially since there is a video screen in front of it. I really loved the homes and thought each room was creative and well put together. The characters are cool too, such as SEM, the old sea captain, who filled his home with mementos of his travels like the masks and fossils. In PortMelo's place, my favorite room was the one that was made up to look like the deck of a ship, complete with comfy lounge chairs. The RecZone was another fun place to unwind, shoot some baskets, and have lunch. It wss awesome to see Samus and Link in the arcade! As for Serenity, i was struck by the graveyard area in the basement. The two gyroids were a good touch. All in all, your town is neat and relaxing but I personally enjoyed the excellent decor of the houses a little more than the landscaping outside.




Town: Goldmoon
DA: 5000-5119-5712

My town isn't 100% finished - there's still a lot of landscaping to be done, particularly in the southwest corner of town. Thanks in advance for the feedback!

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

updated during an aurora

would like the whole town reviewed(of course), but there are several things I need some specific advice on:
-Robin is moving tomorrow. Should I leave her spot open for another villager, or do something interesting with that area?
-Marisa's right room: advice for turning it into a romantic hotel room
-Yukari's back room: want to turn into a magical glade... thing.
-keep the water fountain in the park or get rid of it? was just to prevent villagers moving there, but now I'm unsure whether to keep or not
-square topiaries or illuminated trees along the path just north of the police station?
-what music might go nice in Reimu's basement? stale cupcakes music box?

And fyi, the gyroid in the north-east side will be a zen clock, and the lamp to the right of the instrument shelter and the clock south of Reimu's house are just to keep villagers from moving there. the bamboo next to the statue fountain is just to test how bamboo looks when it's cut on its' second day.

~Goldmoon~
Likes:
-nice path. love that it fits the season
-statue fountain/windmill area
-path through the illuminated arch; so many don't do that.
-bus stop next to zen city hall(great minds think alike )
-stone tablet setup you have
-cafe/park area is nice

Jenny's House:
main room: what a pigsty!
basement: again, great minds think alike
2nd floor: interesting

Dislikes:
-no path to the campsite
-no path to or in statue fountain/windmill area
-park area left of Jenny's house is rather plain
-picnic basket all by itself
-rather undeveloped on the south-western side of town


Suggestions
-might have that tiled path next to the flower clock go all the way around it. almost didn't see the clock.
-expand Jenny's house
-path or some indication of the south-west park and the campsite
-path in the statue fountain/windmill area

Final Thoughts: overall, very nice, but it definitely needs some tender loving care to get to its' full potential. You might like to visit my town, since I made a few similar design choices

Rating: 3.5/5

 

[Mega_Cabbage]

Gensokyo

To answer your questions first:
-Yes, you should definitely do something interesting with the area Robin is moving away from. The waterfall is an amazing place to catch a view.
-For Marisa's hotel room, I would add a fireplace to the right of the entrance and maybe a small dining table (fits one tabletop item) with two chairs and a chocolate cake on top of the table. Having the bookcase blocking part of the hall to the upper room seems a bit odd.
-For Yukari's glade, placing some tulips on the floor around the perimeter of the room would look nice. Afterwards get a couple aries rocking chairs to symbolize sheep prancing around the area. I really like the spa area (ha ha I have a thing for bath tubs xD )!
-The fountain area looks good. I would keep it. Maybe spruce it up a bit more though.
-I would go with the square topiary since your town seems more nature oriented.
-Yay gyroids! The K.K. Ballad music box fits nicely in the ice room in Reimu's basement. It's sort of jolly, yet wistful like how you mixed in the christmas trees.

Now for the town itself!
Your town tree is giant! Looking around the town plaza, some of the stair and water patterns seem oddly placed. Some parts of the town were a bit hard to navigate because I kept getting lost in the trees, specifically around Alice's house, Robin's house, and around the hot spring. You also have a pattern of a picnic blanket? A real one might be better. I don't know why, but the gray brick path irks me. It might be because it seems unfinished because there are no borders or the way it looks next to the water path in the winter. Maybe it's just me. I really like how you decorated the front of Reimu's house though. You should do it with all the houses! The path to the cafe was my favorite part of town. It gave a moment's reprieve from seeing all the snow in town. Yes! Grass! I also see you are growing flowers on the beach. I wonder what you'll do with them...

DA: 4600-2145-6163

 

[Arabelle]

~~ Mega_Cabbage ~~ Town of Nectere ~~

First thing I notice - Cherry bloossoms! So pretty <3 and woah your town tree is huge!! Very impressive xD I really like your path patterns. Something you don't see that often in other towns, so they look.. hmm original?.. flower patterns surrounding main path look nice too c: You see the water paths so often...so I like yours a lot.

By the way, have you thought about putting up modern bridge? well, I just thought that modern bridge might match your path better (graish-color), but suspension bridge still look nice. Maybe just the one north of the tower PWP? It will work for modern-town look. c:

Walking up to your house - wow. I love the symmetry!!! Scenery looks amazing just walking there. & I like all your rooms! They are not cluttered, and they are so beautifully decorated! I especially love the second floor and main left room. Feels like some goddess is gonna pop outta there xD and the symmetry in the room too!

Love the scenic view by hot spring, and illuminated arch/trees by train station. They are just stunning!

I am so inspired by your town! I think you are all finished. I can't point out anything for you to improve on xD haha well, I see your beach area is empty and maybe you can use some coconut/banana trees, but who cares. You have a gorgeous town! <3

Thank you so much for sharing your DA C:

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DA: 5500-4431-3754 - *Mayor Arabelle's house: main back room & basement is under major construction.. haven't really decided what to do yet so they are messy .__.; *Juliette's house - still getting all the expansions so not done yet either.

 

[KiloPatches]

~~ Mega_Cabbage ~~ Town of Nectere ~~

First thing I notice - Cherry bloossoms! So pretty <3 and woah your town tree is huge!! Very impressive xD I really like your path patterns. Something you don't see that often in other towns, so they look.. hmm original?.. flower patterns surrounding main path look nice too c: You see the water paths so often...so I like yours a lot.

By the way, have you thought about putting up modern bridge? well, I just thought that modern bridge might match your path better (graish-color), but suspension bridge still look nice. Maybe just the one north of the tower PWP? It will work for modern-town look. c:

Walking up to your house - wow. I love the symmetry!!! Scenery looks amazing just walking there. & I like all your rooms! They are not cluttered, and they are so beautifully decorated! I especially love the second floor and main left room. Feels like some goddess is gonna pop outta there xD and the symmetry in the room too!

Love the scenic view by hot spring, and illuminated arch/trees by train station. They are just stunning!

I am so inspired by your town! I think you are all finished. I can't point out anything for you to improve on xD haha well, I see your beach area is empty and maybe you can use some coconut/banana trees, but who cares. You have a gorgeous town! <3

Thank you so much for sharing your DA C:

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DA: 5500-4431-3754 - *Mayor Arabelle's house: main back room & basement is under major construction.. haven't really decided what to do yet so they are messy .__.; *Juliette's house - still getting all the expansions so not done yet either.

Reserving this town! Gonna work on it in the next hour or two! With Pictures! XD

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Dream Address is in Signature: 5400-2973-4369

 

[KiloPatches]

Review of Dawn!

Lovely town. Made a great first impression. Thank you for the gifts. A bear costume...???? Thanks...? Hahaha! I wore it anyways XD Your paths are very nice. I recently implemented paths. So whoever gives feedback on my town, let me know what you think of my paths if they work or not!

So! Pictures!

Here Are two of my favourite spots in your town!

Though I feel the picnic blanket could be placed somewhere quieter and peaceful than right by the train tracks.... like by the river or something!
I also like how you set up your campsite area.

HOUSES!
This is my favourite room in Juliette's house: I really like the Harvest/Pave combo. I did Gracie/Pave in my house. Both work great. Well done!

This is my favourite room in YOUR house! I LOVE the Cafe style. Its awesome. And adorable. And cozy.

And here is me meeting you!

This is what one of your villagers had to say about you!

CRITICISMS
I felt the balloon arch was a little out of place here. It seemed a bit kiddie to be placed next o Brewster's. Perhaps something more elegant like a flower arch or a wisteria trellis.

A pet peeve of mine is flowers on beaches. I am currently running a Dream Town Contest for 25 Million Bells (Reviews are now in process and submissions are closed and one of the criterion are flowers on beaches). I just don't feel they belong. That's just my personal opinion. I am not about to critique how people play, but to me an ideal town should have palm trees and shells on beaches, and no flowers or litter. That's it.

PRAISE!
I particularly like how you were consistent with the fairy tale theme. The bridges, benches, town hall, etc....
AND.... CONGRATS ON PERFECT TOWN STATUS!!!!
EXCELLENT placement of your flower clock! I couldn't imagine a better place! Well done!

That concludes my review! I hope you liked it and found it helpful! Wonderful town!

 

[Arabelle]

Review of Dawn!

Lovely town. Made a great first impression. Thank you for the gifts. A bear costume...???? Thanks...? Hahaha! I wore it anyways XD Your paths are very nice. I recently implemented paths. So whoever gives feedback on my town, let me know what you think of my paths if they work or not!

So! Pictures!

Here Are two of my favourite spots in your town!

That concludes my review! I hope you liked it and found it helpful! Wonderful town!

Oh wow. You must have spent forever uploading screenshots and stuff xD thank you so much for your time <3 and I love all the pictures!! And you gave me some good suggestions! thank you c: I placed the balloon arch & picnic blanket when I started my new town.. (that was like the few pwps I unlocked at the time lol) so yeah.. I'll probably put wisteria trellis by cafe like you suggested ^^* I'm really glad you liked the statue fountain. I just got that PWP done literally 2 days ago (as you can see, the trees still growing next to it lol) so I hadn't got any feedback on it yet ^^ My favorite spots in my town is by wisteria trellis & windmill ^.^* Oh and flowers on the beach... as you can see, they are like only open space for me to breed hybrids, so yeah... maybe once I'm completely done with landscaping I will put less /or no flowers on there c: Again, thank you so much your thorough review!! <3
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Please SKIP my town and review Ivy Wood next - DA : 5400 - 2973 - 4369

 

[queertactics]

afternoon bump! as sophie said, please review Ivy Wood at 5400 - 2973 - 4369

 

[queertactics]

I thought I'd done Ivy Wood before but looking back I haven't; so I'll take a shot at it!

Not gonna lie, I spent the majority of my time throwing beans at things. I've never had the bean item before!!! ! ! thEY INTERACT WITH OTHER ELEMENTS. they bounce off villagers and fixtures, and splash in water! and when you throw them on flowers the flowers act like they were just stepped on - that little bounce thing they do! I HAVE LOTS OF PICTURES OF THE BEANS.






Anyway I actually wrote a real review so here goes.

Each of your villagers has flowers around their house, sorted by color, and all of them look good with the exterior design of the homes; and they all have pathways leading to their houses. I like it when people make it obvious that they care enough about their villagers to have them make an impact on the town design.

There's a fire pit by your waterfall, west of Stinky's house. I think it would look better without the path surrounding it, but that might be a matter of opinion. Especially with the trees, bushes, and lake so close, I feel like you could make it more natural looking.

Here's a really nice area:



You also have a really nice Zen Bell up by your train tracks, but it's surrounded by trees! If it's a continuation of the Eastern theme you have on the direct opposite side of the Plaza (with the hot spring, Zen Garden, etc), I would use more bamboo to signify that. The eastern side of your Eastern theme area looks great, even with (or perhaps, especially because of) the dead bamboo chutes (shoots?), so I would cut your fruit trees, move them elsewhere, and continue with the bamboo.

That being said, I'd like to note on your appropriate use of benches. The White bench looks really good with the Zen Garden (especially in the snow!), and then to the south, the log bench looks really good amongst your fruit trees.

I love when people leave me coffee I love you

The lower half of the eastern section of your town is really nice. Simple, but very nice. The color coordination of the roses is good too - mixing the red and yellow intermittently amongst the fruit trees, whose fruit is primarily red and yellow anyway; then the orange roses to match the orange stripes on the lighthouse.

Again, up by Sprinkle's house, you have a hammoc and a water well surrounded by paths, and I really think they'd look better without.

I haven't seen Booker in forever! I liked Copper better when playing the earlier games, and when I had the option to choose between the pups, I chose Copper without second thought. In my new town, however, I'm gonna choose Booker when the option arises. I like the "classic" police feel. He reminds me of Barney Fife from the Andy Griffith Show. What a dorky pup.

INSIDES

Love Patches' entry room. The red customized exotic set is choice, and looks great with the fall wall and carpet. I'm also pretty impressed by the massive collection of unorderable furniture you have! I'm glad to see that you got that beach room/cafe completed! It looks really cute! The Brewstoid family must be having such a nice little vacation. And wow, Pave and Gracie! I love it when people combine sets, because it looks like these were made for eachother!

Pieman's entry room is a sight to be seen as well! Minimalist, Regal, and Tatami sets. Shockingly white, but beautiful. Why does your 7/11 have a printer tho? Your game/bug/mush room to the left (and basement, in a different way) felt kind of haphazardly thrown together, but maybe I'm just not seeing it. Very impressed by your music room!

A very beautiful town. Here are some miscellaneous pictures! Excuse my blank expression, this is a new file.

I think your grapes are frozen, look!



Timbra is currently in my town too, so this happened:



She's gonna talk to me about Unidentified Floor Oranges tomorrow, I garuntee it.

Thanks for posting!

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Instead of Nowhere, I'd like whoever comes next to review my new One Year Challenge town of Rancho! You'll see immediately that it's a major WIP, and there's like... nothing in it. I have lots of PWPs all planned out!! (the spaces reserved are for the Cafe, a recycling bin, bench... and then two solar pannels and a wind turbine between them) I'm also really proud of my paths - I made them. Dude. Dude making corners took me so long. Anyway, I'd love some suggestions!

That's Rancho, at 5300 - 5188 - 6515.

 

[KiloPatches]

Thanks for the review, queertactics!

Glad you liked the BEANS!!!!! HAHAHAHA That made me smile I loved the pics too

Comments.....

Fire Pit: That's a Memorial Site to Kidd. That just so happens to be where his house was. May his flame always burn in our hearts </3 I miss Kidd....
Lilly and Kody also have Memorials. Lily's is the Stone tablet surrounded by lilies and Kody's is the wooden log bench surrounded by blue pansies by Brewsters (Because he is a blue bear) I miss them all very much...... especially Lily....

My Zen Bell was my first PWP actually! I just never moved it. Too sentimental!

Pieman's 7/11 room has a Copy Machine.... cuz its a convenient store XD Convenient stores in Canada have Photocopiers! 5 cents!
Did you see his upstairs? OMG. He put a lot of work into it. This was before we found TBT and could earn bells like made and get sets easily. No he was hunting bugs on the island EVERY NIGHT to get that Gorgeous Set one piece at a time! Now we are both multi-bellionnaires.... XD Those were the good old days..... when making 300K a night was like SCORE!!!!!!

Anyway..... BUMP FOR RANCHO!!!! That's Rancho, at 5300 - 5188 - 6515.

 

[00jachna]

REWIEW OF RANCHO
I really ejoyed your paths! The little flowers (roses I asume) along the road looked so nice!
I liked how trees/flowers were also running along the paths from time to time.
I LOVE how you solved the "zig-zag" look you usualy get when you do paths sideways, it looked so good!
I kinda feel like your town is a little empty though (however since you're doing the OYC I could not expect anything "out of this world")
Your mayors house was kind of.... random. It had a cozy feel to it but it was just to odd

All in all I'd love to see how your town progresses over this year. I could only imagine how nice it will look when you get all the PWP's you want and stuff.

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MY DA: 6100-5101-5055 (also doing the OYC)


OYC: one year challenge

 

[Candy_Rose]

~reserved for 00jachna~

To whoever rates mine. I started at the end of November and While I got NL too early for me to do the "official" OYC, I'm doing the same thing myself.

Also, I just got the cube PWP suggestion today, I was thinking of putting it in Portia's spot once I get her to move, but I am open to any suggestions.


EDIT: Ahh, the nice town of Petoria! I love the waterway paths around the town tree and I'm really loving all your paths.

Your upper half seems really well developed! Also how did you get all your residents on the lower half of town? Must've took some work.

I did notice part of the path around the plaza was missing, but maybe it was just an accidental kick-up.

Jack's house: I love the first floor! I like what you did with the sleek furniture. Is it like a general living area?

The upstairs seems to be unfinished, but I can tell that you aren't planning on leaving it like that. I like the marshmallow chairs though. Cute!

The lower half seems undeveloped, but I can tell that you're still working on paths and such. I can't wait to see what you do with it!

On a side note, I LOVE how you have Sterling in your town. I have missed him when he moved out of my town so it was nice to visit him again.

One thing I noticed was to the west of your plaza, it seems bare compared to the rest of your upper half. Is that a dedicated PWP spot or something? I can see it as being a good potential place for the Caf?. (I don't remember if you had one or not.)

It seems odd to me that you're putting a second bridge right next to the first one, but are you moving the first one somewhere else?

Other than those points, you did a really good job so far with your town! I can't wait to see it progress more!

 

[00jachna]

~reserved for 00jachna~

To whoever rates mine. I started at the end of November and While I got NL too early for me to do the "official" OYC, I'm doing the same thing myself.

Also, I just got the cube PWP suggestion today, I was thinking of putting it in Portia's spot once I get her to move, but I am open to any suggestions.


EDIT: Ahh, the nice town of Petoria! I love the waterway paths around the town tree and I'm really loving all your paths.

Your upper half seems really well developed! Also how did you get all your residents on the lower half of town? Must've took some work.

I did notice part of the path around the plaza was missing, but maybe it was just an accidental kick-up.

Jack's house: I love the first floor! I like what you did with the sleek furniture. Is it like a general living area?

The upstairs seems to be unfinished, but I can tell that you aren't planning on leaving it like that. I like the marshmallow chairs though. Cute!

The lower half seems undeveloped, but I can tell that you're still working on paths and such. I can't wait to see what you do with it!

On a side note, I LOVE how you have Sterling in your town. I have missed him when he moved out of my town so it was nice to visit him again.

One thing I noticed was to the west of your plaza, it seems bare compared to the rest of your upper half. Is that a dedicated PWP spot or something? I can see it as being a good potential place for the Caf?. (I don't remember if you had one or not.)

It seems odd to me that you're putting a second bridge right next to the first one, but are you moving the first one somewhere else?

Other than those points, you did a really good job so far with your town! I can't wait to see it progress more!

Thanks for the review and yes I'm planning to move one of the bridges

Just wanna bump this c:

 

[Psicat]

Candy_Rose you have a nice town so far. I love the fun candy theme throughout the town. The town hall area looks cute with the reset center just bellow it. One suggestion would be to perhaps move your metal bench south of the reset center over to the right where the red and yellow tulips are, and the path wraps around. When you get the lighthouse PWP build it where the bench is now. As for the cube PWP, I think it would look good left of the town plaza in the corner where the path leads to the train station. You have enough room between the red roses and the pond to place the cube and surround it with roses if you want.

Rose's house. I love the kitchen and the upstairs bedroom, I love the white roco furniture. Nice bathroom as well. Wow, what a colourful back room! And, you're using the basement for your hat collection?

Jesse's house rather cute balloon room. Gives off the feel of a fun playroom or kids party room. But the upstairs robo room has a rather abrupt change in feel. I don't think the two go together well. Perhaps you should make an arcade upstairs.

Janine's house I love the ice room. Pretty mermaid room upstairs, but the room with the modern wood furniture, while nice and homy, throws off the fairy tale theme that makes the other two rooms work together.

Charlie's house is rather cute. I never would of thought orange and pink would work so well together.

Nice work so far though. It really has the potential to be a beautiful town.

 

[KiloPatches]

bumping this..... too tired to dream right now..... but will be back again for another review FOR SURE GUYS!

 

[00jachna]

Review of Twilight

TOWN:
I really enjoyed your paths. They seemed very high "quality" both the walking path and the water path. I really like your PWP's and their placement, they were just.. just great! I also feel like there is a good balance between the PWP's, bushes/trees and the flowers.
I did however feel like THE ROSES ARE TOO MANY! Switch things up, it'll look much better c:

Houses:

Gwen: Dang, that house be' creepy xD. I liked how some rooms recembeled torture chambers lol.
Marie: I really liked this school (?) It really looks like a real school
Crowley:I'm not sure what this house is suposed to resemble, but I like it
Jennifer:I like this house. No more words needed

This is my favorite part of your town

 

[Candy_Rose]

Candy_Rose you have a nice town so far. I love the fun candy theme throughout the town. The town hall area looks cute with the reset center just bellow it. One suggestion would be to perhaps move your metal bench south of the reset center over to the right where the red and yellow tulips are, and the path wraps around. When you get the lighthouse PWP build it where the bench is now. As for the cube PWP, I think it would look good left of the town plaza in the corner where the path leads to the train station. You have enough room between the red roses and the pond to place the cube and surround it with roses if you want.

Rose's house. I love the kitchen and the upstairs bedroom, I love the white roco furniture. Nice bathroom as well. Wow, what a colourful back room! And, you're using the basement for your hat collection?

Jesse's house rather cute balloon room. Gives off the feel of a fun playroom or kids party room. But the upstairs robo room has a rather abrupt change in feel. I don't think the two go together well. Perhaps you should make an arcade upstairs.

Janine's house I love the ice room. Pretty mermaid room upstairs, but the room with the modern wood furniture, while nice and homy, throws off the fairy tale theme that makes the other two rooms work together.

Charlie's house is rather cute. I never would of thought orange and pink would work so well together.

Nice work so far though. It really has the potential to be a beautiful town.

Hey, Thanks for your review and for your suggestion on where to place the cube PWP! I never thought about putting it where my red roses are.

The metal bench is where it is, because it's Sterling Park, in honor of Sterling that moved away. ;~; I plan to add more greenery around it. Once I unlock the fairy tale bench, I might do that where the red and yellow tulips are.

About Jesse's house, idk I was trying to go for a toy shop/sci-fi feel to it. Maybe I'll move the robo-furniture somewhere else and when I get card furniture, put it in one of the rooms. I want one of his rooms to be an arcade.

Yes! Rose's basement is where she is storing all her hats! There's just NOT enough room in her closet for all her outfits!

to whoever posts below me, please review 00Jachna's town Jack of Petoria

 

[Lou]

Hello! I have just updated my town ^^
It is Blossoming and there is the full moon
Will add my review shortly!


My dream address is : 6300-4351-1913[

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Review for 00jachna's Dream Town
(Please excuse my English ^^)

It is still a WIP like you said, but I think it is a very promising start!

I like how you organized your town; it definitvely gives more space to build and landscape in the future.
When I started my town Cotton, I was still inexperienced so everything has been filled a bit randomly.
I really like your villagers placement as well -is jelly- I wish mine were less scattered as it takes a lot of space

This was my favorite area ^^

Everything is nicely symmetrical and it reminds me of French Gardens (but also Disneyland? must be the bricks) It would be great to have more areas like this c: !

But, it would also be nice to break this symmetric, constructed street with some natural areas I think.. like a forest in the outskirts of town, some natural paths with clovers (I saw one near the bridge in construction), more dense and less symmetric trees...

I think your paths are really nice, and I like how you 'break' them in some corners; it looks much more interesting that way Very inspiring; might try that out in my future second town!

Rocks has always been handicapping for me, but I think you use them nicely^^

I have visited your house but I think it is still a WIP c: the room upstairs reminds me of a fruit salad bar!& I am sorry if I am wrong hehe

I wonder how this town will like next year I can't wait to see it complete ^^