Review the Dream Town above you!
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TheGreatBrain
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I would like to reserve Lou's town. I'll have it done in about an hour.
TheGreatBrain
Senior Member
Town of Cotton.
The cherry blossoms and paths are beautiful.I like the clothes you set out. I decided to take the ones on the right.
The bamboo looks really nice mixed in with the other trees, and they look great with the paths you have.The flowers and pwp's look amazing.
As I walk through your town, I realize I have been here before. Oh well, I'm really enjoying my second visit to your lovely town.
Tadanobu's house- I love this house. Very well done. The spa room on the left is great.
Lou's house- Wow, that main room is AWESOME. The whole house looks great. I love how you mix different walls, floors, and furniture pieces together, and end up with these unique and awesome rooms.
Great town. I'll be visiting again. Thanks for sharing.
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Farmland-4400-3561-6512
The cherry blossoms and paths are beautiful.I like the clothes you set out. I decided to take the ones on the right.
The bamboo looks really nice mixed in with the other trees, and they look great with the paths you have.The flowers and pwp's look amazing.
As I walk through your town, I realize I have been here before. Oh well, I'm really enjoying my second visit to your lovely town.
Tadanobu's house- I love this house. Very well done. The spa room on the left is great.
Lou's house- Wow, that main room is AWESOME. The whole house looks great. I love how you mix different walls, floors, and furniture pieces together, and end up with these unique and awesome rooms.
Great town. I'll be visiting again. Thanks for sharing.
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Farmland-4400-3561-6512
candiedapples
Senior Member
Reserving Farmland 
EDIT: Review of Farmland!
What a fun and charming town! You have some great villagers that I haven't seen often, like Celia and Sally. Loved your use of custom patterns for the crops such as carrots and pumpkins. I also enjoyed the custom signs outside as well as in the buildings. One of my favorite areas outside was the dandy dandelion patch. I also liked the bright color combos for the flowers and the orchards which included baskets of fruit. The houses were pretty inventive too. I thought it was so pretty to see the fruit thrmed rooms in the Muffin man's place. One room that stood out to me was the watermelon room where you used furniture customized with emeralds. Bo Peep - loved the county fair room. McDonald had great animal themed rooms like the Pig room. I thought the flower classroom in Mary's building was really creative. It's cool that you included the cockle shells outside her place too.
This is totally subjective, but I am not a big fan of paths and flowers on beaches. However it doesn't take away from the loveliness of your town at all, awesome job!!
Goldmoon: 5000-5119-5712
I tried to incorporate some of the feedback I got in my review, like adding better paths and developing the town more. However, there's still work to be done
EDIT: Review of Farmland!
What a fun and charming town! You have some great villagers that I haven't seen often, like Celia and Sally. Loved your use of custom patterns for the crops such as carrots and pumpkins. I also enjoyed the custom signs outside as well as in the buildings. One of my favorite areas outside was the dandy dandelion patch. I also liked the bright color combos for the flowers and the orchards which included baskets of fruit. The houses were pretty inventive too. I thought it was so pretty to see the fruit thrmed rooms in the Muffin man's place. One room that stood out to me was the watermelon room where you used furniture customized with emeralds. Bo Peep - loved the county fair room. McDonald had great animal themed rooms like the Pig room. I thought the flower classroom in Mary's building was really creative. It's cool that you included the cockle shells outside her place too.
This is totally subjective, but I am not a big fan of paths and flowers on beaches. However it doesn't take away from the loveliness of your town at all, awesome job!!
Goldmoon: 5000-5119-5712
I tried to incorporate some of the feedback I got in my review, like adding better paths and developing the town more. However, there's still work to be done
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MiniatureTalent
College. Sucks.
REVIEW OF GOLDMOON:
First, I like how you have clothes out, and how you can mix and match what you'd like to wear. The upper left is very peaceful, and I think you did a good job landscaping it. I personally, would probably add some more flowers, but it looks very nice regardless. Something that I also noticed right away is how nice and symmetrical everything looks. You have a nice assortment of things to play with up near the train station, which I like too. Your paths are very pretty, and match the town well. Down towards the bottom of the map there seems to be a playground type area, but it also seems very small to me. You might want to think about expanding that in the future. The exterior of your house is very cute, and again it matches the town very well. I like the inside as well, I think it is well designed without relying too much on any specific set of furninture. Overall I think your town is coming along very nicely, and it is very cute in my opinion. Honestly I can't really think of any advice besides to keep doing what you're doing
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I've never really done a lot of focusing on landscaping and such, so I'd really like some feedback or ideas on that
First, I like how you have clothes out, and how you can mix and match what you'd like to wear. The upper left is very peaceful, and I think you did a good job landscaping it. I personally, would probably add some more flowers, but it looks very nice regardless. Something that I also noticed right away is how nice and symmetrical everything looks. You have a nice assortment of things to play with up near the train station, which I like too. Your paths are very pretty, and match the town well. Down towards the bottom of the map there seems to be a playground type area, but it also seems very small to me. You might want to think about expanding that in the future. The exterior of your house is very cute, and again it matches the town very well. I like the inside as well, I think it is well designed without relying too much on any specific set of furninture. Overall I think your town is coming along very nicely, and it is very cute in my opinion. Honestly I can't really think of any advice besides to keep doing what you're doing
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I've never really done a lot of focusing on landscaping and such, so I'd really like some feedback or ideas on that
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TheGreatBrain
Senior Member
Thanks candieapples for the nice review. Most people don't understand the shells outside of ms. Mary's house. I'm so glad that you did.
Thanks you for the nice review. Yeah, I do tend to use roses a lot since they are my favorite flowers. As far as the houses Gwen is a creepy hospital run by a mad scientist/doctor. Crowley is supposed to live in Aziraphal's book shop, with his flat upstairs, I'm also thinking of making a mini Garden of Eden in the basement. I'm glad you liked Marie's school house and Jennifer's castle.
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ANDREW MCMAHON
(this is my first ever dream review, so i'm sorry if it sounds disjointed or not very thorough)
Review of Milagros:
I really love the paths, they're so pretty and natural. The town layout is really awesome, I like where the bridges are and where the villagers houses are, they're all so evenly spaced out. The northern part of the town is pretty barren with a lack of PWPs, but I like the cedar trees and how they're in nice rows. I like the exterior of the first player's house (the light blue house), and while the room is quite crowded, it seems pretty cozy. Overall, I think that your town needs more PwPs, and maybe paths that extend to all of the villager's homes? But I really like the town layout and the direction you're going towards, the bushes and flowers are a nice addition, and more flowers would be really cool.
EDIT: i saw that you asked for some advice so maybe someone else could help with that because i'm new on landscaping too, but i think that lots of flowers and stuff would be nice, but i'm a sucker for hybrids anyways
i hope that was an okay review haha, i really like your town, it's so neat and organized!
my DA is 5300-5153-6427, and fair warning: i just started caring about what my town looked like, therefore only certain areas look like what i want them too, and some paths are screwed up because of the villager plotting. i never really bothered to plot reset, which explains most of the terrible plots. i'm still working on my town, it's a work in progress so i'd like to receive feedback on the direction my town is going, thank you! oh and the paths are not mine. i accidentally told luna that it'd be okay for people to take my paths so the credit goes to the creator. if you want the paths, here's the link! http://0e0.boo.jp/log/eid81.html
Review of Milagros:
I really love the paths, they're so pretty and natural. The town layout is really awesome, I like where the bridges are and where the villagers houses are, they're all so evenly spaced out. The northern part of the town is pretty barren with a lack of PWPs, but I like the cedar trees and how they're in nice rows. I like the exterior of the first player's house (the light blue house), and while the room is quite crowded, it seems pretty cozy. Overall, I think that your town needs more PwPs, and maybe paths that extend to all of the villager's homes? But I really like the town layout and the direction you're going towards, the bushes and flowers are a nice addition, and more flowers would be really cool.
EDIT: i saw that you asked for some advice so maybe someone else could help with that because i'm new on landscaping too, but i think that lots of flowers and stuff would be nice, but i'm a sucker for hybrids anyways
i hope that was an okay review haha, i really like your town, it's so neat and organized!
my DA is 5300-5153-6427, and fair warning: i just started caring about what my town looked like, therefore only certain areas look like what i want them too, and some paths are screwed up because of the villager plotting. i never really bothered to plot reset, which explains most of the terrible plots. i'm still working on my town, it's a work in progress so i'd like to receive feedback on the direction my town is going, thank you! oh and the paths are not mine. i accidentally told luna that it'd be okay for people to take my paths so the credit goes to the creator. if you want the paths, here's the link! http://0e0.boo.jp/log/eid81.html
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~ Town Of Candylnd ~
When I woke up I noticed that it was a work in progress but as i looked around i saw the beautiful path that lead to the buildings that were decorated with colourful flowers, Im Loving the pwp placements especially the cafe, it has a bech near it, which makes a cute place to hangout.
I am Loving the bottom part of the town, it look so developed and well put together, I'm pretty sure it would look fabulous in spring. Also I LOVE Your Villagers especially Poppy she is adorable!
But Im pretty Sure as time passes by The Town Will Look So Beautiful, I just Know It! Good Luck.
When I woke up I noticed that it was a work in progress but as i looked around i saw the beautiful path that lead to the buildings that were decorated with colourful flowers, Im Loving the pwp placements especially the cafe, it has a bech near it, which makes a cute place to hangout.
I am Loving the bottom part of the town, it look so developed and well put together, I'm pretty sure it would look fabulous in spring. Also I LOVE Your Villagers especially Poppy she is adorable!
But Im pretty Sure as time passes by The Town Will Look So Beautiful, I just Know It! Good Luck.
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Mega_Cabbage
Meh
Reviewing Pucchin!
Wow! I woke up to a wonderful plaza filled with white and pink bunnies! There is a blank space left by a tent on the right however. I loved how you updated during the cherry blossom season! It really makes the paths look magical. Your town is covered in roses. It's a very nice town! The only critique I would give would be to combine more of the PWPs together like you did with the benches and street lamps to create more unity.
The little study in the basement of Marcus's house was my favorite room! You even have a hidden sitting area behind the bookcases. I would suggest putting some music in some of the rooms. They really set the mood.
DA: 4600-2145-6163
Wow! I woke up to a wonderful plaza filled with white and pink bunnies! There is a blank space left by a tent on the right however. I loved how you updated during the cherry blossom season! It really makes the paths look magical. Your town is covered in roses. It's a very nice town! The only critique I would give would be to combine more of the PWPs together like you did with the benches and street lamps to create more unity.
The little study in the basement of Marcus's house was my favorite room! You even have a hidden sitting area behind the bookcases. I would suggest putting some music in some of the rooms. They really set the mood.
DA: 4600-2145-6163
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REVIEW OF NECTERE
When I think of Nectere I
All PWP's are placed beautifuly and in a clever way! My favorites were the zen-bell and the tower thingie, it was simply stunning.
AND OH MY GAWD, HOW DID YOU SCORE THAT MAP!? Urrgh, I'm getting the urge for reseting now >.<
I usually don't bother so much with the houses, I usually find them "bland" or boring but yours was incredible! it just had "it". It's kind of hard to explain, it's really something one has to experience first hand. (BTW I'm soooooooo stealing the flower arrengement you had in your side room)
All in all I give your town 8/8 M8
think "WOAH! Is that even possible!?". Your town is simply stunning! The mix of beatuful paths, faboules flowers and awsome trees/bushes makes for a town I have soon to forget! There really isn't a way of expressing the beauty that is the town of Nectere. All PWP's are placed beautifuly and in a clever way! My favorites were the zen-bell and the tower thingie, it was simply stunning.
AND OH MY GAWD, HOW DID YOU SCORE THAT MAP!? Urrgh, I'm getting the urge for reseting now >.<
I usually don't bother so much with the houses, I usually find them "bland" or boring but yours was incredible! it just had "it". It's kind of hard to explain, it's really something one has to experience first hand. (BTW I'm soooooooo stealing the flower arrengement you had in your side room)
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KiloPatches
Senior Member
bumping this! I will say Nectere IS beautiful. I reviewed it for my Dream Town contest (which is still in progress!)
Dream of 00Jachna's town! (unfortunately, I can't do this one at the moment.... SOMEONE DO IT!!!!) Keep this thread going, its AWESOME! queertactics is awesome for doing this!
Dream of 00Jachna's town! (unfortunately, I can't do this one at the moment.... SOMEONE DO IT!!!!) Keep this thread going, its AWESOME! queertactics is awesome for doing this!
The Winter Wonderland Ivy Wood
As I woke up i was awakened by a massive gift galore, of course i opened all of them, i used them i my adventure it was fun, next i looked around town, as i wandered, i noticed some beautifully placed pwps like the zen bell, but one thing i noticed is that some paths don't finish but it look fine, next i went to the villagers, they LOOK ADORABLE!!, but I'm excited to see the new villagers that you invited in Im Loving the village feel happening in the left side of town, it look so well put together.
And Lastly the BEACH!! as your pet peeve i know you wouldn't put any thing except shells and trees it was beautiful mixed with the aurora so it was perfect.!
10/10
As I woke up i was awakened by a massive gift galore, of course i opened all of them, i used them i my adventure it was fun, next i looked around town, as i wandered, i noticed some beautifully placed pwps like the zen bell, but one thing i noticed is that some paths don't finish but it look fine, next i went to the villagers, they LOOK ADORABLE!!, but I'm excited to see the new villagers that you invited in
Im Loving the village feel happening in the left side of town, it look so well put together.And Lastly the BEACH!! as your pet peeve i know you wouldn't put any thing except shells and trees
it was beautiful mixed with the aurora so it was perfect.!10/10
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Review for Royce's town Pucchin c:
You have a cute town name! Woke up to a very impressive view. Cherry blossoms <3 You must have spent so much time doing your paths! It looks super nice c: I love your town map too! I see there's only one bridge, but since it's in the very middle, it actually works c: thank you for leaving the presents by the way. I actually ate the ice cream cuz I'm in a dream!! (Yes I accidently ate one in actual game before hahah)
I have 4 same villagers hehe.. Too bad Erik doesn't remember me D: he was the last one to move out in my town.. He's talking to me like I'm a stranger T_T oh well >_<.. Omg Apple is so cute! My first time talking to Apple in game I think. So tiny with chubby cheeks!!!
I love how you decorated your PWPs so beautifully! ^_^ like the flower arch & the heart shape you made with carnations c: (how about making the patterned stump next to the heart? If you want, I could help you with my silver axe xD). Just a thought. It still looks gorgeous.
Have you unlocked the fairy-tale bench & clock yet? I think they will match your town theme, and with all white & pink flowers c:
Woah, I LOVE what you did with your beach! Best looking I've seen in dreams! Haha great job c: I'd love to take naps for hours on the hammock by the ramp lol
Maples house- exterior, landscaping around the house and the white rococo set go well together! Very cute c: now I'm craving for sweets lol
Marcus house- aw I love music boxes c: what's playing in the second floor on music box?? I like the cafe themed room and 2F with princess set the best c: all your rooms are nicely decorated.
I really enjoyed dreaming of your town! It was so adorable. Now I feel like my beach & dock is such a mess. I need to work on mine.. >_< Thank you for sharing your dream address ^_^
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My DA is 5500-5128-3236.
You have a cute town name! Woke up to a very impressive view. Cherry blossoms <3 You must have spent so much time doing your paths! It looks super nice c: I love your town map too! I see there's only one bridge, but since it's in the very middle, it actually works c: thank you for leaving the presents by the way. I actually ate the ice cream cuz I'm in a dream!! (Yes I accidently ate one in actual game before hahah)
I have 4 same villagers hehe.. Too bad Erik doesn't remember me D: he was the last one to move out in my town.. He's talking to me like I'm a stranger T_T oh well >_<.. Omg Apple is so cute! My first time talking to Apple in game I think. So tiny with chubby cheeks!!!
I love how you decorated your PWPs so beautifully! ^_^ like the flower arch & the heart shape you made with carnations c: (how about making the patterned stump next to the heart? If you want, I could help you with my silver axe xD). Just a thought. It still looks gorgeous.
Have you unlocked the fairy-tale bench & clock yet? I think they will match your town theme, and with all white & pink flowers c:
Woah, I LOVE what you did with your beach! Best looking I've seen in dreams! Haha great job c: I'd love to take naps for hours on the hammock by the ramp lol
Maples house- exterior, landscaping around the house and the white rococo set go well together! Very cute c: now I'm craving for sweets lol
Marcus house- aw I love music boxes c: what's playing in the second floor on music box?? I like the cafe themed room and 2F with princess set the best c: all your rooms are nicely decorated.
I really enjoyed dreaming of your town! It was so adorable. Now I feel like my beach & dock is such a mess. I need to work on mine.. >_< Thank you for sharing your dream address ^_^
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My DA is 5500-5128-3236.
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candiedapples
Senior Member
EDIT:
Review of 00jachna's town!
I know you're busy working on your town, and it really has lots of potential! You have a great map, with tons of open land to the north for PWPs. I also like the long stretch of beach to the south. The villagers are all perfect! Sterling the eagle is becoming a favorite of mine. The house placements are done well too. I like the structures you have up so far. The campsite fits in well in the strip of land up north next to the waterfall. My fave area is where you have the two fountaind next to each other, and bounded by bushes, apple trees, roses, and cedars. The two zen bells you've got look good together too. One thing that i would've liked to see was the grassy tiles instead of the wooden ones you've got near the houses in the south. Anyway, just keep at it because your town is looking cute so far!
To the following poster, please skip my town (since mine just got reviewed a couple of days ago) and dream of the town belonging to xsophiex: 5500-5128-3236
Review of 00jachna's town!
I know you're busy working on your town, and it really has lots of potential! You have a great map, with tons of open land to the north for PWPs. I also like the long stretch of beach to the south. The villagers are all perfect! Sterling the eagle is becoming a favorite of mine. The house placements are done well too. I like the structures you have up so far. The campsite fits in well in the strip of land up north next to the waterfall. My fave area is where you have the two fountaind next to each other, and bounded by bushes, apple trees, roses, and cedars. The two zen bells you've got look good together too. One thing that i would've liked to see was the grassy tiles instead of the wooden ones you've got near the houses in the south. Anyway, just keep at it because your town is looking cute so far!
To the following poster, please skip my town (since mine just got reviewed a couple of days ago) and dream of the town belonging to xsophiex: 5500-5128-3236
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IGNORE ME
I didn't quite Catch what you meant with this senctence "One thing that i would've liked to see was the grassy tiles instead of the wooden ones you've got near the houses in the South[/I]"
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queertactics
Senior Member
nighttime bump! next up is xsophiex's town at 5500-5128-3236
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