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[Punchies]

Haven't visited your town yet, but I will once I get back home. Is it ok if I get a review for my town? . DA: 4100-2243-6150

 

[Ace Marvel]

come to my dream town

Wow so red! I really like the references to other games, and how your villager houses are spot on, you really planned this through, and there is nothing really I can say, your town is awesome and its already full of stuff; this is not a suggestion because is your town theme color, but the red is overwhelming at times.

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Hello! I'm currently dreaming of Vanille right now! I'm not super knowledgeable on dream towns, I'm only saying this on my personal esthetic - what I would do were it my town.

You've got a great start! I know you probably have big plans, but are waiting to get them out. For instance, I knew what I wanted, but I had to wait for the funds, and more specifically, the villagers to suggest the PWPs in the first place. So I'll say I like the direction Vanille is going.

I would add my third bridge by Freya's house, to make checking the campsite easier. Also, I wish I had built up my campsite more, so I'd add the firepit and log on one side, the chair and cot on the other, maybe the hammock near the clump of fir trees to the left. Then I'd add more fir trees and holly bushes in that area to make it feel more woodsy. Also, I'd lay a path to it (even a dirt path - if you're not up making your own I saw a qr code one once.

I like the shrub lined paths. I also know how time consuming and tedios that is (currently doing something similar myself). It looks really classy. I also like the pathing you chose. For me, I'd leave the plaza naked just because it's a pain to refill the tiles after an event or Redd comes to town (I can see the outline of his tent).

I'm interested to see what you do with the big area between Sydney and Marshall's houses and the river. With that much open space, I might do a playground - jungle gym, tires, sandbox, etc - or maybe a mini monument tour. I like where your coffee shop is, and police station. Overall it looks pretty good, lot of potential for some creative ideas.

My dream address is in my sig. Playing around with my town (ignore the complete disater that is Jane's messy house, I needed her inventory space briefly and forgot put it back. I'm on that soon... Also I just got rid of a PWP and have space for one more, though which one? I'm open to suggestions!

Wow your town is beautiful, it feels like a town (I now it supposed to be a town, but its something that can be a real town), I like your paths a lot, and the way you used the rock pattern to make the train station and re-tail more even, (Ill probably do that), also the way you arrange your plants and trees, not too little but not to much, perfect balance.

A suggestion would be maybe fix some little parts of your paths arount the houses, It will be hard since you dont have a lot of space but maybe a diferent route, also maybe (I don't know if it's possible) change the townhall, because I dont feel modern in your town, it gave me a more tradicional vibe [maybe im crazy].

But over all its a really nice town, Thanks for your suggestions, hopee I helped a little.

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Haven't visited your town yet, but I will once I get back home. Is it ok if I get a review for my town? . DA: 4100-2243-6150

I will visit yours tomorrow, I promise.

 

[CrimsonFireWolf]

Wow so red! I really like the references to other games, and how your villager houses are spot on, you really planned this through, and there is nothing really I can say, your town is awesome and its already full of stuff; this is not a suggestion because is your town theme color, but the red is overwhelming at times.

Thank you for your feedback, I been getting a lot of good review for my town if you want to know

 

[Ace Marvel]

Thank you for your feedback, I been getting a lot of good review for my town if you want to know

Thats great, you are a very creative person and you like Arcanine so thats awesome!!!

 

[nannu-crossing]

I would love to check it out! I don't have a dream address yet though hehe uvu; and I'm not exactly a master landscaper.
Though I DO LOVE CHECKING OUT TOWNS ; v ; I'll check it out in a sec!!

 

[Blondiexo]

I just went through your town, and I feel like you've made good progress! I like the type of path you have, but personally I like a border on paths so they have more dimension. The bushes you've put around your paths are starting to looking really good! I would suggest more organization in your trees/flowers! The villagers you have are very nice, too :3

If you look at my town, I'm working on organizing my flowers right now so they're kinda everywhere lol

 

[amemome]

visiting!!

first thing! Great choice of brick for your path! I think it's so nice how it looks, especially when "zig-zag" edged right near the bridge! Your villagers' houses are so nicely aligned and it looks very clean in your town.

The huge area sectioned off by bushes... I'm curious as to what you'd like to do in it! You currently have a few assorted trees... Maybe you're aiming for a grove of some kind? I think that'd look awesome!

Love the trees that outline the paths on the south half of town. They look very organized and pretty~ I love what you have going on there! Maybe just a few more trees or PWPs or buildings and that empty space would fill up quickly!

Overall, perhaps a few more well placed PWPs and flowers will help the town look more vibrant! It seems a bit sparse right now, but of course, that means more room for playing around.

Keep up the great work! It pays off in the end!

 

[Ace Marvel]

Haven't visited your town yet, but I will once I get back home. Is it ok if I get a review for my town? . DA: 4100-2243-6150

Your town, is really pretty, I love the desing of your paths, reminds me of cookies, also i really like tha way you use bushes (darn you 13 rule) still really pretty, overall is a really nice town.

One suggest will be the white chair in the bottom left corner ruins your path, but I like it end on the cliff where you can jump, also I felt some parts where a little just flowers without a purpose, so maybe arrange them a little. Good luck

 

[PastelMorgue]

I'll visit yours right now! My DA is in my signature

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I really like the layout of your town. I would fill in the tiles in the plaza, and organize your flowers a bit more. I really like patterns. The lilies near the station/main street look really great. I really like how isolated your campsite is. I'd put some more trees or bushes around it perhaps. Cedar trees would look great I think if you put up a few more PWP's and organize your flowers and plant a few more trees it would look great.