Paradox Chapter 21 UP!

[Gabby]

Ok i just finshed it.....I like it.My brain just hurts from the long chapter.

 

[Tyler]

Okay I have a 3 day weekend, I'm going to read it from start to now get all caught up and all.

Ok i just finshed it.....I like it.My brain just hurts from the long chapter.

It's not long, it's 12 pages. o.o

 

[Gabby]

Okay I have a 3 day weekend, I'm going to read it from start to now get all caught up and all.

Ok i just finshed it.....I like it.My brain just hurts from the long chapter.

It's not long, it's 12 pages. o.o

I dont likr reading lontg things that much..

 

[Nate]

I read the first couple paragraphs, I'm so lazy. They all have wierd names like Jericho and something that looks like Narnia?

 

[JJRamone2]

moar secks plz

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[Nate]

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[Propaganda Man]

I'll be reading it tomorrow. I'm going to start to learn a new language tomorrow (c++ if anyone cares >.>) so if I get that done before dinner starts (whole family is gettin' together) I'll read it and give my thoughts.

Also, this is a notice that I won't be here much at all because I'm swamped with school and learning the basics of making games.

 

[UltraByte]

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I'm starting to question the reason you go on the internet.

 

[JJRamone2]

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Plz.

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I'm starting to question the reason you go on the internet.

Porn. It was never a secret.

 

[Nate]

moar secks plz

Plz.

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I'm starting to question the reason you go on the internet.

Porn. It was never a secret.

 

[UltraByte]

moar secks plz

Plz.

plz plz omg.

I'm starting to question the reason you go on the internet.

Porn. It was never a secret.

I had a feeling...

 

[Propaganda Man]

moar secks plz

Plz.

plz plz omg.

I'm starting to question the reason you go on the internet.

Porn. It was never a secret.

I like that smile. Its cute


:wub:

Anyways, I would say something funny but its too inappropriate (even for where this topic is heading)

 

[JJH]

moar secks plz

Plz.

plz plz omg.

I'm starting to question the reason you go on the internet.

Porn. It was never a secret.

I like that smile. Its cute


:wub:

Anyways, I would say something funny but its too inappropriate (even for where this topic is heading)

Yes could we get back to the story? Maybe another chapter would help change the subject?

 

[Bulerias]

Alright. NEXT CHAPTER EVERYONE. D: It's way shorter than the one I posted first. In this chapter, we learn a little of Fior's intents and why he is... who he is. We also learn a little more about The Exiled... more specifically, their goal. Also, I think this is one of my favorite chapters. Alejandra shows someone who's boss. <3

Chapter 20

 

[Gabby]

moar secks plz

Plz.

plz plz omg.

I'm starting to question the reason you go on the internet.

I loled that.

 

[Bulerias]

Guys, could we maybe... start discussing the novel itself? D:

 

[JJH]

So Fior is ebil?!? Good chapter, left many unanswered questions that I'm sure will be answered later. Right?

BTW Gabby, I believe many of us were trying to end that conversation.

 

[Bulerias]

So Fior is ebil?!? Good chapter, left many unanswered questions that I'm sure will be answered later. Right?

BTW Gabby, I believe many of us were trying to end that conversation.

Fior is... a complicated character. The thirst for honor is slowly corrupting him, but... well, let me just say that all questions will be answered by the end, though.

Also... that old man near the end could, may I say, become an important character. Don't take my word for it though... just keep reading.

 

[JJH]

So Fior is ebil?!? Good chapter, left many unanswered questions that I'm sure will be answered later. Right?

BTW Gabby, I believe many of us were trying to end that conversation.

Fior is... a complicated character. The thirst for honor is slowly corrupting him, but... well, let me just say that all questions will be answered by the end, though.

Also... that old man near the end could, may I say, become an important character. Don't take my word for it though... just keep reading.

Like so many people in the real world these days... Not caring who they strike down just so they can be on top.

And I assumed the old man would return, I think he may be one of the dieities Alejandra was talking about. Am I correct?

 

[Grawr]

Fior is pretty awesome. I've got a new favorite character. =o

Once again, great chapter.