Makkine the really bad dream town inspector!

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I'll review your dream town for a fee of..0 bells!

Just post it and I will critique it. Even if it is a work-in-progress or finished town.

Note: if you want an actual BIG critique, tell me. :3

Post your dream codes ^.^
 
my dream town is 4900-3422-6818
come inspect it!!!


PLZ!

Lets see..
First of all, I loved this face-board.
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Second, I also like this well area~ I wonder whats down there?
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Overall, your town is neat and normal. If you want a "no-paths town" I recommend more tree's, and flowers.
Also more pwp's!
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8/10.​
 
Oooh i'd love hear opinions from other ^^

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New Leaf - Dream Address
6700-2364-3876
 
i'm not exactly done yet, as i'm waiting for my dreamies to move in and more hybrids to grow and more pwps to be suggested, but if you would like to visit my town, please do so. c:

dreamc: 4200-2959-7153
 
my dream address is in my signature!! it's a work in progress!! so if something seems off to you, im probably working to improve it!! tips and suggestions are always welcome!!

a little note: i've had my game for a little over a month. tell me how i doing!!
 
DREAM ADDRESS: 4900 - 2348 - 6029
Pocky's house (mine) is still a work in progress, the 2nd floor and basement are currently just used for storage
the basement and 2nd floor on Pastrami's home are also works in progress, don't like them right now
 
I guess i'm in need of a bit of critique and improvement suggestions. DC in sig! :)
(the clothing patterns SW of the plaza are just where I need to put roses :3)
 
My town is still a work in progress, as I'm waiting for all my dreamies to move in and to finish all the PWPs I want before putting down paths. c:
But any suggestions are greatly appreciated! Dream code in sig !
 
Lets see..
First of all, I loved this face-board.
DQlN5tr.png

Second, I also like this well area~ I wonder whats down there?
UNvNlYq.png

Overall, your town is neat and normal. If you want a "no-paths town" I recommend more tree's, and flowers.
Also more pwp's!
tDV4vPm.png

8/10.​

Thanks!!
 
Please do mine when/if you have time :)
5200-2104-8713
Excuse the lack of hybrids! Most of them are growing on the beach :)
 
Oooh i'd love hear opinions from other ^^

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New Leaf - Dream Address
6700-2364-3876
akeland
Now, I have a quick thing to say. Your town felt a bit cluttered to me.
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But my favorite, most FAVORITE part of your town is this area.
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Now, I found this part very unique. I just loved how the Jacob's Ladder's just fit in with the bamboo, the stone paths, and those little fruit in the background.
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This area bothered me a bit. Its just the big empty spaces. But, that's okay if you have lots of trades.
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Overall, akeland is a pretty town, but it seems a bit cluttered and a tiny bit lopsided with the paths. But no worries, your town was beautiful with all of the flowers and trees.
9/10.​
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also an update: thank you for rating this 5 stars !! o//o i didnt expect to get so many wanted reviews, ill get started right away!!
 
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I would love a critique. Feel free to visit my dream town if you have the time. My dream code is in my signature.
 
If you have the time please check mine out :) DC is under the signature spoiler below! Thank you for doing this~
 
Mine will probably feel a little cluttered to you, but you are more than welcome to let me know your opinion. I kind of like the close feeling, for myself. The code is in my signature :)
 
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updates for everyone:

i got off of the computer, but im going offline for a bit.

also, i love it when its cozy towns. so ill be up tomorrow!
 
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