Makkine the really bad dream town inspector!
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Lets see..
First of all, I loved this face-board.
Second, I also like this well area~ I wonder whats down there?
Overall, your town is neat and normal. If you want a "no-paths town" I recommend more tree's, and flowers.
Also more pwp's!
8/10.
Second, I also like this well area~ I wonder whats down there?
Overall, your town is neat and normal. If you want a "no-paths town" I recommend more tree's, and flowers.
Also more pwp's!
8/10.
vintage-rabbit
lame
my dream address is in my signature!! it's a work in progress!! so if something seems off to you, im probably working to improve it!! tips and suggestions are always welcome!!
a little note: i've had my game for a little over a month. tell me how i doing!!
a little note: i've had my game for a little over a month. tell me how i doing!!
DREAM ADDRESS: 4900 - 2348 - 6029
Pocky's house (mine) is still a work in progress, the 2nd floor and basement are currently just used for storage
the basement and 2nd floor on Pastrami's home are also works in progress, don't like them right now
Pocky's house (mine) is still a work in progress, the 2nd floor and basement are currently just used for storage
the basement and 2nd floor on Pastrami's home are also works in progress, don't like them right now
JellyBeans
only half awake
I guess i'm in need of a bit of critique and improvement suggestions. DC in sig! 
(the clothing patterns SW of the plaza are just where I need to put roses :3)
(the clothing patterns SW of the plaza are just where I need to put roses :3)
My town is still a work in progress, as I'm waiting for all my dreamies to move in and to finish all the PWPs I want before putting down paths. c:
But any suggestions are greatly appreciated! Dream code in sig !
But any suggestions are greatly appreciated! Dream code in sig !
Lets see..
First of all, I loved this face-board.
Second, I also like this well area~ I wonder whats down there?
Overall, your town is neat and normal. If you want a "no-paths town" I recommend more tree's, and flowers.
Also more pwp's!
8/10.
Thanks!!
akeland
Now, I have a quick thing to say. Your town felt a bit cluttered to me.
But my favorite, most FAVORITE part of your town is this area.
Now, I found this part very unique. I just loved how the Jacob's Ladder's just fit in with the bamboo, the stone paths, and those little fruit in the background.
This area bothered me a bit. Its just the big empty spaces. But, that's okay if you have lots of trades.
Overall, akeland is a pretty town, but it seems a bit cluttered and a tiny bit lopsided with the paths. But no worries, your town was beautiful with all of the flowers and trees.
9/10.
~~Now, I have a quick thing to say. Your town felt a bit cluttered to me.
But my favorite, most FAVORITE part of your town is this area.
Now, I found this part very unique. I just loved how the Jacob's Ladder's just fit in with the bamboo, the stone paths, and those little fruit in the background.
This area bothered me a bit. Its just the big empty spaces. But, that's okay if you have lots of trades.
Overall, akeland is a pretty town, but it seems a bit cluttered and a tiny bit lopsided with the paths. But no worries, your town was beautiful with all of the flowers and trees.
9/10.
also an update: thank you for rating this 5 stars !! o//o i didnt expect to get so many wanted reviews, ill get started right away!!
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kiwi34fruit
Senior Member
I would love a critique. Feel free to visit my dream town if you have the time. My dream code is in my signature.
RisingSun
Senior Member
Mine will probably feel a little cluttered to you, but you are more than welcome to let me know your opinion. I kind of like the close feeling, for myself. The code is in my signature
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dreamysnowx
Hello. :}
Would you mind reviewing my dream town ? >< it's in my signature! <3 thank you ~
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