gimme dreams to review!

[dizzy bone]

Bored and want to work on my dreamer badge. I've been lurking similar threads and wanted to start my own. Post your dream here and I'll give you a quick review

If you guys want me to specifically check out your rooms, please tell me so. I usually don't go into houses, or I'll only check out the main room.

If you'd like to view mine and tell me what you think as well, I'd appreciate it. My DA (W.I.P) is 4000-3601-9193

Thanks!

 

[Yui Z]

You can review mine if you want :3 but it's a W.I.P

 

[Cory]

My dream address is 400-3244-4562

 

[dizzy bone]

Review of Redwood

+ I love the time of day, 6-7ish is the most peaceful <3
+ I love the bonfire area! So many hybrids
+ The jungle gym area next to Del's house is also really nice. Maybe you could put the tire PWP there as well.
+ I really love the pattern you used for your alpine furniture Makes me wish I waited to get the ACNL 3ds

- I think you used too many bushes to surround the paths in some areas. It gets a little cramped. Also the paths are a little hard to follow because they cut/turn abruptly and are restricted by the bushes. The path is my biggest concern in my opinion

Overall I enjoyed your town. I think some areas gets overwhelmed by hybrids and bushes and it might benefit to have more PWPs in those areas. Lovely town! It's coming along well I think.

 

[Carina]

my dream address is in my signature

 

[Yui Z]

Review of Redwood

+ I love the time of day, 6-7ish is the most peaceful <3
+ I love the bonfire area! So many hybrids
+ The jungle gym area next to Del's house is also really nice. Maybe you could put the tire PWP there as well.
+ I really love the pattern you used for your alpine furniture Makes me wish I waited to get the ACNL 3ds

- I think you used too many bushes to surround the paths in some areas. It gets a little cramped. Also the paths are a little hard to follow because they cut/turn abruptly and are restricted by the bushes. The path is my biggest concern in my opinion

Overall I enjoyed your town. I think some areas gets overwhelmed by hybrids and bushes and it might benefit to have more PWPs in those areas. Lovely town! It's coming along well I think.

Thanks for the review :3 Like I said it's a W.I.P and I planned on getting rid of bushes today since I have a better idea to surround my paths haha. I agree with you on the flowers and I plan on adding more PWPs too

Again, thanks ^-^

 

[Sumemr]

Review mine please? It's still a work in progress & I'm not adding paths until I get my last 2 dream villagers to move in xD
DA in sig c:

 

[dizzy bone]

Review of Polis

Hard to review this one because it's so W.I.P.

PWP placement is really random (for example, the metal bench right in front of the bridge) and feels empty around most of them. Maybe add more trees if you're going for a natural look. I love that your town flag is Deli. Monkey's are super under appreciated T.T Your map is also really nice and I like that your have the two bridges going diagonally. If you're going for a natural look I suggest you have your flowers better organised, maybe in a way that suggests a path.

 

[Cory]

Review of Polis

Hard to review this one because it's so W.I.P.

PWP placement is really random (for example, the metal bench right in front of the bridge) and feels empty around most of them. Maybe add more trees if you're going for a natural look. I love that your town flag is Deli. Monkey's are super under appreciated T.T Your map is also really nice and I like that your have the two bridges going diagonally. If you're going for a natural look I suggest you have your flowers better organised, maybe in a way that suggests a path.

I should of wrote it's a W.I.P sorry. Did you go in my house?

 

[ForgottenT]

You can come visit mine, it's in my signature

 

[jasa11]

6700 2142 4575-please review!Not quite done yet esspecially the house!

 

[dizzy bone]

Review of Escissia

+ I love how you surrounded your paths so evenly with the trees and bushes. Great path pattern too
+ It's also nice that the path flows so well through the town. It seems like you thought out the town plan really well
+ Great PWP placement
+ Your rooms are really fun and have a lot of character... that BBQ bed... holy **** made me so hungry

- A little thing about your paths though, sometimes I feel like they are too predictable and sometimes unnecessary. For example, the path right behind Re-Tail just seems to loop around in a circle and I feel like it doesn't have much purpose. Maybe it'd be nice to break your town up a little by adding areas of fruit orchards or PWPs that aren't so "framed" by the path, yanno?

Overall beautiful town. Really enjoyed it! <3

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Review of Winter

+ I love your flower arrangements around your PWPs
+ I like the neat little camping area with the campsite, tent and bonfire. I think it would look really nice and lush with lots of flowers and cedar trees
+ I like the natural look of the town, even without paths The areas with cluster of villagers would look great pathed though
+ Mayor's house is really cute.

- I'm not sure if the random holes were intentional, but they were kind of distracting

Beautiful town! It was refreshing to visit a summer town.

 

[dizzy bone]

Review of New Oak

+ SO many shooting stars tonight! Wonderful time to update your DA
+ I really love your path pattern. I think it's perfect for the winter (and it's hard to find a nice path for the winter)
+ Beautiful and meticulous flower/tree arrangement around paths
+ I love the zen themed areas. I think the nook where Mark's house is would look really nice with more bamboo and zen themed PWP since your exterior is the zen exterior (possibly instead of the flower arch, although I quite like that too)
+ Your house is very cozy. I love japanese themed rooms Ahhh where did you get the bathtub in your bathroom? And what wallpaper are you using for that room? :3

I'm not really sure what to write for cons. I really like your town. Great job <3

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Review of Freeland

+ Very nice Harry Potter themed town! I love the little spiders. How great would it be to have a mini quidditch field next to your stadium light?
+ I love your trees and flowers line your path.
+ I'm not sure if you plot resetted for this, but the area at the top of your town with the line of villagers is so cute
+ Good sense of PWP placement

Great town for W.I.P! Can't wait to see it finished. I also think as a suggestion that you should plant loads of cedar saplings. I think they would look great in your town to make it more foresty, especially since it's harry potter themed. This DA would also look great at night.

 

[jasa11]

Thanks a lot!Great idea for the cedar saplings and the field!I'll also try and make my house look really harry potter themed!

 

[TeeTee]

Review my dream town? I just edited my path designs. My DA is in my sig. Tnx!

 

[chronic]

Review my town Inwood! I haven't updated it in about four months, but I'm working on getting my natural paths back together before I update again.

 

[Byngo]

Review my dream town when you get the chance. <3

My alt houses are in WIP, just as a heads up. My DA is in my signature

 

[dizzy bone]

Review of Harvest

+ Lovely paths. Normally I don't like when the paths are only 1 sq but it really works in your town.
+ Nice flower arrangement and placement.
+ Nice PWP placement and pathing around them.
+ Your rooms are really fun. I REALLY love the way you customised the astro set. That room is so cool... I may use this idea :3 The campus set is so strange, I've never seen it before XD

- I think some areas where you have planted bamboo could be replaced by fruit trees or saplings instead. Some areas where there are just 2 bamboo looks a little random, although it works in areas like the Wisteria trellis.

Overall beautiful town! It's also pretty impressive that you've achieved all the deers.

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Review of Inwood

+ Ahh your town is absolutely beautiful. Might be one of my favourite natural towns I've seen.
+ I'm in love with all the natural paths and trees. It looks so good in the fall!
+ I love the minimal PWPs like the lamp post and yellow bench placements. Really lovely and goes well with your town.
+ I love the area around Town Hall
+ Your home is amazing, especially the main room and the right room. Your house exterior fits perfectly with the natural look of the town. It's so cozy I love the little things like the sapling on top of the shelf. I never thought to do that.

- The trees might get a little too cramped near Re-Tail and some other areas as well. I also think some trees are placed too closely to bridges.

Great town!! <3 Please tell me when you update it again!

 

[TeeTee]

Review of Harvest

+ Lovely paths. Normally I don't like when the paths are only 1 sq but it really works in your town.
+ Nice flower arrangement and placement.
+ Nice PWP placement and pathing around them.
+ Your rooms are really fun. I REALLY love the way you customised the astro set. That room is so cool... I may use this idea :3 The campus set is so strange, I've never seen it before XD

- I think some areas where you have planted bamboo could be replaced by fruit trees or saplings instead. Some areas where there are just 2 bamboo looks a little random, although it works in areas like the Wisteria trellis.

Overall beautiful town! It's also pretty impressive that you've achieved all the deers.

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Review of Inwood

+ Ahh your town is absolutely beautiful. Might be one of my favourite natural towns I've seen.
+ I'm in love with all the natural paths and trees. It looks so good in the fall!
+ I love the minimal PWPs like the lamp post and yellow bench placements. Really lovely and goes well with your town.
+ I love the area around Town Hall
+ Your home is amazing, especially the main room and the right room. Your house exterior fits perfectly with the natural look of the town. It's so cozy I love the little things like the sapling on top of the shelf. I never thought to do that.

- The trees might get a little too cramped near Re-Tail and some other areas as well. I also think some trees are placed too closely to bridges.

Great town!! <3 Please tell me when you update it again!

Thank you very much for the review. I'll probably replacing some bamboo areas with saplings after I finish designing some patterns today. ^^'

 

[dizzy bone]

Review of Alfheimr

Holy **** it's perfect. I've actually dreamed your town before, I think I PM'd you or something about it a while ago. Anyways

+ The area right in front of the plaza when you wake up is so nice and a great first impression. I love how you have to walk through the cedar trees and you see the rose arch and log benches. Very nice.
+ Your paths are beautiful and well planned out. Nice flower arrangement too
+ I love the PWP choices. Your town looks a big, wonderful garden.
+ I love the stumpy area near the windmill
+ Your home is lovely

I don't have much to say about improvement. I really like your town.