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Hi all,

I'm on the brink of finishing my town, so I have a fair bit of time on my hands, and I'm interested in seeing what everyone else is doing in their towns. If you like, leave your Dream Address below and I'll visit your town and tell you what I think of it.

~Qvaric_Storyteller.
 
Hi!

My dream address is in my signature
I'm on my way to making it a pretty town, but cherry has hindered me...
 
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My dream address isssssss 4900-3862-5400. A warning though, my town sucks. Still. I hope you enjoy.
 
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Dream Addresses for my three active towns are in my signature.
 
My town isnt very good yet but I saw and went to a really awesome town that was someone on tbts town sorry i forgot the name of the person but there town is called Soledad and the dream address is 4800-2253-7299 sorry whoevers it was xD
 
Hi!

My dream address is in my signature
I'm on my way to making it a pretty town, but cherry has hindered me...

It seems like you've only just started playing. That's not a bad thing, it was just a thought. I like the path you've picked, but I don't think it runs through enough of the town. As you play more, you might want to gradually build it up. That's what I've been doing with mine. It's too much work to try and do it all in one go. Also, if you were going for a pretty town, you might like to colour your path in. Say, pink or maybe yellow. That was only a suggestion.
I really like the rows of peach trees. That was nice to walk past. I like the way you've used flowers to line your paths. I've also seen a lot of towns where people use bushes to do the same thing. You get them from the Garden Shop connected to T.I.Y (I think it's the third upgrade of the Nook shop).
Also, your house. There's not really a sense of cohesion in terms of furniture. You don't necessarily have to put a full set of furniture in, but you want there to be some kind of theme otherwise it just feels random. I can't wait to see what you do with it once you've built up your account and resources.
 
yeah, i feel the same about my house. but i usually just have whatever items i really like in there

thank you for the review :D
 
Dream Addresses for my three active towns are in my signature.

Applewin: The path through the town is great. It's so much easier when you're in someone else's town and you have a path to help find your way. The width of the path along with the bamboo makes it feel just a tiny bit closed in. Would you consider having a path two squares wide, or using a hedge instead of bamboo? That was just a thought.
The outside of Jill's house is really beautiful, and the flowers around the fence just makes it feel really pretty. The rooms in your house all match, and the middle of the rooms have plenty of furniture in them, which is great. It's not easy to do that while still having enough room to walk around, which there is. The room at the back feels a little mismatched compared to the others. It's like a sitting room and a bedroom and a kitchen all rolled into one. There's nothing wrong with having a dining room/ kitchen but that room is the only one in the house that feels disconnected.
The gold roses with the hedge behind it is really nice, especially with the bell in the background. The fact that the station and town hall carry the fairy-tale theme is beautiful. The rose archway with the pink roses around it is stunning, but the path just seems to stop there.
Nick's house looks very modern from the outside, which is good because you don't want a male to have a feminine house. The bathroom feels just a little empty. All your furniture is around the edges of the room. The furniture in all of the rooms is consistent, and keeps with the modern theme, but they all feel a little empty.
Having the clock and the bench together is really nice, and that area looks great. I love how you've carried the fairy-tale theme throughout your town. The room on the left in Kathy's house looks unfinished and the kitchen feels a little bare. The upstairs and downstairs rooms also don't really seem to flow. Her's seems to be the least complete of all three residents. The town itself feels finished, though, and it really seems to flow from one section to another.


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Dream Addresses for my three active towns are in my signature.

Progress definitely feels more like a working... uh... progress, forgive the play on words there. Cameron's house is the best of the four, but it doesn't feel complete, as though there are things missing from all the rooms. The stone path you've run through the town looks great, and it seems to suggest either the modern or zen theme, but it's not exactly finished. It just seems to stop in places. You've started to carry the zen theme through, which is good, but more Public Works Projects will make it stronger.

 
Dream Addresses for my three active towns are in my signature.

The path you've chosen for Temps is nice. Michael's house is cute from the outside. It seems almost girly. The three topiaries together looks great, especially with all the flowers and the flower clock near by. The row of houses down the bottom makes it feel like a village, which is great. Alicia's house is really well done. While there doesn't seem to be an overall theme, each room flows, which is good. This town feels like it's moving towards the modern theme. It's obviously not finished but it is a good start.


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Hi.I have two in my sig.You could choose one.Thanks.

Which would you prefer me to visit?
 
I like to review peoples towns that are reviewing mine.I hope you don't mind.

Town of Qvaria-The bushes around Lia's house look great.Yours paths are a bit messed up, but I can see it's a wip.I like your paths, and the pink carnations look nice with it.Lovely park area with the fountain and benches.Lia's house is very pretty, and I love the spa room in the back.Nice job so far. :)

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Oh, Both are kinda cute.I guess you could visit Joy.Thanks so much.
 
Hello! My town is nowhere near finished. It's lacking public work projects, trees, bushes, and the like. I was wondering if someone could give me some constructive criticism on my town? :) My dream address is : 4400-4293-3527. Also, please don't mind my town name;; it's vulgar. Thanks in advance~
 


Applewin: The path through the town is great. It's so much easier when you're in someone else's town and you have a path to help find your way. The width of the path along with the bamboo makes it feel just a tiny bit closed in. Would you consider having a path two squares wide, or using a hedge instead of bamboo? That was just a thought.
The outside of Jill's house is really beautiful, and the flowers around the fence just makes it feel really pretty. The rooms in your house all match, and the middle of the rooms have plenty of furniture in them, which is great. It's not easy to do that while still having enough room to walk around, which there is. The room at the back feels a little mismatched compared to the others. It's like a sitting room and a bedroom and a kitchen all rolled into one. There's nothing wrong with having a dining room/ kitchen but that room is the only one in the house that feels disconnected.
The gold roses with the hedge behind it is really nice, especially with the bell in the background. The fact that the station and town hall carry the fairy-tale theme is beautiful. The rose archway with the pink roses around it is stunning, but the path just seems to stop there.
Nick's house looks very modern from the outside, which is good because you don't want a male to have a feminine house. The bathroom feels just a little empty. All your furniture is around the edges of the room. The furniture in all of the rooms is consistent, and keeps with the modern theme, but they all feel a little empty.
Having the clock and the bench together is really nice, and that area looks great. I love how you've carried the fairy-tale theme throughout your town. The room on the left in Kathy's house looks unfinished and the kitchen feels a little bare. The upstairs and downstairs rooms also don't really seem to flow. Her's seems to be the least complete of all three residents. The town itself feels finished, though, and it really seems to flow from one section to another.


Thank you for the review!

My playing "Animal Crossing: New Leaf," starting with Applewin, began last August. Mayor Jill's house is complete. The back room was pieced together with my effort of getting Fairy-Tale theme items in the house to build up points from Lyle for the Happy Home Academy Theme Challenge. So, with one of the rooms having to feel a little, shall I say, eclectic…I selected the back room. There's a mix of different themes which all fit in the category of Fairy-Tale house theme. (They are not my personal tastes. I just did what I figured I could with using them and arranging the room. And I did earn all the exterior parts. I now choose not to have Jill's house highlighted in that gold because it subtracts points. So, I'm okay with it.)

Nick's and Kathy's house were never completed by me. (Kathy's house is currently being worked on as a redecoration project. Her living room had Minimalist furniture. Kathy's kitchen is now closer to what I'm trying to get specifically with that one room. The other rooms in her house are still going through a process. With the house belonging to Nick, I want to do more. In both cases, I need to find the time to get it all done.) This, by the way, has to do with the fact that I couldn't predict, after I bought "Animal Crossing: New Leaf," that I wouldd later buy more than one game copy. (If you visit my three towns, one thing you probably can tell is that I have had a major focus on getting the casts of villagers that I want in each town. They took priority over house decoration.)

Regarding the bamboo: I like having one area of the Applewin map that has The Roost Cafe stand out, and another area that has neighbors Re-Tail Shop and The Police Station also stand out, from the rest of the town; the bamboo is used to highlight them so they're set apart from other buildings and houses in Applewin. The side path going to and from Re-Tail Shop (leading to and from the Plaza) was not planned ahead by me. So, that's why it is single-squared. Yes, it's thin. But it's really an alternative route.
 
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Hi.I have two in my sig.You could choose one.Thanks.

JOY:The way you've organised your trees and flowers is great. I plan on doing something like that in my own town. The path outside Snow White's house is so clever. Her house feels very cozy. It's beautiful. The farm out the back and the dwarfs' room upstairs are well put together. The creepy theme in Alice's mansion is well maintained.
The rose tiles with the pink and purple roses is really nice. Cinderella's castle is beautiful. The way you've depicted all the characters is great. I love the way you've done the four seasons. That is really clever. You've done a wonderful job putting your town together. It seems sectioned, which fits your four separate characters. Well done!


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Oh. Did you skip over me? :c

I've entered your DA three times and it keeps saying that there is no town with that address.

 


The path you've chosen for Temps is nice. Michael's house is cute from the outside. It seems almost girly. The three topiaries together looks great, especially with all the flowers and the flower clock near by. The row of houses down the bottom makes it feel like a village, which is great. Alicia's house is really well done. While there doesn't seem to be an overall theme, each room flows, which is good. This town feels like it's moving towards the modern theme. It's obviously not finished but it is a good start.

Thanks again for your review, specifically with my third town Temps!

Secondary human Michael's house is, well, housing clothes until I can access T&T Emporium. That's why his greeting mentions Gracie. His is a temporary arrangement of decor. With another secondary character, Marco, I selected his house to, well, house copies of villager pics. (I'm on the verge of resetting my "Cycle" town in order to create a new one, timing its start in March and extending to April Fool's Day, so I can acquire even more villager pics.)

House decors for all towns' human characters, other than Applewin Mayor Jill, are not complete. They're partially done. One thing I wanted to do is was definitely get villager pics in each mayors' house. (In Progress, I am shy of two villager pics.)

As for not having an "overall theme" in the house of Temps Mayor Alicia: I found myself exhausted by the Happy Home Academy Theme Challenge for Applewin Mayor Jill that I don't particularly want to do any more of those again [for either Progress Mayor Cameron or for Temps Mayor Alicia].
 
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