Applewin: The path through the town is great. It's so much easier when you're in someone else's town and you have a path to help find your way. The width of the path along with the bamboo makes it feel just a tiny bit closed in. Would you consider having a path two squares wide, or using a hedge instead of bamboo? That was just a thought.
The outside of Jill's house is really beautiful, and the flowers around the fence just makes it feel really pretty. The rooms in your house all match, and the middle of the rooms have plenty of furniture in them, which is great. It's not easy to do that while still having enough room to walk around, which there is. The room at the back feels a little mismatched compared to the others. It's like a sitting room and a bedroom and a kitchen all rolled into one. There's nothing wrong with having a dining room/ kitchen but that room is the only one in the house that feels disconnected.
The gold roses with the hedge behind it is really nice, especially with the bell in the background. The fact that the station and town hall carry the fairy-tale theme is beautiful. The rose archway with the pink roses around it is stunning, but the path just seems to stop there.
Nick's house looks very modern from the outside, which is good because you don't want a male to have a feminine house. The bathroom feels just a little empty. All your furniture is around the edges of the room. The furniture in all of the rooms is consistent, and keeps with the modern theme, but they all feel a little empty.
Having the clock and the bench together is really nice, and that area looks great. I love how you've carried the fairy-tale theme throughout your town. The room on the left in Kathy's house looks unfinished and the kitchen feels a little bare. The upstairs and downstairs rooms also don't really seem to flow. Her's seems to be the least complete of all three residents. The town itself feels finished, though, and it really seems to flow from one section to another.