They are kind of too blurry IMO. I would make the streaks on the bottom one more vibrant and make it look more like neon lights. Also push the quote a little to the side since it's about the graphic in its entirety, not just the words.
Lol I suck >.< No offense taken btw xD I was bored and wanted to do random stuff. Tysm for dat feedback. (I did warn u tht it would burn your eyes in the spoiler)
To me it looks like a render with a background and some text, with minimal effects and no lighting at all. That's why the words don't look like they belong there, in my opinion. I agree with Beary, you should use another program like GIMP.
I don't do GFX, but there's something about the text that I think could be fixed-it looks a bit flat compared to the picture(s). Anyone correct me if I'm wrong...?