The Dream Critic / Town Advisor !

[Fruitcup]

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I'm definitely in need of some help. My town isn't done and I still have a few empty spaces to fill, but I'm at my max for PWP's! I already plan to breed more hybrids and add in some tree stumps for little sitting areas. I'm also thinking about demolishing the 2 signs I have by the beach to make room for more projects, but I feel like they add a nice touch so idk.

I really like your signature, it is so cute!
What a pretty path!
Budgeting pwps can be pretty tricky, I struggled quiet a bit with that. Everyone who uses light posts seems to struggle with this.
If you want to keep your signs up you could get rid of the bridge right below Bee's house and maybe put a pretty flower and bush arrangement there or you could also get rid of the log bench next to the campsite and switch it out for special tree stumps.
Putting a tree tunnel leading up to the campground would look really cool.
Having empty spots and no pwps are good places to make stump sitting areas, symmetrical bush/tree/flower designs, place to leave gifts, or do fun qr stuff like a tennis court or swimming pool. You could also add another villager to fill up space.

 

[Richluna]

Love the path work!
The upper left corner nest to retail, underneath the cedar stump, I feel like there should be something there, it leads up to that area and there isn't really anything there, maybe put a gift?
I really like the entrance plaza thing, in front of the train station.
The stumps below the statue fountain, it would look extra good if they were special.
Usually having one square paths makes things constricting and hard to navigate but in your town it really works.
The rock area, so creative, I've never seen a bamboo and rock thing combination like that, and diagonally, so cool!
I wish to see more hybrids aside from this, it's a very nice town, fun to walk around in.

Thank you very much for taking the time to review mu dream town!!!
I will take your comenta in consideration to complete my town, currently working on getinf lots of hybrids, and need to get some PWP which Im' m waiting some villagers to request and fill tue empty spaces, really glad tou enjoy it , thank you very mich again

 

[Fruitcup]

Mine is currently still a WIP but would love feedback! mine is
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Walking from the town plaza to the wisteria pwp to retail, it is pretty but you can't run in that path without putting the flowers in danger, I don't know if you mind this but personally I like to make paths so that are in no danger vs being part of the path itself.
Visit popular towns like the ones on tumblr to see how you fill up all that space. An empty town full of so much potential, I would love to visit it again once its complete/semi complete !

 

[Cherry-Blossoms]

Hi, please could I have a bit of feedback? My da is 6B00-002F-42A8 Thanks!

 

[Fruitcup]

Hi, please could I have a bit of feedback? My da is 6B00-002F-42A8 Thanks!

I like your path work and the welcome sign is really cute.
I feel like the illuminated tree pwp takes up a lot of pwp slots for such little space used in town, it is pretty but having extra pwp could help fill up other spaces.
Your park is very cute and the area with the stumps and mushrooms is very creative.
Your town is very cute, I like it.

 

[Cherry-Blossoms]

I like your path work and the welcome sign is really cute.
I feel like the illuminated tree pwp takes up a lot of pwp slots for such little space used in town, it is pretty but having extra pwp could help fill up other spaces.
Your park is very cute and the area with the stumps and mushrooms is very creative.
Your town is very cute, I like it.

Thank you!

 

[shannenenen]

Mine is nowhere near done, but I'd like your thoughts on flower combinations and what to do with the empty strip of land at the bottom of my map (where the hybrid garden currently is).

 

[Britterbee]

Thank you for your feedback! I was already planning on adding some stumps once I get a silver axe. I'll see what I can come up with for gardening those empty spaces. I really appreciate your input!

 

[the_bria]

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i would appreciate a general critique. i'm not quite done with it but i feel like i've come a long way.

 

[Fruitcup]

Mine is nowhere near done, but I'd like your thoughts on flower combinations and what to do with the empty strip of land at the bottom of my map (where the hybrid garden currently is).
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I really like your pathwork and how organized your town is; it is very pleasing to the eye.
Are you going for a particular color scheme? Figuring out what colors you want to be more prominent will help a lot.
If you want to use all flowers what I did was match the fruit trees with the flowers plus an extra different colored flower. For example, cherry trees with red flowers (matching red) and then adding white flower (extra color).
You could put a park on the bottom strip. You could also put a symmetrical placement of pwps like two topiaries with a windmill in the middle or two benches and a fountain or something like that.
I really like how your town is coming along, the way it is organized and how your developed areas are makes it look so promising. I really look forward to seeing it further developed, I like the way you design.

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i would appreciate a general critique. i'm not quite done with it but i feel like i've come a long way.

I like your path design, very unique combination of colors. Maybe change the bridges to the brick ones to better match the path.
It would be nice to have the light posts that you have to the right of the plaza on the left of the plaza as well.
The white and yellow bench, maybe make them the same bench and make it a symmetrical thing with the flower bed or changes one of the benches to a completely different pwp.
I like the fountain area in the entrance of the town and the foresty strip where the campsite is.
The three light posts near the town hall and upper bridge, I don't think it needs so many so close to each other, maybe get rid of a couple, it will give you extra pwps. I struggled with having many light posts early on in developing my town. They are very pretty and fun to use but the problem with them is that they can take a lot of pwp slots and occupy too little of space since they are only 1x1. What I did to save pwp was change every other light post with a tree instead. You can check it out if you like, my DA is in my description.
Your town map and layout is very nice, it has a lot of potential.
Also, I like potatoes too. lol

 

[shannenenen]

I really like your pathwork and how organized your town is; it is very pleasing to the eye.
Are you going for a particular color scheme? Figuring out what colors you want to be more prominent will help a lot.
If you want to use all flowers what I did was match the fruit trees with the flowers plus an extra different colored flower. For example, cherry trees with red flowers (matching red) and then adding white flower (extra color).
You could put a park on the bottom strip. You could also put a symmetrical placement of pwps like two topiaries with a windmill in the middle or two benches and a fountain or something like that.
I really like how your town is coming along, the way it is organized and how your developed areas are makes it look so promising. I really look forward to seeing it further developed, I like the way you design.

Thanks for your input! I'll have to keep some of that in mind. Thanks for visiting c:

 

[the_bria]

I really like your pathwork and how organized your town is; it is very pleasing to the eye.
Are you going for a particular color scheme? Figuring out what colors you want to be more prominent will help a lot.
If you want to use all flowers what I did was match the fruit trees with the flowers plus an extra different colored flower. For example, cherry trees with red flowers (matching red) and then adding white flower (extra color).
You could put a park on the bottom strip. You could also put a symmetrical placement of pwps like two topiaries with a windmill in the middle or two benches and a fountain or something like that.
I really like how your town is coming along, the way it is organized and how your developed areas are makes it look so promising. I really look forward to seeing it further developed, I like the way you design.

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I like your path design, very unique combination of colors. Maybe change the bridges to the brick ones to better match the path.
It would be nice to have the light posts that you have to the right of the plaza on the left of the plaza as well.
The white and yellow bench, maybe make them the same bench and make it a symmetrical thing with the flower bed or changes one of the benches to a completely different pwp.
I like the fountain area in the entrance of the town and the foresty strip where the campsite is.
The three light posts near the town hall and upper bridge, I don't think it needs so many so close to each other, maybe get rid of a couple, it will give you extra pwps. I struggled with having many light posts early on in developing my town. They are very pretty and fun to use but the problem with them is that they can take a lot of pwp slots and occupy too little of space since they are only 1x1. What I did to save pwp was change every other light post with a tree instead. You can check it out if you like, my DA is in my description.
Your town map and layout is very nice, it has a lot of potential.
Also, I like potatoes too. lol

thanks for your input! the only reason for all the street lamps is to save certain areas from random house move ins. i don't have the patience to do the plot reset trick.

 

[Fruitcup]

thanks for your input! the only reason for all the street lamps is to save certain areas from random house move ins. i don't have the patience to do the plot reset trick.

Apparently with the new update putting patterns down in areas where you don't want villagers to move in works now. I haven't experienced this though because I haven't moved in any new villagers recently.

 

[Nooblord]

You can check out my town. It's pretty minimalist when it comes to landscaping, but I like the simplicity of it.

 

[Fruitcup]

You can check out my town. It's pretty minimalist when it comes to landscaping, but I like the simplicity of it.

I have visited your town multiple times actually. lol
I really like it, I like your paths, your pick of pwps and their placement. I look forward to seeing it when it's green out. Great town!

 

[BeatlesFan789]

Hi! I'd appreciate if you could check out my dream. I'm going for a clean/semimodern looking town with a forested area up to the northwest. Most of the town just has patterns out to plan things but a few of my areas of confusion are with the area in front of my house, the area by Kyle and Zell's houses, and the area around the sides of the caf?. i don't know if I want pattern paths or not yet. Also, I'm still putting work into my house on the exterior and interior.

Thanks!

DA: 4C00-003F-91E3
Town: Rainier

 

[Nooblord]

I have visited your town multiple times actually. lol
I really like it, I like your paths, your pick of pwps and their placement. I look forward to seeing it when it's green out. Great town!

Oh, thanks for the visits, lol.
Yeah, I can't wait for the snow to melt, I miss seeing grass.

 

[Fruitcup]

Hi! I'd appreciate if you could check out my dream. I'm going for a clean/semimodern looking town with a forested area up to the northwest. Most of the town just has patterns out to plan things but a few of my areas of confusion are with the area in front of my house, the area by Kyle and Zell's houses, and the area around the sides of the caf?. i don't know if I want pattern paths or not yet. Also, I'm still putting work into my house on the exterior and interior.

Thanks!

DA: 4C00-003F-91E3
Town: Rainier

Yay for semimodern towns!
Nooblord has a cool semimodern town if you wanna check it out.
You can have main paths that lead up to important buildings and bridges and then leave the rest unpathed.
I really like your plans, it looks very promising.
Around Kyle and Zells house, you could put light posts around or you could put topiaries with trees or a zen area or maybe the tokyo tower or cube sculpture.
The entrance to your house is going to look gorgeous the way you have it layed out right now. Adding a row of trees on both sides or nice flower patterns would be more than enough to complete the area.
Between your house and the bridge would be a perfect place for a park.
You could make the cafe area a plaza and put benches and light posts on both sides so that its symmetrical thing.
I look foward to seeing the progression of your town, I bet it will look great when completed.

 

[BeatlesFan789]

Yay for semimodern towns!
Nooblord has a cool semimodern town if you wanna check it out.
You can have main paths that lead up to important buildings and bridges and then leave the rest unpathed.
I really like your plans, it looks very promising.
Around Kyle and Zells house, you could put light posts around or you could put topiaries with trees or a zen area or maybe the tokyo tower or cube sculpture.
The entrance to your house is going to look gorgeous the way you have it layed out right now. Adding a row of trees on both sides or nice flower patterns would be more than enough to complete the area.
Between your house and the bridge would be a perfect place for a park.
You could make the cafe area a plaza and put benches and light posts on both sides so that its symmetrical thing.
I look foward to seeing the progression of your town, I bet it will look great when completed.

Thanks so much for the advice!! I'll keep you posted on it

 

[Durk]

I'm currently working on my town of Fabulae. The town is supposed to be like a little foresty world that tells the story of four seasonal gods: Mayor Autumn and residents Winter, Spring and Summer. I've already created both Autumn and Winter. Spring's house is going to be close to the windmill, but I still have to chose a spot for Summer. Both Autumn and Winter's houses aren't finished yet, but Autumn's going to have a little witchy house and Winter runs the town inn!

As far as landscaping goes, I've partly finished a few sections. Almost the entire right part of the town is done, but I still need to decorate it a bit more and maybe change up a few things. I'm currently working on the left side, which is going to be a really dense forest with a lot of rocks and mushrooms. Just the right environment for Autumn, who loves to be alone and isolated. The area above the river at the left from Winter's house is probably going to be an illuminated garden, but I'm still indecisive about it. At last there's the middle bottom part, which I'm probably going to put Summer's house. Think he might like a nice view on the ocean. But I'm still thinking about the area around is. There's still a lot of pwp's I'd like to place in my town, but I guess I'd have to sacrifice some of them if I really don't have any space left.

I hope this gave you some knowledge about the vision I have for my town. I hope you'll enjoy the town for what it is at the moment. There's still a lot of designs on the ground that I use for planning out my town, but you'll just have to look past those.

Edit: literally forgot to add my dream address. I actually hate myself. Anyway, it's 6C00-0014-8499.