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i need something to pass the time so i've decided to review dream addresses!
i won't be rude but if you'd like me to give any constructive criticism just let me know!

here's how i'll be reviewing:
overall appearance:
theme i think you're going for:
pwp placement:
path placement:
landscaping:
mayor opinion:
mayor's house opinion:
constructive criticism/overall opinion:
 
Hello ^_^ I'd love a review! <3
I've been working on my town a lot since my last update, but I wanted people to enjoy the cherry blossoms :3 The area by my windmill looks completely different now, too.
Constructive criticism is welcomed~ :D
 
Hi ! Same for me ! Even tough my town isn't finished yet. I did a huge work on it and I'm really really almost DONE with it.

Constructive criticism is very welcomed !
Thank you in advance for taking the time to visit my town. <3
 
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Hello ^_^ I'd love a review! <3
I've been working on my town a lot since my last update, but I wanted people to enjoy the cherry blossoms :3 The area by my windmill looks completely different now, too.
Constructive criticism is welcomed~ :D

overall appearance: i love the minute you wake up there's little presents waiting! enjoyed the blossom kimono with the straw hat, the cherry blossoms fit nicely with the surrounding area!
theme i think you're going for: a romantic zen theme maybe? sorry if i'm wrong xD
pwp placement: the fountain in front of the town hall looks absolutely perfect! i love the cherry trees around it and how the storage box has its own little corner as well as the hammock! i also love the little natural path to the windmill, very cute!
path placement: your paths are amazing! everything is well planned out...i especially love the staircase-looking paths!
landscaping: you mix non-hybrid flowers and hybrid flowers very well! i think i saw almost every hybrid in your town, it was very lovely
mayor opinion: i love your mayor's outfit & ponty is a really nice name!
mayor's house opinion: i'm assuming your mayor is also a witch due to the mannequin and purple room? i think your spaceship themed room is my favorite though! i'm also assuming every room is its own bedroom minus the spaceship room? your kitchen is so cute, i haven't even began on mine haha! i especially like the brewster gyroids behind the counters!
constructive criticism/overall opinion: i don't think i have any constructive criticism, your town seems really beautiful overall! i really liked your town and the time you gave it as well as the season fits perfectly with its surroundings...thank you for letting me visit!

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Hi ! Same for me ! Even tough my town isn't finished yet. I did a huge work on it and I'm really really almost DONE with it.

Constructive criticism is very welcomed !
Thank you in advance for taking the time to visit my town. <3

overall appearance: i love the paths surrounding your tree plaza and the fact there's a known path right when you wake up c:
theme i think you're going for: there's so many, i couldn't pinpoint one!
pwp placement: i like that you have the stonehenge and the little tombstone (i can't remember the name for it) close to each other...the lighthouse on the cliff is always nice! i absolutely loooooove the little desert area, that's really creative! another thing i like is that the cafe is in its own little secluded corner! love the double fountain area as well!
path placement: the path placement is amazing! you have a path leading almost everywhere, must have taken a lot of time and work to get it like that, and it sure paid off because it looks great! the lots of trees and bushes lining your path fit really nice as well c:
landscaping: i think the blue and white theme in places looks really cute! and your other character, Zo?'s little flower arch and pink rose area is absolutely perfect! the landscaping around the zen area is also really nice c:
mayor opinion: your mayor looks wonderful! though i'm not an anime fan i have heard of attack on titan, but he looks really cute overall!
mayor's house opinion: i hope i'm correct when i'm assuming your first room is a pub of some sort? it looks very well done for that, especially with the barrels lying around! your hobby room is also really cute too! i dunno what kind of kitchen you're going for...like the kitchen for the pub or the kitchen in a regular house, but either way it's really creative to bring in other furniture that people usually don't put in their kitchens! and going to your upstairs room i see that it's a hotel! i've actually never seen a hotel in ACNL but this is really creative, and i'm assuming your basement is either a worker's quarters or just another hotel room, overall very creative!
constructive criticism/overall opinion: I love your town and your mayor's house! Though the area around the town hall seems a bit barren with the paths, everything else looks absolutely amazing! I think my favorite part was the area around Zo?'s house and the zen area next to it too, very amazing town overall!
 
Thank you a lot for your review ! I take into considerations every single things you just said ! But just so you know.... actually, my mayor's home is the one in the south, in the island. xD
The house you visited is a kind of hotel, yea... it's a tavern (to be more exact) ;)

Oh and I agree for the town hall which is too much barren with path for me as well. The problem is...I wanted to add a fountain or something before the town hall but each time I tried to put something new, there were a problem with the path and it wasn't harmonious (I don't know how to put it in words...)
So instead I wanted to add trees and flowers but Isabelle said me there were too much trees. xD
(I'll have to find a new solution to solve this)
 
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I gave my town giving a Kingdom Hearts inspired theme that I'm still not sure of. It's mostly each house is inspired by my favorite worlds in the games. I would really appreciate a a little feedback or critique on how it turned out.
 
I'd love one.
I'd recommend also visiting the other player houses.
One thing I still don't know what to do with is the area between Reimu's house and the tower, and whether I should put a PWP(bell keeps coming to mind) in the little glade between Mira's house and ReTail.
 
Hello ^_^ I'd love a review! <3
I've been working on my town a lot since my last update, but I wanted people to enjoy the cherry blossoms :3 The area by my windmill looks completely different now, too.
Constructive criticism is welcomed~ :D

;)
 
I'd love to have a visitor in my dream town! I honestly can't remember the last time I updated it, so I'm not sure what my town looks like! However, I am gonna be doing a little bit of remodeling, so I'd love to get any ideas or suggestions! (:
 
hi! i'll be reviewing all of these today, they all look/sound really fun c:

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I'd loooove a town review! ♥

overall appearance: your paths are really nice! the azaleas surrounding the town tree are really pretty too, fits with foggy vibe for some reason!
theme i think you're going for: there were a lot of colors like flowers to match villagers homes-i'm assuming that-so i dont know if ou had a specific theme or not c:
pwp placement: your pwps seem a little just thrown around, sorry if that sounds rude! your town map is really nice and has a lot of room, i think you could try to designate areas for your pwps!
path placement: your paths are really cute! i've seen them on tumblr before haha...your paths end in random spots and just go back into open grass, again i don't know if that was your intention but you could try moving some pwps so it doesn't end that way c:
landscaping: your landscaping is really cute overall! i think that you tried to put flowers that matched with villagers houses? haha i think that's really creative and it's also what i'm doing in my town sorta! i like the criss-cross method of the bushes and pink roses right outside your cafe! i also like the landscaping around re-tail as well!
mayor opinion: your mayor's outfit is really cute, it's so hard for me to find good qr codes xD
mayor's house opinion: the pink rococo set really fits your mayor! i like the pink marshmallow chair too c: i don't know if your left room is another little house but i really love the design you used on the alpine furniture! i dunno which music box you put in your bathroom but if you could tell me that'd be sooo lovely! i like the small corner with the bath mat and exotic screen, it really pops in the room c: i think your back room is a hobby room? it's really cute and i like the cityscape wall, i think it fits with the theme!
your upstairs room is so smooth, i really like the little picture on your dividing wall, i didn't know that was possible! i think your downstairs room is my favorite! it's really cute, i like the little details like the blue marshmallow chair, the cushion, and the little bear!
constructive criticism/overall opinion: your town could use a bit of work on landscaping/pwp placement but your mayor's house, mayor themself, and most overall is really good!
 
I gave my town giving a Kingdom Hearts inspired theme that I'm still not sure of. It's mostly each house is inspired by my favorite worlds in the games. I would really appreciate a a little feedback or critique on how it turned out.

overall appearance: i looove the water path surrounding your town tree, it looks really sophisticated! the engraved concrete path you use is really nice because the pattern varies on all of them!
theme i think you're going for: obviously kingdom hearts, like you stated! it fits really lovely in the animal crossing world
pwp placement: your PWP placement is really nice! everything seems to go somewhere and it all ties together, especially like the water pump near the bus stop, i dunno why, but my favorite has to be the little park area! it's so cute, as well as your little cliff corner campsite!
path placement: your paths are really nice and really give a sense of fairytale yet dread because of the little gravesite area! very nice and creative, i like it c: everything looks really well planned out! i love love loooove the little hopscotch part in the park area
landscaping: landscaping seems to fit everywhere, even around the gravesite...well done overall c:
mayor opinion: your mayor's outfit is so cute! pink hair pink dress, haha i love it!
mayor's house opinion: the area leading up to your mayor's house is absolutely perfect...it's like a feeling of suspense as the character walks through the flower arch and past a bunch of perfect trees only to be taken aback by your mayor's beautiful and grand castle! very well done c:
your first room is so ancient and sophisticated, i especially love the lionheads falling into the bathwater!
your library is actually reaally nice! i especially like the way you separated the bookshelves into segments and you even put a mannequin as if she was looking for books, really creative!
i like the little shrine that is your back room...not sure if the wall is a qr code or not but if you designed it that's really amazing! as well as the famous painting on the wall c:
i'm assuming your right room is also another shrine of some sort? i've heard of kingdom hearts before, though i've never played it c:
your upstairs room is really cute! i especially love the floral-printed bear and the blossom cushion c:
your ice room is the first time i've seen the ice furniture in-game, so i'm really surprised! especially the ice beds...i like the symmetry you have going on in your room!
constructive criticism/overall opinion: i think you really achieved the look you were going for, i looked up some kingdom hearts pictures and i could see what you were going for! you have a really good town, you should be proud!
 
Thank you very much for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed my town. Yes, my mayors house is Hollow Bastion with the back rooms and right rooms being my best interpretations of the Grand Hall and the Castle Chapel, and I had to create a bedroom because the High Tower in the game is made up of too many empty rooms, but overall I'm glad everything looks looks nice then.
 
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