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Can some people visit my DA and suggest where I should put PWP's? I would also like some criticism (a review?) for my town and such. Note that the houses and some of the areas are not finished. This is a work in progress.

I'm planning on removing the red boot statue, and replacing it with something that matches the surrounding area. Maybe you could give me advice on what should be there instead?

Anyone who gives me a review will receive a review of their DA too if they'd like. c:

My DA: 5200-3978-2871
 
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I'll review your DA a little later ^_^ Feel free to review mine, which is in my sig.
 


First off, might I say I really like your paths. I'm normally not a fan of the paths that take one space, but I really liked how you used it. It's colorful and cute! I don't think it matches much with the smaller cream colored path you've got going on though. It also seems like you're missing paths in a couple places.
Second off, your town is full of bushes and trees! I love that because it seems like a forest and in turn makes all the pwp's seem more isolated. It must have taken you forever to get all of those bushes!

I specifically like the area where Mint lives. The red and black flowers look wonderful. I also really like the area with the illuminated heart.
Another area I have to give you props for is the super symmetrical place with the illuminated arch.

All the flowers you used are beautiful, but I believe the color scheme you used is lacking. The flowers will go from warm colors like yellow, to cold colors like purple. It throws me off a little when that happens.

Also, since there are more warm colors than cold colors, maybe you should record your DA during the day. That's when all of those yellows will really pop!

Onto the houses! (I'm only going to review 2-3 rooms in each house because it would take too long to review all of the rooms) The first room in Lurai's house is especially cute. There's also symmetry. I'm a sucker for symmetry. The cabana/gracie room that she has is also veerrry cute! I didn't think those two sets would match very well, but they do! I personally don't like the mermaid set by itself. Maybe you could pair it with another set like you did with the previous room?

In Ai's house, is the first room a doll theme? If so, I really like the concept, but the colors and the furniture kind of threw me off. I really like her kitchen though. It's very modern looking. Ahhh! I really like the back room too! It's an asian themed bathroom with a golden toilet!

All in all, I really enjoyed visiting your town! It does need some improvements, but other than that it is very beautiful.

Thank you for letting me pick it apart. c': I don't think I'm very good at reviews, but I hope this helps.
 
Town of Bellace.

Well you're asking for critique, and I honestly can't find anything that needs improvement.
The paths are beautiful.I love the foresty natural feel of the town. Nice custom sign next to the police station.The flowers look lovely, and the pwp's are well placed.Cute little cafe sign.I love colorful dream towns and yours is full of color. I also love the rain. I wouldn't mind having a rain coat, boots and umbrella to wear while i'm exploring your town.The windmill looks great, and the town flag fits the lovely theme of the town.

Lacie's house. OMG, what an adorable little character. The landscaping in front of her house is very nice too. Most of this house has an outdoor theme.I really like it.Great job on the cute kitchen in the back.

The other houses are a wip, so not much to say, but Lydia's main room looks great.

Thanks for sharing your lovely town. I had a lot of fun visiting and spent quite a lot of time exploring it.Nice job.
 
Town of Bellace.

Well you're asking for critique, and I honestly can't find anything that needs improvement.
The paths are beautiful.I love the foresty natural feel of the town. Nice custom sign next to the police station.The flowers look lovely, and the pwp's are well placed.Cute little cafe sign.I love colorful dream towns and yours is full of color. I also love the rain. I wouldn't mind having a rain coat, boots and umbrella to wear while i'm exploring your town.The windmill looks great, and the town flag fits the lovely theme of the town.

Lacie's house. OMG, what an adorable little character. The landscaping in front of her house is very nice too. Most of this house has an outdoor theme.I really like it.Great job on the cute kitchen in the back.

The other houses are a wip, so not much to say, but Lydia's main room looks great.

Thanks for sharing your lovely town. I had a lot of fun visiting and spent quite a lot of time exploring it.Nice job.

Hehe, Thank you so much! Oh, Lydia's house is going to be a little restaurant. I'm going to add a sign for her as well.
Also, Haru, the guy with the tent, is the village gardener. His house is full of plants for that reason.
I really appreciate the feedback! ^^
Um, any ideas on what I should put in to replace the town's boot sculpture thing?
 
I liked the boot sculpure. If you're not happy with it then I would suggest the well. I don't think you had one. The well and water pump would look nice in a town like yours. A picnic blanket or flower bed would also look nice.

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I liked the boot sculpure. If you're not happy with it then I would suggest the well. I don't think you had one. The well and water pump would look nice in a town like yours. A picnic blanket or flower bed would also look nice.

Oh, I also forgot about the wisteria trelice. That's another one that would look lovely with your natural, flowery theme.
 
I liked the boot sculpure. If you're not happy with it then I would suggest the well. I don't think you had one. The well and water pump would look nice in a town like yours. A picnic blanket or flower bed would also look nice.

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Oh, I also forgot about the wisteria trelice. That's another one that would look lovely with your natural, flowery theme.

Okay! I may add all of those if I have the room. ^^
Is it okay if I write a review of your DA as soon as I get home tomorrow? I took pictures of specific things I liked in it, but writing it may take me a bit. (I tend to be really thorough when writing) I have class really early though so I have to sleep.
 
No problem. Thanks for taking so much time reviewing and taking pictures of my town. That's very nice of you. I can't wait to see it.
 
No problem. Thanks for taking so much time reviewing and taking pictures of my town. That's very nice of you. I can't wait to see it.

Farmland!

The first thing I noticed about Farmland was the use of 1-space paths. They’re so pretty! Especially the water one! They all match your town’s theme as well (fairytales, yes?) I have no ways to help you improve the paths. They’re already perfect. ^^

I also really like your map. You only have one pond and it’s really close to retail, the town hall, and the plaza.
As for placement, everything seems really good. I love all of the signs and the fact that all of your houses have a theme. I also really love your “just dandy” area. Never remove that! It’s adorable! The chicks for sale fence thing was also really cute. I stayed in the area with the picnic basket for a long time. Lots of symmetry as well, which I love. The tree farm was probably my favorite place to see. Mushrooms and symmetry! The only thing I can say to critique your landscaping is that there were a few empty spots that you could easily fill up with flowers or another PWP.

I love all of the characters! McDonald made me chuckle a little bit. You brought me back to my childhood for a moment.

Bo peep has a Wool Shop, and in the wool shop it really looks like a clothing store! (All the clothes are made from wool.) There are also pictures of Baabara and Wendy. Once again, your signs are really cute. The main room had me smiling. It was very creative. The top floor is where Bo peep works, yes? I also really like that room. There’s another picture of Wendy too! I really love how you used the pave furniture, because I normally don’t like that set. It made your house seem brighter though. Okay, I just have to talk about the downstairs. It’s sooo nice! I love restaurant themed rooms, and yours seems like a small family diner. I love it. Bo peep’s house is truly amazing. No critique needed.

Next is Ms. Mary’s Flower Shop. The back room is probably the best in my opinion. The lemonade stand is super cute and the dolls were a great touch! Maybe you could add some yellow flowers though, since it is a flower shop house? The room that I didn’t get in this house was the one with the ladybug looking furniture. All the other rooms seem to have a specific theme, but this one lost me a bit. I like your choice of wallpaper and flooring though.

On to Mc Donald’s farm…I mean, house. It really looks like a farm. This may be my favorite house. I love the feel of it. Especially the back room with all the piggy banks. How creative!

Lastly, the Muffin man’s bakery. The exterior is really nice, but the interior is nicer. As I’ve stated before, I personally love restaurant themed rooms. The main room is a bakery, which is close enough! I especially loved the portraits in the back of the room.

I had a lot to say about your town! It was really fun. I can only imagine having 3 towns and decorating them all! It must have taken you forever. Goodness, I swear I wrote an essay. O.o
 
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I'm going to review your town!

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Raining at 8 PM.

Presents. Possibly coffee.
Maybe not. One of them is a yellow umbrella. The other is a furniture, or maybe a dress. To be exact, a raincoat.

Native fruit=Peach.

The mayor.

Her house is full of music.

Coffee. Big whoop.
No. Bubbles and ice cream.

I think it deserves a 5/10. Because the town is littered with Tier 1s.

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Can you review my Dream Address? It's in my signature.
 
I'm going to review your town!

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Raining at 8 PM.

Presents. Possibly coffee.
Maybe not. One of them is a yellow umbrella. The other is a furniture, or maybe a dress. To be exact, a raincoat.

Native fruit=Peach.

The mayor.

Her house is full of music.

Coffee. Big whoop.
No. Bubbles and ice cream.

I think it deserves a 5/10. Because the town is littered with Tier 1s.

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Can you review my Dream Address? It's in my signature.

Ah. Okay. I don't know why having my favorite villagers makes my town any less though. o.o
I'll accept your opinion anyways. Visiting your town later.
 
I'm going to review your town!

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Raining at 8 PM.

Presents. Possibly coffee.
Maybe not. One of them is a yellow umbrella. The other is a furniture, or maybe a dress. To be exact, a raincoat.

Native fruit=Peach.

The mayor.

Her house is full of music.

Coffee. Big whoop.
No. Bubbles and ice cream.

I think it deserves a 5/10. Because the town is littered with Tier 1s.

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Can you review my Dream Address? It's in my signature.
Not to sound rude, but that was one of the worst reviews I have ever seen. I hope she gives you the same kind of review that you gave her. Such a low rating that wasn't deserved. Just because you dislike her villagers.

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I just have to add this, because your review really ticks me off. You posted the obvious. She knows who her mayor is, and town fruit. Duh.Do you expect her to point out the obvious and leave it at that when she reviews yours?
 
Not to sound rude, but that was one of the worst reviews I have ever seen. I hope she gives you the same kind of review that you gave her. Such a low rating that wasn't deserved. Just because you dislike her villagers.

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I just have to add this, because your review really ticks me off. You posted the obvious. She knows who her mayor is, and town fruit. Duh.Do you expect her to point out the obvious and leave it at that when she reviews yours?

You're very sweet for defending me. c:
It was just an opinion though, and that's fine. I'm not going to take it personally.
I will give him my full and honest opinion when reviewing his town, even if he was kinda blunt and rude.
 
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