✿ post your dream town address(es) for a review! ✿

I'd love a review. My town's a major WIP so let me know what I should add. :)

(p.s. The houses are where the "meat" of the town is.)
 
Mine is 5300-3708-5967.

I'm still in process of recovering from a town corruption, so bear with me. :/

Yay! I've been looking for a thread like this.
 
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I would be honored to have a visit.
Stuffs in the signature~

[still a lot of planning going on, mostly improv]
 
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My dream address is in my signature, I'd love a review hehe (esp suggestions for what to put behind town hall...)
 
Hi.I would love a review.I have two towns in my sig.JOY is my main town, but farmland is pretty much complete too.I guess you can pick one.Thanks so much.
 
i like you to do a review of my town because i did a lot of work in it;
also i made most of my patterns.
my theme is Red Carpet, Gorgeous, Zen & Arcanine.
Info in the Signature
 
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omg I totally forgot about this gah >w< I feel so bad.

I'll start from most recent to older posts in a bit, since I'm not sure who still wants me to review their town.
So sorry everyone!
 
I've been looking for something like this!
I am doing a town remodel and actually am in need of advice on what to do with my town.
most of the bottom half of my town is flowers, buh, it became a flower dumping ground.

My dream address is 5300-3079-0160
 
kiyo's review of mapleton

I've been looking for something like this!
I am doing a town remodel and actually am in need of advice on what to do with my town.
most of the bottom half of my town is flowers, buh, it became a flower dumping ground.

My dream address is 5300-3079-0160
What I liked:
✿ nice paths and very nice use of bushes and trees to outline the path to give a more natural vibe to the town. i had a very good 1st impression of mapleton!
✿ i loved the area around anie's house, i think it was very well done.
✿ i also like the area leadeng to the south beach a lot <3

What I think can be worked on:
✿ whenever you get the chance to, build a variety of public work projects in your town. not just the same street lights ^-^
✿ normal flowers can be arranged more neatly, i recommend if you are going to keep your normal flowers around, that you group them based on species / color. or replace them with hybrids - sort of like the way you surrounded alice and rooney's houses with hybrids.
✿ ah, i envy that your town fruit is apples! i suggest you plant more perfect apples. in a sort of like xoxoxoxo pattern alongside your paths. x being a tree, and o being a hydrangea bush. trust me, it would look really cute with your paths.
✿ also, when you plant fruit trees. it would look nicer if it's more consistent. (just my opinion) ex) apples in one area, oranges in one area, etc.

~ you could also make a river area :D
Overall rating: 6.5/10 :3

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i like you to do a review of my town because i did a lot of work in it;
also i made most of my patterns.
my theme is Red Carpet, Gorgeous, Zen & Arcanine.
Info in the Signature
What I liked:
✿ there were gifts when i hopped off of the bed, nice! <3 made my dream of your town even more pleasant - then i was greeted by an arcanine to the right.
✿ the placement of your houses is pretty amazing. as well as the placements of all your villagers. i love that your cafe, town hall, police station, and retail is all lined up. it brings me back into ww times! i've never seen another town that had anything like this.
✿ path co-ordination is on point. colors neatly correspond with each other.
✿ perfect apples! YES!!~
✿ i love the pwp filled area to the right of ronalds house.

What I think can be worked on:
✿ i think you could possibly add more bamboo to your town, to give a more zen feeling to certain areas. such as the area where the zen bell is.

other than that - i had a very pleasant dream of your town ^-^

Overall rating: 10/10
 
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What I liked:
✿ there were gifts when i hopped off of the bed, nice! <3 made my dream of your town even more pleasant - then i was greeted by an arcanine to the right.
✿ the placement of your houses is pretty amazing. as well as the placements of all your villagers. i love that your cafe, town hall, police station, and retail is all lined up. it brings me back into ww times! i've never seen another town that had anything like this.
✿ path co-ordination is on point. colors neatly correspond with each other.
✿ perfect apples! YES!!~
✿ i love the pwp filled area to the right of ronalds house.

What I think can be worked on:
✿ i think you could possibly add more bamboo to your town, to give a more zen feeling to certain areas. such as the area where the zen bell is.

other than that - i had a very pleasant dream of your town ^-^

Overall rating: 10/10
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i got 10/10 for Cro?Rojo, well thank you for that awesome review for my town;
if want to know what Cro?Rojo mean, Cro? is Irish for Heart/Core & Rojo is Spanish for Red.
Also i'm current add some new things in my town like add some new bushes by wolfgang house & been reorganize my flowers to look better & now think add more bamboos in some of the empty area my town & maybe in zen bell area but i like the way it look to me i think on that.
check my town later on for the update if you want :)
 
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review of JOY & konpeito!

What I liked:
✿ unique town, i loved each little area you added in to make each area different - such as the ice rink in the north pole! absolutely lovely~
✿ dream provided really neat dress up clothes in the beginning to mix and match
✿ i love that for every season, there is a matching character to go along with it.
✿ the town tune is really cute - i stayed long enough to hear it :3 + flowers are neatly organized together

my favorite area of your town was the area in front of cinderalla's house, with all the tulips!

What I think can be worked on:
✿ In the fall area, I think it would look much better if you plant persimmons to match the fall theme going on. The apples to me seem to add a weird contrast between the paths. plus, persimmons could pass off as pumpkins, maybe x3
✿ i honestly think you can find better paths for your town, but that's just me. Trees can also be more organized.

Overall rating: 8/10 :)

What I liked:
✿ i loved the paths so much, especially when i got off the bed and there were rimmed glasses and such. i had a extremely good first impression of your town that drew me in ~ well done.
✿ the little area with the zen bell and the bushes is so beautiful! i love that the stair paths near it co-ordinate giving the area a more zen feel to it.
✿ LOVE LOVE LOVE all the tiny cute areas

What I think can be worked on:
✿ nothing, i absolutely adore your town slightly to the point where i'm a tad bit jealous <3
as for what you should put behind your town hall, i would suggest ANY of the following
1) a metal bench
2) a well, possibly
3) drinking fountain / statue fountain
4) stone tablet
5) any topiary

Overall rating: 10/10 ~ pleasant dream, would return :3
 
Ahhh when are you doing putting up your DA! I want to walk around forever!
You've done so much dreams now! :blush: have you got the bronze badge yet?
 
thank you so much for the review!! I'm glad you enjoyed my town haha ; u ;
I decided to just go with the fairy ring behind the town hall so I don't have PWPs everywhere, but idk if I should replace the water pump... I think it's really cute but you can hardly see it so ahhh
 
Ahhh when are you doing putting up your DA! I want to walk around forever!
You've done so much dreams now! :blush: have you got the bronze badge yet?
I'm still working on the interior of houses actually ^-^ I'm done with the town though! I can PM you once I release it <3
and yeah I have gotten my bronze badge! I'm still working towards silver then gold.
I'm gonna try to finish a bunch of reviews today.

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thank you so much for the review!! I'm glad you enjoyed my town haha ; u ;
I decided to just go with the fairy ring behind the town hall so I don't have PWPs everywhere, but idk if I should replace the water pump... I think it's really cute but you can hardly see it so ahhh
np! c:
Yeah, the fairy ring would look nice as well!
I think the water pump looks really cute there xD it's a little hidden spot.
 
I'm still working on the interior of houses actually ^-^ I'm done with the town though! I can PM you once I release it <3
and yeah I have gotten my bronze badge! I'm still working towards silver then gold.
I'm gonna try to finish a bunch of reviews today.

Yesss!
Oh gosh how much is it for bronze? I know its gunna take me forever to get the dream badge u nu
 
My town is so bad it's not funny.. and I really have no idea how to improve it. There aren't going to be many good things but I really need ideas on how to make my town better. My dream address is 7900-3916-8363.
Thanks! :)
 
I have 4 all in the signature :) Rosewood is better as I've had it longer. Feel free the review all if you'd like :)
 
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