✿ post your dream town address(es) for a review! ✿
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Please visit mine, it's in my signature
What I liked:
✿ i liked how you worked around the rocks above the plaza *thumbs up* as \
they are tough for me to work around! props to you.
✿ the paths match perfectly with the snow, and i like how you didn't cover the
cobblestone areas with paths. it creates a perfect balance.
✿ your use of bushes are well organized and blends in nicely with the bamboo
✿ loved loved loved <3 the area above phoebes house! snk <3
✿ flowers are neatly organized!
✿ i loved the front of your house - well done!
What I think can be worked on:
✿ there are blank areas that could be decorated better, such as the area to the
right of bams house. as well as the area across from the police station to the
left. it's a little empty there. unless it's a drop zone?
✿ that's it. theres not much for me to critique on besides that. it's up to you what
to do with the empty spaces. but i really feel the vibe of your town, it has a zen feeling.
Overall rating: 9/ 10
Hands down, beautiful town!
Loved almost every corner of it.
Thank you for posting your dream code!
✿ i liked how you worked around the rocks above the plaza *thumbs up* as \
they are tough for me to work around! props to you.
✿ the paths match perfectly with the snow, and i like how you didn't cover the
cobblestone areas with paths. it creates a perfect balance.
✿ your use of bushes are well organized and blends in nicely with the bamboo
✿ loved loved loved <3 the area above phoebes house! snk <3
✿ flowers are neatly organized!
✿ i loved the front of your house - well done!
What I think can be worked on:
✿ there are blank areas that could be decorated better, such as the area to the
right of bams house. as well as the area across from the police station to the
left. it's a little empty there. unless it's a drop zone?
✿ that's it. theres not much for me to critique on besides that. it's up to you what
to do with the empty spaces. but i really feel the vibe of your town, it has a zen feeling.
Overall rating: 9/ 10
Hands down, beautiful town!
Loved almost every corner of it.
Thank you for posting your dream code!
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What I liked:
✿ very nice paths! they are co-ordinated very well with the season! <3
✿ your town provides a perfect balance between paths and nature.
✿ i love the area above coltons house. it's my favorite area in your town. why?
because you incorporated multiple pwp's in one area to create a really beautiful
area. the bushes are in a pretty bordering pattern as well.
✿ i liked the zig zag path pattern you did xD it had a nice effect, instead of the
plain old boring right, left, down, up.
✿ the area near the waterfall = perfect. your town just has multiple beautiful spots
and i love it. <3
What I think can be worked on:
✿ your beaches seem really dull, and you could possibly add paths to enhance it's
look there. however, i like how you patterned out the coconuts and bananas
✿ that's it. well decorated and thought out town.
Overall rating: 10/ 10
Perfect. thanks for posting your dream address dear <3
--- Congrats, you are now my favorite dream address.
✿ very nice paths! they are co-ordinated very well with the season! <3
✿ your town provides a perfect balance between paths and nature.
✿ i love the area above coltons house. it's my favorite area in your town. why?
because you incorporated multiple pwp's in one area to create a really beautiful
area. the bushes are in a pretty bordering pattern as well.
✿ i liked the zig zag path pattern you did xD it had a nice effect, instead of the
plain old boring right, left, down, up.
✿ the area near the waterfall = perfect. your town just has multiple beautiful spots
and i love it. <3
What I think can be worked on:
✿ your beaches seem really dull, and you could possibly add paths to enhance it's
look there. however, i like how you patterned out the coconuts and bananas
✿ that's it. well decorated and thought out town.
Overall rating: 10/ 10
Perfect. thanks for posting your dream address dear <3
--- Congrats, you are now my favorite dream address.
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kiyo's review
What I liked:
✿ paths are nicely placed! <3 props to that. i'm not even done placing
down my own paths let alone making them.
✿ i like your map, everything looks well placed.
✿ your villagers are so adorable, i enjoyed very much talking to them!
✿ an assorted variety of pwp's that brighten up the town in many different
locations - however you should stick to a certain theme :3
✿ loved the basement of your house! very nice.
What I think can be worked on:
✿ i think you could use better paths, they look oddly familiar.
honestly, i don't like them and you can do better ^-^ i'm not
sure what kind of theme your going for though.
✿ flowers could be organized more neatly, by color or type of flower.
preferably color though. i think you should create variety or breed more
hybrids to brighten up your town. -- too much of the same colored flowers
is dull.
✿ try planting trees in more interesting patterns. i noticed that your trees
are randomly placed and i think it would really help to chop everything down
and replant to figure out better placed to plant the trees.
Overall rating: 5/10
Work in progress. I'm sure you can improve <3 much luck!
Thank you for posting your dream town!
✿ paths are nicely placed! <3 props to that. i'm not even done placing
down my own paths let alone making them.
✿ i like your map, everything looks well placed.
✿ your villagers are so adorable, i enjoyed very much talking to them!
✿ an assorted variety of pwp's that brighten up the town in many different
locations - however you should stick to a certain theme :3
✿ loved the basement of your house! very nice.
What I think can be worked on:
✿ i think you could use better paths, they look oddly familiar.
honestly, i don't like them and you can do better ^-^ i'm not
sure what kind of theme your going for though.
✿ flowers could be organized more neatly, by color or type of flower.
preferably color though. i think you should create variety or breed more
hybrids to brighten up your town. -- too much of the same colored flowers
is dull.
✿ try planting trees in more interesting patterns. i noticed that your trees
are randomly placed and i think it would really help to chop everything down
and replant to figure out better placed to plant the trees.
Overall rating: 5/10
Work in progress. I'm sure you can improve <3 much luck!
Thank you for posting your dream town!
ForgottenT
♫ drops of jupiter ♫
What I liked:
✿ i liked how you worked around the rocks above the plaza *thumbs up* as \
they are tough for me to work around! props to you.
✿ the paths match perfectly with the snow, and i like how you didn't cover the
cobblestone areas with paths. it creates a perfect balance.
✿ your use of bushes are well organized and blends in nicely with the bamboo
✿ loved loved loved <3 the area above phoebes house! snk <3
✿ flowers are neatly organized!
✿ i loved the front of your house - well done!
What I think can be worked on:
✿ there are blank areas that could be decorated better, such as the area to the
right of bams house. as well as the area across from the police station to the
left. it's a little empty there. unless it's a drop zone?
✿ that's it. theres not much for me to critique on besides that. it's up to you what
to do with the empty spaces. but i really feel the vibe of your town, it has a zen feeling.
Overall rating: 9/ 10
Hands down, beautiful town!
Loved almost every corner of it.
Thank you for posting your dream code!
Thanks for the review ^^
I'm just waiting until I get all the flowers, and the PWPs (especially the zen bridge) I need to decorate the spots, I'm also gonna redo a lot of my flowers.
kiyo's review
here you go dearie <3
What I liked:
✿ paths are cute <3 but they would look better during spring
when the grass is green instead of when it snows. did you make them?
✿ very simple, and nothing seems over done. cute little drawings all across town.
✿ your flowers are well organized and that's what makes a town attractive
to me xD in my opinion. + good use of bushes!
✿ i liked the little fenced area with dandelions inside, it's a very cute idea.
moving on to interior!~ since you requested.
✿main room: everything goes well together c: the only thing that really
stands out to me is the dolly xD i think it just seems bad to me possibly
because of aika village.
✿basement: simple, straight to the point. walls + flooring are matching.
✿upstairs: the whole room is glowing and on point.
✿right: awwwh, i like this room c: the icy blue rococo items look very nice
with the fancy doll, and baby polar bear. music matches as well.
✿left: this area of your room is very calming. i liked how you positioned two
regal lamps to the left and the right of the regal bed. it seems like a very
realistic thing to do c: the flooring seems a bit off though, maybe you
could try the stone tile. the dark blue throws everything off in my opinion.
perhaps something lighter.
✿center: MY FAVORITE ROOM. because sweets :3
What I think can be worked on:
✿ i think it would be REALLY nice if you could put like a
windmill or lighthouse in that little corner that kind of looks like
a "c" to the left of papi's house. seems like a perfect location!
✿ your town seems like theres lots of room for more pwp's
✿ just a few adjustments to your interior and it'll be absolutely
perfect~
Overall rating: 7.5/10
Interior rating: 9/10
Thanks for posting your dream code! <3
I enjoyed visiting your town!
✿ paths are cute <3 but they would look better during spring
when the grass is green instead of when it snows. did you make them?
✿ very simple, and nothing seems over done. cute little drawings all across town.
✿ your flowers are well organized and that's what makes a town attractive
to me xD in my opinion. + good use of bushes!
✿ i liked the little fenced area with dandelions inside, it's a very cute idea.
moving on to interior!~ since you requested.
✿main room: everything goes well together c: the only thing that really
stands out to me is the dolly xD i think it just seems bad to me possibly
because of aika village.
✿basement: simple, straight to the point. walls + flooring are matching.
✿upstairs: the whole room is glowing and on point.
✿right: awwwh, i like this room c: the icy blue rococo items look very nice
with the fancy doll, and baby polar bear. music matches as well.
✿left: this area of your room is very calming. i liked how you positioned two
regal lamps to the left and the right of the regal bed. it seems like a very
realistic thing to do c: the flooring seems a bit off though, maybe you
could try the stone tile. the dark blue throws everything off in my opinion.
perhaps something lighter.
✿center: MY FAVORITE ROOM. because sweets :3
What I think can be worked on:
✿ i think it would be REALLY nice if you could put like a
windmill or lighthouse in that little corner that kind of looks like
a "c" to the left of papi's house. seems like a perfect location!
✿ your town seems like theres lots of room for more pwp's
✿ just a few adjustments to your interior and it'll be absolutely
perfect~
Overall rating: 7.5/10
Interior rating: 9/10
Thanks for posting your dream code! <3
I enjoyed visiting your town!
Thank you for the reviews! appreciate it^^ I am eagerly waiting for spring to come and add more path xD nop I don't design it yet~ hahaha~ Currently everything still WIP plus I just clean out everything from the house and rearrange them^^ your review is very useful xD thank you so much! <3
kiyo's review
What I liked:
✿ almost everything, my god. talk about ADORABLE! <3
i'm very jealous of your town. i explored every corner
of your town - and it was very interesting.
✿ i loved how you made every room related to a hotel
kind of theme. even for the multiple other houses.
✿ your zen part of the town is perfect. where did you get
the tatami board thing/wood paneling? if you don't mind me
asking.
i was kind of hoping chester to be where zucker is, that would
be so adorable. chester living by the bamboo <3
What I think can be worked on:
✿ i think you should just stick to one of the grass paths,
in my opinion - the lighter one with more flowers. instead
of the ones with the little candy canes.
✿ that' pretty much all i the advice i have to give. you have
a wonderful town.
Overall rating: 10/10
honestly a favorite. thanks for sharing your dream address.
✿ almost everything, my god. talk about ADORABLE! <3
i'm very jealous of your town. i explored every corner
of your town - and it was very interesting.
✿ i loved how you made every room related to a hotel
kind of theme. even for the multiple other houses.
✿ your zen part of the town is perfect. where did you get
the tatami board thing/wood paneling? if you don't mind me
asking.
i was kind of hoping chester to be where zucker is, that would
be so adorable. chester living by the bamboo <3
What I think can be worked on:
✿ i think you should just stick to one of the grass paths,
in my opinion - the lighter one with more flowers. instead
of the ones with the little candy canes.
✿ that' pretty much all i the advice i have to give. you have
a wonderful town.
Overall rating: 10/10
honestly a favorite. thanks for sharing your dream address.
Mokuren
Sun shining through my fingers
Thanks a lot for yoyur review <3 I will try to work on the patterns ^-^ Uhm I'm not sure about the tatami floor and wood paneling but I will search for it - I never save the QR codes on the computer. If I will find it I will share it with you ^.^ Or you can get it from Wandel if you want? Then I will change the options for my dream.
Thanks again! <3
Thanks again! <3
Klauser_Bateson
Senior Member
I would like a review please. Dream Address is in sig.
Oblivion9312
Senior Member
Idk if you're still doing this, but I'd like a review, please! Here's my dream address: 4400-2565-9616
The mayor's house is under construction, so please excuse any furniture in the plaza. I think I blocked off the unfinished rooms, so just ignore them. Lol the town is still a work in progress, but I think it's coming along nicely. I'm trying to get input from several different viewpoints so I can take care of things now before I get my last few pwps and dream villagers.
The mayor's house is under construction, so please excuse any furniture in the plaza. I think I blocked off the unfinished rooms, so just ignore them. Lol the town is still a work in progress, but I think it's coming along nicely. I'm trying to get input from several different viewpoints so I can take care of things now before I get my last few pwps and dream villagers.
mickeydamouse
Princess Twilight Sparkle
I'd appreciate a review! My Dream Address is in my signature
Reviving this thread. Sorry guys, I PROMISE to continue!
What I liked:
✿ pachi is an adorable town name! it reminds me much of pachi-risu :3
✿ your map is nicely arranged and appealing. i adore it!~ especially how agnes,
daisy and flip's houses are arranged. that's a lot of plot resetting effort! well unless
you got really lucky ^-^ ~ very nice!
✿ i had a good first impression of your town!. i loved how the perfect oranges are
circled around the town hall in make a really nice effect, lovely.
✿ i LOVE the area around the zen bell, especially the paths to the right of them. they
give a little bouncy, puffing effect which i thought was really cute! along with the chopped
bamboo and bushes. i love it~
✿ i also love the bench by the waterfall, it's a great idea.
What I think can be worked on:
✿ flowers could be arranged a little more nicely, that would give your town a nicer vibe.
✿ the wood paths are bland, i got bored of them easily honestly. you can do better than that,
along with the brick paths. i don't really like them.
✿ that's all the advice i have to give! your town is off to a lovely start for a town that's considered
a work in progress.
✿ what i would recommend to you, is to get a train station upgrade. and get the japanese (wooden)
bridge to go along with your paths. it would make a really great combo, i promise. a hammock and
a bus stop would look great in your town as well.
much luck on completing your town <3 your off to a good start! that's for sure!
Overall rating: 8/10
✿ pachi is an adorable town name! it reminds me much of pachi-risu :3
✿ your map is nicely arranged and appealing. i adore it!~ especially how agnes,
daisy and flip's houses are arranged. that's a lot of plot resetting effort! well unless
you got really lucky ^-^ ~ very nice!
✿ i had a good first impression of your town!. i loved how the perfect oranges are
circled around the town hall in make a really nice effect, lovely.
✿ i LOVE the area around the zen bell, especially the paths to the right of them. they
give a little bouncy, puffing effect which i thought was really cute! along with the chopped
bamboo and bushes. i love it~
✿ i also love the bench by the waterfall, it's a great idea.
What I think can be worked on:
✿ flowers could be arranged a little more nicely, that would give your town a nicer vibe.
✿ the wood paths are bland, i got bored of them easily honestly. you can do better than that,
along with the brick paths. i don't really like them.
✿ that's all the advice i have to give! your town is off to a lovely start for a town that's considered
a work in progress.
✿ what i would recommend to you, is to get a train station upgrade. and get the japanese (wooden)
bridge to go along with your paths. it would make a really great combo, i promise. a hammock and
a bus stop would look great in your town as well.
much luck on completing your town <3 your off to a good start! that's for sure!
Overall rating: 8/10
