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Hey, guys!
Can you make a review from my city? It's still a WIP, and there's loads of things I haven't decided yet. I'd love suggestions of any kind!!
I'll review anyone posting after me!

The address is 5700-3876-1313.
Thank you very much in advance!
 
Hey, guys!
Can you make a review from my city? It's still a WIP, and there's loads of things I haven't decided yet. I'd love suggestions of any kind!!
I'll review anyone posting after me!

The address is 5700-3876-1313.
Thank you very much in advance!
Mayor Lorelei of Bonbon
5700-3876-1313

Likes:
- Cute design around town tree
- Cute path design, looks like a boardwalk
- In front of your town hall
- Zen garden decorated with flowers
- Illuminated arch ways
- Lots of flowers
- Lots of mushrooms
- Good flower colours around mayor's house
- Over all, a great start to your town! I was impressed by how developed it was.

Dislikes:
- There was no path going to the police station, maybe think about a cobblestone or dirt path?
- The bridge closest to Lorelei's house, the path after it is a bit too thick. Maybe add bushes in the middle to break things up?

Suggestions:
- Circle your tree plaza with trees or bushes, I always tell people to try & make a strong first impression for when people wake up in your dream!
- Water moats or designs might look good with your board walk path
- Add bushes in the middle of some of your 3 wide paths
- Cedars around your campsite
- I liked the lighter coloured path running down from Lorelei's house, sometimes your other path looks too wide in certain areas, maybe try replacing some of the board path path with the lighter path for more variety
- All the houses next to Elise look like a perfectly set up neighbourhood. Try a dirt/cobblestone path to connect them all? Or that light coloured path you already used at the top of your town.
- For some blank areas in town, just plant perfect fruit trees until you've decide what to do with the area. That way you can make bells while you brainstorm ideas!
- Parks are always a good idea. In front of your cafe would be a perfect spot. Make a shape out of bushes, a square, hexagon, any shape you want & add these PWP inside (jungle gym, tire toy, drinking fountain, sandbox, street lights, benches, etc)
- To the left of Re-tail would make a good zen area. You already have the zen bell, just add some bamboo. I cut my bamboo at different lengths while it's growing & I chopped some in half after it finished growing, just to add more texture!

Houses:
- Lorelei; Very cute entrance room! Could use some music though. Loved the upstairs so far also. The house is small but coming along great! Just needs more time.

Rating: 2.5/5
 
can do mine if you like.
updated yesterday during a thunderstorm so it's pretty cool.
Mayor Yukari of Gensokyo
4300-3850-0189

Likes:
- Very cute design around town tree
- Zen garden
- Zen bell area
- Picnic blanket pattern
- Dead trees around stone hedge
- Flower arch with fountains on either side
- Wisteria Trellis
- A very quaint town! c: Lovely to run around in.

Dislikes:
- Needs more flower colour coordination
- More decoration around water well
- A little more development in your houses

Houses:
- Marisa; Loved the cabin furniture, maybe pick your favourite shirt & refurbish the set. Middle-left room was a cute little office. Middle-right room needed work. Back room was also under construction. Upstairs was a good start with the lovely set, needs more furniture. I think the lovely set can be refurbished light pink too?
- Alice; Loved the front room with the refurbished alpine set. Maybe a different floor? Middle-left room was a good start to a spa, maybe add the capricorn ornament. Middle-right room was my favourite room of the house. Very lovely back room, the dolls added a nice touch! Upstairs simple but I liked it a lot. Basement was another one of my favourites! I actually might like it more then the gorgeous room, nice use of statues.
- Yukari; Over all, nice zen themed house! I like the idea for the back room, just needs more furniture. Great use of bonsais in the spa middle-right room. Loved the gyroids upstairs with the black & red exotic set. Basement was perfect! Love spooky themed rooms. Over all a strong house.
- Reimu; I love how you always incorporate gyroids. Maybe the middle-right room could be an art studio? With more clay ovens & gyroids. Upstairs was a little bare. Basement wasn't developed yet. All the other rooms were great.

Rating: 4.3/5

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my address is in my sig thanks!
Mayor Isabelle of New Leaf
4100-3673-8404

Likes:
- Fountain in front of the train station, with lamps on either side
- Fun face boards!
- It seems like you just started playing, there wasn't much development. Your town will look great in no time if you just keep planting trees & adding PWP. Maybe try planting some bamboo too?

Dislikes:
- Quite a messy town to wake up to lol
- Needs paths!
- Wasn't much development
- Pluck your weeds!

Suggestions:
- Circle your tree plaza with bushes or trees
- Try collecting all your flowers & group them by colour or type in certain areas
- Cedars around your campsite
- More bridges, there was only 1
- If you plan to let Celia move, the area would be great for a park. Try making a rectangle out of bushes & adding PWP like jungle gym, sandbox, tire toy, drinking fountain, benches, clocks, etc.
- I wish I knew what PWP your villagers have requested, adding anything would help though!

Houses:
- Isabelle; Cute front room with your mermaid furniture. Upstairs had a good start with the golden cabana set, but it needs more added to the room. If you're stuck on ideas for your blank rooms, maybe try the kiddie set refurbished to pastel! Or the rococo set refurbishes to pink.

Rating: 1/5 i'm sorry but it was a pretty empty town.
 
I'm looking for another review now if ya don't mind.
Added more PWP's and a bunch of other minor things. Fixed back room too (it's amazing now, trust me)
Also check out the beach.

DC:4800-2145-7903
 
Can someone review my town? c:
I would love to get some feedback! My DA is in my signature.
Sorry for the holes in my pattern at the plaza (Katrina is in my town at the moment).
 
its still a work in progress but can someone review my town?
Mellow Dream Address: 5900-3237-4565
 
its still a work in progress but can someone review my town?
Mellow Dream Address: 5900-3237-4565

This is my first dream review so I hope I'm doing it right.

The Town:
I like your pathways and I really like the way that you've planted the bushes by Re-tail, but the path by retail feels a bit disjointed. Your town seemed a bit empty on the left-hand side and on the bottom right-hand side corner by the campsite (perhaps some space for public works projects).

Mayor's House:
I absolutely loved your main room (those are so hard to make nice :) ) it's one of the nicest ones I've seen so far! Kitchen's also nice, the bathroom looks like a working progress and might need some more furniture but I like way you placed the statutes and lamps by the doorway.
Downstairs is an epic start of a game room (loved the album covers on the wall). Loved how colourful and green it was upstairs.

All in all I think your town is really nice and it shows that you've put a lot of effort in to it :)
 
Can someone review my town? c:
I would love to get some feedback! My DA is in my signature.
Sorry for the holes in my pattern at the plaza (Katrina is in my town at the moment).
Mayor Lot of Gatwick
7000-2301-6505

Likes:
- The path work in the tree plaza area was beautiful!
- It had a nice simple brick path but then water moats, flowers boxes & other path designs
- Loved the stepping stones
- Flower boxes around the houses
- Fountain
- Cute scarecrow area
- Flower beds in front of Deli's house
- Wind turbine placement

Dislikes/Suggestions:
- More trees around hammock?
- Add cedars around campsite
- Line some of your paths with bushes
- Add more flowers & trees in blank areas

Houses:
- Lot; Very cute front room! Maybe find a design to refurbish the alpine set with or make the wood dark brown? I'd also find a new floor or wallpaper just so it wasn't the full set. Unless you're going for HRA points, then never mind. :P Loved the middle-right room with the princess furniture. The back room was my favourite! A very well put together library/office. You could refurbish the rococo set to pink in the middle-left room & I think the capricorn ornament might fit well. I like the idea for your basement, it's a good start. c:

Rating: 3.5/5
 
will update my town within the next few days.
take the chance to enjoy the thunderstorm while it lasts.

wondering whether or not to replace the bushes just south of ReTail with illuminated trees and what to put in the big open sidewalk area south of Reimu's and ReTail

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ForgottenT
New Oak
7600-2546-1817

Likes:
-nice path
-flowers
-Instrument Shelter area
-Picnic Basket area
-Campsite area

- Mark's house
*game lounge
*party room
*luxury bathroom
*arcade
*yakuza office(?)

Neutral:
-bamboo grove behind city hall and the one in the field near the stone tablet look like you have something planned for those places

Dislikes:
-Ichigo and Ruri's homes undeveloped
-zen feel of the town seemed to conflict with this particular sidewalk path

Suggestions:
-plant a bamboo or two near the hotspring
-maybe a more organic looking path, at least in some areas
-see how it feels to have a path go through the Wisteria Trellis instead of around

Final Thoughts: very nice, but some things hold it back from perfection

Rating: 3.8/5
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bump; finally updated my town
should I place an illuminated arch between ReTail and the wisteria trellis?
 
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