Yukari Yakumo
Thanks a lot for taking the time to look at everything and reply!
When you say the south-east cliff edge looks lonely do you mean the one with the picnic blanket… or…?
review/suggestions- Gensokyo
I thought the pine tree looked pretty with your town-tree square! Maybe you should line the whole square in pine trees and bushes?
(or mostly?)
I thought the stepped tiles with the default ground at the town tree and your main tile was very classy looking.
I personally don't care for the symbol tiles around your fountain but I realize they probably have to do with your theme or something you like. The colors just feel a bit garish? I wonder if you could make your own tile with the same symbol but in the grey colors of your main tile so that it looks more integrated? Like that someone made a decorative stone tile to match the main tiles.
it might be pretty to border the outer edge of your square with the fountain and the flower clock in the middle (near your train station) it might be pretty to border it with bushes (all same color/type) If you like street lamps and have pwp's left 2-4 would be pretty on the outer edges of this square too. (symmetrically placed) The river at the bottom of this square next to the real river I feel is a bit disjointed, I'd just put flowers there perhaps.
The diagonal path down from your town-tree, it'd be nice to see it partially bordered in bushes perhaps.
your log needs some flowers or mushrooms or clovers around it and perhaps a few more trees bordering it to give it a nice enclosed seating area feeling? I wonder if you need the horizontal path directly above the log. You could put more trees there to give it a more forest feeling…? Then the winding path below the log could go up to the cafe and you could make a small path in the north-west (right under your cafe) directly to the town tree.
In your zen area, I really like the grass + small stone tiles.
I think the little stone tiled square connecting Flo and Marissa's house is very cute with the trees around it.
your stone henge with the dead trees around it is very interesting and neat. I like the area around Dotty's house too. The diagonal path going from her house to the bridge with the bushes is very nice with your stone tablet and all red lilies.
It feels like the area around and below Pierces house could use a little more definition though.
The rose-grass and sakura grass tiles under Mira's house and around there feel a little out of joint with your overall town style? I'd be tempted to just use one of your grass+stone tiles there instead.
At the far south/east end of your town with the large lake and the long vertical path, I'd make that path grass+stone path. :3
Your tokyo tower needs some fields of flowers around it.
Or perhaps a border of bushes to make it have a garden/public works feel.
I think the bamboo around your Japanese house on the north-east is very effective. having the hot spring surrounded by bamboo there, too is very lovely.
I didn't have time to go in the houses, sorry.
