Yukari Yakumo
Countless Violet Clouds
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Prime
MuteCity
DC: 4800-2145-7903
Likes:
-rain
-nice path
-campsite in small forest
-illuminated arch & trees near station
-...sign near station...
-fountain/bamboo grove
-dead trees around Static and Ren's home felt appropriate
-modern tone
-trees
-flowers
-good bush placement
-Prime's house
*store on right
*bath on left
*hotel? on 2nd floor
-Ren's house
*I think someone dreamed of Aika
-Rachel's house
*...plebian?
*main room: (cue Nightmare Before Christmas) What's this?!
*sweets room
*2nd floor: what am I looking at? funeral parlor?
*good music choices
Dislikes:
-flower color/breed choice around fountain
-Prime's cabana room felt lacking compared to the rest of the house
-drawers on left(pave?) in the alpine room felt out of place
Suggestions:
-remove the first tile going from the plaza to the campsite
-another table or two in Rachel's alpine room
-replace the cosmos around the fountain
-PWPs:
*instrument shelter, cube sculpture, stadium lights, solar panels, geyser
*wind turbine on western side of the waterfall
*a few more streelights
Final Thoughts: very nice; obviously have put a good amount of time and effort into it. just needs some minor tweeks.
Rating: 4/5
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Prime
MuteCity
DC: 4800-2145-7903
Likes:
-rain
-nice path
-campsite in small forest
-illuminated arch & trees near station
-...sign near station...
-fountain/bamboo grove
-dead trees around Static and Ren's home felt appropriate
-modern tone
-trees
-flowers
-good bush placement
-Prime's house
*store on right
*bath on left
*hotel? on 2nd floor
-Ren's house
*I think someone dreamed of Aika
-Rachel's house
*...plebian?
*main room: (cue Nightmare Before Christmas) What's this?!
*sweets room
*2nd floor: what am I looking at? funeral parlor?
*good music choices
Dislikes:
-flower color/breed choice around fountain
-Prime's cabana room felt lacking compared to the rest of the house
-drawers on left(pave?) in the alpine room felt out of place
Suggestions:
-remove the first tile going from the plaza to the campsite
-another table or two in Rachel's alpine room
-replace the cosmos around the fountain
-PWPs:
*instrument shelter, cube sculpture, stadium lights, solar panels, geyser
*wind turbine on western side of the waterfall
*a few more streelights
Final Thoughts: very nice; obviously have put a good amount of time and effort into it. just needs some minor tweeks.
Rating: 4/5
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