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katelynross
5700-3111-4889
Town of Okinawa
Likes:
- Such a grand entrance! When I first awoke in your dream, I could tell it was gonna be a well-developed town.
- Very zen & beautiful with the path designs you chose, the ponds are cute
- The presents are in a good spot, as long as Redd or Katrina won't place their tents down there.
- The area to the top-left of the tree plaza, the zen clock & bench PWP with all the hybrids was beautiful
- All the special stumps lining the paths
- TENNN MILLION YEARS DUNGEOONN, and there was a pit fall behind it! Pure evil
- Great amount of flowers
- Wow i'm stealing the idea of cutting the partial grown bamboo, looks super fancy
- The illuminated arch ways, heading to your park
Dislikes:
- I'm not good with giving advice on zen towns, it's hard for me to think of ideas for them.
- Over all, it was well developed & a lovely town to roam around. Sorry for lack of constructive criticism.
Houses:
- Karen Home; once again beautiful, the refurbished dark green furniture works well with the pea**** chairs. Lots of cute foods rooms! I have a feeling this house is suppose to be some sort of resort/hotel/restaurant. I would've just said restaurant, but the spa upstairs made me think jungle resort.
- Tina Home; What a cute little sushi restaurant! c: The back room was my favourite. I've never seen a room like the one on the right, it was definitely creative. All those resetti's digging for ores haha
- Katelyn Home; One of the strongest houses. If I had to pick 1 room to re-do, i'd say the left room. It's just all minimalist furniture. The 6 & 9 lamps were lovely lmao
Rating: 4.5/5
katelynross
Senior Member
Can Someone review my town?
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Born2BWild
Town: Animalia
Dream Address: 5500-3801-6135
Nice little town. The PWP are placed well and the flowers are lovely. You can tell the town is still young, and it has nowhere to go but up!
Cant wait to see what else you do.
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Born2BWild
Town: Animalia
Dream Address: 5500-3801-6135
Nice little town. The PWP are placed well and the flowers are lovely. You can tell the town is still young, and it has nowhere to go but up!
Cant wait to see what else you do.
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Gummysaur
Dwerll
5200-3682-8293
Thank you for the presents at the town plaza. Great town I love the trees and path arrangements.
My suggestions to you are: use a different pink path and rearrange the flowers so the town doesn't look messy. The pink path looks messy and I think you should pick a tile pattern that connects to itself from all sides. The flowers look messy too. So pick similar color or similar breed or similar theme.
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MidnightSoiree
Senior Member
Can I get a review as well? (Aside from a few things being grown, everything is pretty much completeI'd just like a fresh set of eyes to give me some pointers.
Edit: Thanks for the reviews.
Edit: Thanks for the reviews.
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Zander
Paradox
5400-2967-8035
Great Legend of Zelda town! Too bad I can't open the chests and hear "duh dun dun DUN!" lol
Btw is Phoenix suppose to have his house in the middle of no where?
My suggestions: you can find more patterns... like dungeon entrances, the triforce, etc. HERE is one
You can even make your rooms look like events from the Legend of Zelda scenes.
You can also have your 2nd character and 3rd character dress like Zelda and Ganondorf.
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BluebellLight
bob is love bob is life
Can someone review my town? Dream Address in my signature 
I just have a couple more PWPs to put in, and blanket all the free space in my town with blue violets and yellow lilies (like by Purrl's house) Also, should I delete the Hammock by Lily's house? Is so, should I replace it with a metal bench or just nix it all together? Any review is appreciated
I just have a couple more PWPs to put in, and blanket all the free space in my town with blue violets and yellow lilies (like by Purrl's house) Also, should I delete the Hammock by Lily's house? Is so, should I replace it with a metal bench or just nix it all together? Any review is appreciated You have a visually beautiful town.
My suggestions for you are make path to your villagers' houses. You can dig up a few holly bush and remove the lemon tree by Marshal's house. You can get a path to Colton's house.
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Can I get a review as well? (Aside from a few things being grown, everything is pretty much complete.) I'd just like a fresh set of eyes to give me some pointers.
Likes:
- Your tree plaza is very detailed, lots of various path designs.
- Light & cutesy vibe over all
- Loved the diagonal paths lined with bushes
- Good flower colour coordination
- Loved the purple & blue flowers together above your Re-tail
- The illuminated arch way/trees with all the pink flowers
- Liked the mushrooms around the campsite, I sat there and ate them all. Good use of cedar trees there too.
- Finally I see someone with the Modern Town Hall
Dislikes:
- When I first woke up, I stepped off into water. I find it hard to use water moats cause placement to make them look realistic is everything.
- The little area with lots of pink roses & jacobs ladders is beautiful, but could use a PWP in the middle.
Houses:
- Melody Home; Obviously a side characters home
- Shelby Home; The front room was warm & fancy looking. The mermaid furniture was good mix with the fish set.
Rating: 3.9/5, Beautiful village!
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Yukari Yakumo
Countless Violet Clouds
BlueBellLight
Blue Bell
Dream Address: 5700-3315-5522
Likes:
- I suppose the plaza is why it's called Blue Bell
- flowers
- use flower to create pseudo-paths
- double totem poles
- good bridge placement
Dislikes:
- flower pseudo-paths felt small
- town felt a little too structured
- Lucille's house felt rather plain
Suggestions:
- space the flowers for the pseudo-paths so it's more than 1 space of room
- maybe some bushes
- might try some actual paths in addition to the flower-paths
- place trees that aren't part of the pathing in the empty areas; random placement
- add more personality to Lucille's house
Final Thoughts: very nice town, but it feels as though everything was planned to the point of lacking any semblance of natural growth
Rating: 3.5/5
Blue Bell
Dream Address: 5700-3315-5522
Likes:
- I suppose the plaza is why it's called Blue Bell
- flowers
- use flower to create pseudo-paths
- double totem poles
- good bridge placement
Dislikes:
- flower pseudo-paths felt small
- town felt a little too structured
- Lucille's house felt rather plain
Suggestions:
- space the flowers for the pseudo-paths so it's more than 1 space of room
- maybe some bushes
- might try some actual paths in addition to the flower-paths
- place trees that aren't part of the pathing in the empty areas; random placement
- add more personality to Lucille's house
Final Thoughts: very nice town, but it feels as though everything was planned to the point of lacking any semblance of natural growth
Rating: 3.5/5
NeapolitanNightmares
Senior Member
I know no one is really reviewing any at the moment but It'd be great if somebody could review mine! I've had New Leaf since the day before it came out and I've never done any landscaping of any type till the other week and now I guess it's almost done.
THINGS TO IGNORE (please) :
Timbra's house, she'll be gone soon
The middle of the bottom section, I haven't done anything there at all yet
The desolate path to the left of the town, future villagers are going there and I'll make it look nice when they're in
Patches of random wild flowers, I need to get rid of them still
Second characters house, my sister used to use it and I'm in the process of making it look normal
My basement, I've has the astro set in there for months and it looks bad so I'll be changing it
So yeah all criticism and suggestions are great, specifically what to put in the empty spot just north-west of the campsite
THANK YOU :3
EDIT: It'd help if I put my dream address wouldn't it! It's 7600-3091-0116
THINGS TO IGNORE (please) :
Timbra's house, she'll be gone soon
The middle of the bottom section, I haven't done anything there at all yet
The desolate path to the left of the town, future villagers are going there and I'll make it look nice when they're in
Patches of random wild flowers, I need to get rid of them still
Second characters house, my sister used to use it and I'm in the process of making it look normal
My basement, I've has the astro set in there for months and it looks bad so I'll be changing it
So yeah all criticism and suggestions are great, specifically what to put in the empty spot just north-west of the campsite
THANK YOU :3
EDIT: It'd help if I put my dream address wouldn't it! It's 7600-3091-0116
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NeapolitanNightmares
Senior Member
Nobody? 
Yukari Yakumo
Countless Violet Clouds
Needing a bit of a review for mine.
The town in general, but also specific bits of how to improve Reimu's left and right rooms(feudal Japanese bath and bedrooms, what to put where Vladimir's house is(he's moving), and zen clock and some street lamp locations.
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Jax1234
Gluten
DA: 4400-2388-3879
Likes:
- nice paths
- nice tree/bush/flower placing
- nice total display of stone tablet, zen garden, water pump, statue fountain, zen clock, zen lamps
- bamboo groves
- jacki's house; felt like a resort in some exotic country
- Richie's house; felt like the home of an English person in a rather warm country(Anglo-Indian?). really liked bungalow room on the right
Dislikes:
- skinny path going south from the east bridge
- diagonal paths are skinny(they can look good if larger, but only one space wide looks weird)
- sarcophagus in Richie's main room felt out of place
- several empty areas that feel like they need a little more; between Graham and Rodney's house and north-west corner
Suggestions:
- add paths to Hamlet and Alli's houses and widen the ones to the other villagers
- widen the path going south from the east bridge
- widen the diagonal paths
- until you get the wooden bridge, I'd put another bridge there in the meantime(suspension maybe?), otherwise a villager might move there and prevent you from building it(happened to me).
- just a thought, but might see how it feels if you remove the paths on both sides of the wisteria trellis' and place one that goes through them instead.
Final Thoughts: very nice. just needs a tiny bit of work.
Rating: 3.8/5
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The town in general, but also specific bits of how to improve Reimu's left and right rooms(feudal Japanese bath and bedrooms, what to put where Vladimir's house is(he's moving), and zen clock and some street lamp locations.
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Jax1234
Gluten
DA: 4400-2388-3879
Likes:
- nice paths
- nice tree/bush/flower placing
- nice total display of stone tablet, zen garden, water pump, statue fountain, zen clock, zen lamps
- bamboo groves
- jacki's house; felt like a resort in some exotic country
- Richie's house; felt like the home of an English person in a rather warm country(Anglo-Indian?). really liked bungalow room on the right
Dislikes:
- skinny path going south from the east bridge
- diagonal paths are skinny(they can look good if larger, but only one space wide looks weird)
- sarcophagus in Richie's main room felt out of place
- several empty areas that feel like they need a little more; between Graham and Rodney's house and north-west corner
Suggestions:
- add paths to Hamlet and Alli's houses and widen the ones to the other villagers
- widen the path going south from the east bridge
- widen the diagonal paths
- until you get the wooden bridge, I'd put another bridge there in the meantime(suspension maybe?), otherwise a villager might move there and prevent you from building it(happened to me).
- just a thought, but might see how it feels if you remove the paths on both sides of the wisteria trellis' and place one that goes through them instead.
Final Thoughts: very nice. just needs a tiny bit of work.
Rating: 3.8/5
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Thank you so much for the review. Unfortunately I can't put up a bridge. If I do my villagers won't ping me for the last pwp. It is big issue. But I will put a light project on each side to save the bridge placement. Thank you. Good advice about my paths. I will do that right now. I am glad you noticed that Jacki's house was a resort, yippee, it took a lot of time to do that. <3.
Yukari, I tried your dream address in your signature but it didn't work for me.
NeapolitanNightmares
Hockley
DA: 7600-3091-0116
Overall I thought your town was enjoyable to visit. I loved how you placed your pwps.
Likes: Nice path placements, I liked your paths alot.
I liked that you used bushes to line paths. That made it look clean and very different.
I really enjoyed the placement of your zen bell.
Dislikes: I wonder if a different bridge, than the wooden bridge, would look better with your paths.
The trees around the bottom part of your fountain block the view of it.
Charlies house: I thought the best room was the library!!! I loved it. I might have to steal the idea it was so awesome. My other favorite room was the store. All the rooms were great but those 2 stand out. I didn't review the other house because you mentioned you were changing it. I hope this was what you were looking for and it helps.
Rating:4/5
NeapolitanNightmares
Hockley
DA: 7600-3091-0116
Overall I thought your town was enjoyable to visit. I loved how you placed your pwps.
Likes: Nice path placements, I liked your paths alot.
I liked that you used bushes to line paths. That made it look clean and very different.
I really enjoyed the placement of your zen bell.
Dislikes: I wonder if a different bridge, than the wooden bridge, would look better with your paths.
The trees around the bottom part of your fountain block the view of it.
Charlies house: I thought the best room was the library!!! I loved it. I might have to steal the idea it was so awesome. My other favorite room was the store. All the rooms were great but those 2 stand out. I didn't review the other house because you mentioned you were changing it. I hope this was what you were looking for and it helps.
Rating:4/5
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NeapolitanNightmares
Senior Member
Thank you very much! If you meant the back room then that is supposed to be a kitchen not a store haha!
Yukari Yakumo
Countless Violet Clouds
that's weird. just updated though, so should work now.
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Dinomates
Solaceon
DA: 7900-3375-2506
Likes:
-plaza
-paths
-hotspring & bamboo grove
-nice planning
-Igi's house; arcade, play area, lounge and ? room(blanking on the word, but resort/spa relaxation areas?)
Dislikes:
-several empty spots
-Subject and Quotes houses undeveloped
Suggestions:
- a bridge south of Annalisa's house
- some more trees in empty areas(ex: between Quote and Jacques house)
- improve the neglected player homes
- PWPs:
* statue fountain, windmill, wind turbine, bell, picnic basket(or pattern to substitute), metal bench
* lighthouse in south-eastern corner
Final Thoughts: very nice, just needs a few additions
Rating: 3.8/5
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