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[Aetherinne]

I can join the reviewing army? Or is the slots full? xD

 

[TeeTee]

Thanks for the review TeeTee, I'll keep all of those things in mind. I'm just glad another person got to enjoy it.

Welcome and thank you, I enjoyed your town quite a lot. It relaxed me and made me forget the real life stuff.

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

I can join the reviewing army? Or is the slots full? xD

No slots at all.
just write a review at your discretion when anyone requests.

and on that note, I'm kinda needing one.

 

[iheartbeau]

Review for iheartbeau
Town: FoxRiver
Dream Address: 5200-2186-5867

First of all xD *high fives you for being a deer lover*
I like your path. It runs very smoothly. The only tiny problem I have is: why not put path on either side of Bam's house then the players can run directly from the train station to Bam's house and beyond?
My main suggestion to you is to work on the greenery. For example decide on what type or color of flower should border your path? Or should you plant trees and bushes in an orderly fashion? Should you have patches of flowers arranged by colors/patterns/species? I think you should think about those questions for a bit.
My other suggestion is the area by Wisteria Trellis... maybe make it into a botanic garden? Have Topiary, Statue Fountain, Flower Bed, Flower Arch, Flower Clock or Fencing added to the area?
Thanks for letting me dream and review your town. I like it I can't wait to see what you do with your town in the future. Also thanks for fating me up with those delicious treats at the town plaza. xD

Thanks for the feedback! I have been keeping some open spots in the Wisteria Trellis area so that when topiaries are unlocked, I can add some there. I totally agree on the flower arrangements. I just don't have a strategy / vision for it yet. Thanks again!

 

[Noofle]

Review for Yukari Yakumo
Town: Gensokyo
DC: 4300-3714-2577

I like your town a lot, it is very complete and not lacking greenery in any areas. I love how you set up diagonal paths with your bushes and walkways. I also love the small stream that runs throughout your town and the mossy stone path. Your Zen area is very nice and I especially love how you did Stonehenge with the bare perfect trees, very creative. I like how your town had different themes in different areas within it. Love the little flower planter patterns and the sand path near Stonehenge
I have to say I am so jealous of your stain glass patterns, they are great! Yukari's house is fun and eclectic, I love how you make all the different furniture work perfectly;Xmas room, Creepy room, Asian room, all are wonderful. Great house. Alice's house is very elegant and lovely, I very much liked her back room with the pink rococo furniture. Marisa's house was very nice, you made the cabin furniture work nicely here, but can see the are rooms still in progress.
Overall, a lovely town, very well organized, with lots to see. I have to say I love how you made all your gyroids work in your houses. I normally hate them but you used them perfectly!
Suggestions: A few less trees, feels a little tight with space, to give your town a bit more open feel to it and more flowers (hybrids). I think if you put flowers where you took trees down it would add more color while opening up space.
Rating: 4.8/5.00 ^.^

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

Review for Yukari Yakumo
Town: Gensokyo
DC: 4300-3714-2577

I like your town a lot, it is very complete and not lacking greenery in any areas. I love how you set up diagonal paths with your bushes and walkways. I also love the small stream that runs throughout your town and the mossy stone path. Your Zen area is very nice and I especially love how you did Stonehenge with the bare perfect trees, very creative. I like how your town had different themes in different areas within it. Love the little flower planter patterns and the sand path near Stonehenge
I have to say I am so jealous of your stain glass patterns, they are great! Yukari's house is fun and eclectic, I love how you make all the different furniture work perfectly;Xmas room, Creepy room, Asian room, all are wonderful. Great house. Alice's house is very elegant and lovely, I very much liked her back room with the pink rococo furniture. Marisa's house was very nice, you made the cabin furniture work nicely here, but can see the are rooms still in progress.
Overall, a lovely town, very well organized, with lots to see. I have to say I love how you made all your gyroids work in your houses. I normally hate them but you used them perfectly!
Suggestions: A few less trees, feels a little tight with space, to give your town a bit more open feel to it and more flowers (hybrids). I think if you put flowers where you took trees down it would add more color while opening up space.
Rating: 4.8/5.00 ^.^

Thanks.
Where do you think I should thin the trees?
I'm contemplating the south-west corner, west of the police station, south-east of ReTail, and north-east of the tower.

And the stain glass patterns, except for Reimu's(winter option on outer and inner) are magical for the outer and custom designs for the inner. Wendell should be wandering around with them.

 

[AppleBitterCrumble]

Town:Gensokyo
Mayor: Yukari
DA: 4300-3714-2577

Some of the stairs on the plaza seem a little misleading are you gonna put a platform there or are they suppose to be like that?
I love the paths~
The flowers could be more organized
The tree set up is nice!

Alice's house review:

I really like how the main floors room looks cozy and nice <3
I also love the music xD
The back room is very quaint but could use some music like Steep Hill or Stale Cupcakes with the Candy Music box as the player?
Im guessing that the left room is a WIP? Try looking for some of the Zen Garden things like the Deer Scare or the little posts
That little blue dress in the right room seems a little out of place maybe something else not so bright?
Absolutely love the basement nuff said
Why are there gems on the floor in the top room?! xD
I like how the top room actually seems like a room (if thats what your going for.)

(Ill finish the rest tomorrow i need to do a trade.)

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

Town:Gensokyo
Mayor: Yukari
DA: 4300-3714-2577

Some of the stairs on the plaza seem a little misleading are you gonna put a platform there or are they suppose to be like that?
I love the paths~
The flowers could be more organized
The tree set up is nice!

Alice's house review:

I really like how the main floors room looks cozy and nice <3
I also love the music xD
The back room is very quaint but could use some music like Steep Hill or Stale Cupcakes with the Candy Music box as the player?
Im guessing that the left room is a WIP? Try looking for some of the Zen Garden things like the Deer Scare or the little posts
That little blue dress in the right room seems a little out of place maybe something else not so bright?
Absolutely love the basement nuff said
Why are there gems on the floor in the top room?! xD
I like how the top room actually seems like a room (if thats what your going for.)

(Ill finish the rest tomorrow i need to do a trade.)

Thanks.
I'm making Alice's left room into a palace bath.
The rest I'm having as other Touhou characters room's represented by the flowers and dolls.

stupid attachment not going away.

 

[Noofle]

Hi,
I will go back through your town to see where you are referring to, regarding the trees, and post my suggestions. I will definitely look for Wendell to grab some of your patterns...thanks!

 

[Noofle]

Yukari,
I think I see the area you are talking about, with the perfect apples? How about making a hidden park with the trees and the arch as an entrance?

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

bump

 

[Myst]

I'd like a review. Btw, I post about dream towns on tumblr here if anyone's interested.

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

Mystery2013
Moonlite
5900-3030-4905

Likes:
-winter!
-lots of flowers
-Misery's house; can't quite figure out the theme. Hospital at Christmas?
-Mystery's house; 221B Baker Street?

Dislikes:
-lack of paths leading to many places
-no trees other than the two clumps
-large completely empty spaces

Suggestions:
-more trees
-more paths
-add a bridge west or north-east of Mystery's house
-pwp's: bell, water well, street lamp, wisteria trellis, windmill, wind turbine, lighthouse

Final Thoughts: the home interiors are nice, but the town feels very empty

Rating: 3/5

 

[Eirynfox]

would be interesting to create categories and what constitutes a score (ie, 5 for tidyness, 5 for theme, use of blah blah in a ... type town) and then get different people to review those town types only etc

 

[Smokee]

Would someone please review mine? it's still a wip but I think it's coming along and I would like some feedback. :3

 

[katelynross]

Anyone wanna review mine? Still a work in progress and i think i put the presents in a bad spot lol
Okinawa: 5700-3111-4889

 

[oak]

Yukari Yakumo
4300-3782-6033
Town of Gensokyo

Likes:
- Paths flow nicely from the tree plaza
- All your different ground designs, especially the stone one below the Alice house
- It had a nice natural feel to it, it wasn't crazily over done!
- Lots of trees & bamboo
- The sideways paths lined with bushes, to the left of the Town Hall
- You've definitely hit the zen theme right on the mark, it's beautiful
- Yurkari's House; I loved your basement, i'm a fan of spooky rooms. Definitely one of your stronger houses.
- Alice's house was more simple than others, but the backroom was adorable. The upstairs is really nice too, the classic set is one of my favourites.

Dislikes:
- More flower colour coordination
- Reimu's house is still under construction in some rooms, but it looks great so far
- Marisa's house was under construction too, but the cabin/nature rooms are a good idea, just needs a little more development.
- Sorry constructive criticism is hard lol

Rating: 4/5

 

[oak]

Would someone please review mine? it's still a wip but I think it's coming along and I would like some feedback. :3

Smokee
4300-3625-7209
Town of Radia

Likes:
- Very cute tree plaza path design, the brick with the flower boarders
- The water path was a nice touch!
- Abundance of hybrids, especially pink roses
- Matching fairy-tale bridges
- Liked your "Don't run" sign

Dislikes:
- Between Lucha & Bob's house isn't very developed, it might be a good place for a park. Make an enclosed area (like a square or circle) with buses & add PWP like the jungle gym, sandbox, water fountain, tire toy, etc.
- Maybe maybe a forest out of cedar trees?
- Around your picnic blanket is sorta bland, could use some flowers
- In front of your coffee shop could be more organized, maybe move the whole path design one square to the right so it lines up with the coffee shop. I know there's not much room in front of it for a PWP, but if a bench would fit, it would look nice.

Houses:
- Cadbury Home; still a work in progress, but the refurbished chairs in the left room are adorable. The right room has all the right items to make a really cute room, just needs to be re-organized. Upstairs is quite fancy with the rococo furniture, maybe think about refurbishing it to make it more unique.
- Earth Home; I can tell it's a side users house, very basic.
- Leafy Home; It was only one room, but it was still cute. It had a quaint & soft feeling to it!

Rating: 3/5

 

[Born2BWild]

My dream address changed, FWIW. I've made a couple of changes (erased a few paths, organized flowers, planted trees and bushes, etc.) Any reviews from others are welcome.

 

[Smokee]

Smokee
4300-3625-7209
Town of Radia

Likes:
- Very cute tree plaza path design, the brick with the flower boarders
- The water path was a nice touch!
- Abundance of hybrids, especially pink roses
- Matching fairy-tale bridges
- Liked your "Don't run" sign

Dislikes:
- Between Lucha & Bob's house is very developed, it might be a good place for a park. Make an enclosed area (like a square or circle) with buses & add PWP like the jungle gym, sandbox, water fountain, tire toy, etc.
- Maybe maybe a forest out of cedar trees?
- Around your picnic blanket is sorta bland, could use some flowers
- In front of your coffee shop could be more organized, maybe move the whole path design one square to the right so it lines up with the coffee shop. I know there's not much room in front of it for a PWP, but if a bench would fit, it would look nice.

Houses:
- Cadbury Home; still a work in progress, but the refurbished chairs in the left room are adorable. The right room has all the right items to make a really cute room, just needs to be re-organized. Upstairs is quite fancy with the rococo furniture, maybe think about refurbishing it to make it more unique.
- Earth Home; I can tell it's a side users house, very basic.
- Leafy Home; It was only one room, but it was still cute. It had a quaint & soft feeling to it!

Rating: 3/5

Thank you! You gave me very good constructive criticism, and now I know what to work on!