End of animal crossing fan fict

[TrayvonBarley]

isabelle dies
and youre like
noooooooo
and there is a whole thing
where your character is walking around
with sad music in the background
looking at what his village has become
and the game ends with him in the train station
and the monkey is like
Would you like to visit a near town or a far away town
and your character is like
far away
and it ends

please rate it and tell me if its good.

 

[billowillo]

I liked it a lot, great job.

 

[BellGreen]

The ending is pretty dark for an AC game ._.

 

[Purin]

How did Isabelle die ?

 

[billowillo]

How did Isabelle die ?

Heart worms probably.

 

[BungoTheElf]

I liked it but next time can you put it in complete sentences?

 

[MyLifeIsCake]

isabelle dies
and youre like
noooooooo
and there is a whole thing
where your character is walking around
with sad music in the background
looking at what his village has become
and the game ends with him in the train station
and the monkey is like
Would you like to visit a near town or a far away town
and your character is like
far away
and it ends

please rate it and tell me if its good.

Pretty good... But it needs some spice. Maybe the train crashes on the island and you overthrow Tortimer and his army of kappas and then you rule the islands of animal crossing and become a tri-billionaire and becomes so power hungry everything is destroyed... YAY destruction!

 

[Corduroy]

I like it, and I think it is a very nice ending to the story as far as I know.
But just in my personal opinion, a lot of Animal Crossing fan fictions seem to have an end in a similar fashion - the town is destroyed, something bad happens to Isabelle or she betrays the main character, and the town is deleted in some way.
It's your story though, so it can end however ya' want.

 

[CantDeleteThisAccount]

i cry evertim

:'(

 

[Lurrdoc]

It was the mayor of said town with the axe in the town hall.

 

[Farobi]

this is almost not stupid

10/10 would read again

 

[Wallytehcat]

11/10 i kept crying evryteim.

 

[SliceAndDice]

Your fanfic is bad and you should feel bad!