Thank you very much for the suggestions! In the future I'll definitely figure out what I could add to the card series and Halloween series.
Also I will think about the yellow path tiles a bit more. Thanks for the input!
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Dream of my town? Review for review!
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Also I will think about the yellow path tiles a bit more. Thanks for the input!
I've never received a review of my town, and I think it would be pretty neat! My dream address is 4800-2245-2005, feel free to visit and give feedback 
But my disclaimer is that my town is still unfinished in a lot of ways (still need to expand and refine my rooms, grow more hybrids, get my dream neighbors, get certain PWPs and develop certain areas, etc.).
To make the visit quicker & easier, I suggest that you don't even bother with:
- Fern's tent. She's the character I use for resetting for villager houses, so I don't bother to customize her tent or customize her appearance or anything. (But I plan to build a house for her eventually, once I get my dream neighbors and don't need to reset for houses anymore.)
- The side rooms, and the upstairs room, in Lyra's castle. (The main room is decorated, though, if you want to see that.)
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My little review for noahmeow's town, New Bark:
Things I like:
- I like the trees surrounding the plaza! I did the same thing with mine.
- I really like the path you've used! I might've seen it around before, but it's not one I see constantly in other towns. It has a nice intricate, original, hand-crafted, and woodsy feel to it. The other tiles you have around town (like the flower-boxes and wooden paths) match well with the main path, which is good. I also love the crop patterns and the scarecrow together in one part of town.
- The park above Bam's house is very well done!
- I like the flower color-coordinating that you did around the totem pole.
- Overall I like your town, and I especially like parts that fit with the rustic/woodsy atmosphere of your town name, of the paths, and so on.
Criticisms/Advice:
- I think some yellow/orange and blue flowers would look nice to coordinate next to Bam's house, instead of the red/white/pink carnations that are currently there. The flowers below Bam's house could also be a better arrangement, probably. There's a block of blue, a block of orange, a block of black, a block of pink, and a block of purple. It makes me wonder what those blocks of color are supposed to visually achieve, since there's nothing especially colorful nearby to coordinate with them.
- You have the fairytale town hall, which is much fancier (it's supposed to look like a palace with its probably Russian-inspired architecture) than the woodsy feel of your paths and the rest of your town. So I think the default, or even zen, town hall might fit your town better (but it's fine if you prefer the fairy-tale one, just my two cents!).
- I'm all about unity and things flowing naturally, and I admit that a few places in your town, like the pyramids and the Stonehenge, don't seem to me to "flow" with the surrounding areas, or the town at large, much. Same with the fancy castle, with a rustic cabin just next door. But I understand if you like a variety of different PWPs and house styles, so you want to include them all in your town!
I'll address the interior of your houses separately here:
The log cabin -- great exterior!
- I like the ski/cabin combination in your log cabin house, but not sure why the museum signs are there.
- I also love the cabin refurbishing you did in the left room of that house, and the use of the mush wall is effective!
- The other rooms look under construction
The castle -- pretty nice exterior!
- In the main room I immediately get the feeling that I'm inside a fancy castle to match the outside, with the music and the princess furni.
- The left room is pretty cute, but it might could be organized better if I had to find a criticism.
- The back room is a nice kitchen, but I'm not sure about the standees (tree, grass, hedge, etc.)
- The right room is interesting, I like it!
- Downtairs -- a bit messy, but I get the impression it's supposed to be messy hehe (with the sloppy furni and all)
- Upstairs -- a pretty cool garden room, I like it!
But my disclaimer is that my town is still unfinished in a lot of ways (still need to expand and refine my rooms, grow more hybrids, get my dream neighbors, get certain PWPs and develop certain areas, etc.).To make the visit quicker & easier, I suggest that you don't even bother with:
- Fern's tent. She's the character I use for resetting for villager houses, so I don't bother to customize her tent or customize her appearance or anything. (But I plan to build a house for her eventually, once I get my dream neighbors and don't need to reset for houses anymore.)
- The side rooms, and the upstairs room, in Lyra's castle. (The main room is decorated, though, if you want to see that.)
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My little review for noahmeow's town, New Bark:
Things I like:
- I like the trees surrounding the plaza! I did the same thing with mine.
- I really like the path you've used! I might've seen it around before, but it's not one I see constantly in other towns. It has a nice intricate, original, hand-crafted, and woodsy feel to it. The other tiles you have around town (like the flower-boxes and wooden paths) match well with the main path, which is good. I also love the crop patterns and the scarecrow together in one part of town.
- The park above Bam's house is very well done!
- I like the flower color-coordinating that you did around the totem pole.
- Overall I like your town, and I especially like parts that fit with the rustic/woodsy atmosphere of your town name, of the paths, and so on.
Criticisms/Advice:
- I think some yellow/orange and blue flowers would look nice to coordinate next to Bam's house, instead of the red/white/pink carnations that are currently there. The flowers below Bam's house could also be a better arrangement, probably. There's a block of blue, a block of orange, a block of black, a block of pink, and a block of purple. It makes me wonder what those blocks of color are supposed to visually achieve, since there's nothing especially colorful nearby to coordinate with them.
- You have the fairytale town hall, which is much fancier (it's supposed to look like a palace with its probably Russian-inspired architecture) than the woodsy feel of your paths and the rest of your town. So I think the default, or even zen, town hall might fit your town better (but it's fine if you prefer the fairy-tale one, just my two cents!).
- I'm all about unity and things flowing naturally, and I admit that a few places in your town, like the pyramids and the Stonehenge, don't seem to me to "flow" with the surrounding areas, or the town at large, much. Same with the fancy castle, with a rustic cabin just next door. But I understand if you like a variety of different PWPs and house styles, so you want to include them all in your town!
I'll address the interior of your houses separately here:
The log cabin -- great exterior!
- I like the ski/cabin combination in your log cabin house, but not sure why the museum signs are there.
- I also love the cabin refurbishing you did in the left room of that house, and the use of the mush wall is effective!
- The other rooms look under construction
The castle -- pretty nice exterior!
- In the main room I immediately get the feeling that I'm inside a fancy castle to match the outside, with the music and the princess furni.
- The left room is pretty cute, but it might could be organized better if I had to find a criticism.
- The back room is a nice kitchen, but I'm not sure about the standees (tree, grass, hedge, etc.)
- The right room is interesting, I like it!
- Downtairs -- a bit messy, but I get the impression it's supposed to be messy hehe (with the sloppy furni and all)
- Upstairs -- a pretty cool garden room, I like it!
Thank you so much for the lengthy response! The flowers around Bam's house are just a storage area, idk what to do with them. And i'm breeding the carnations, i'll be selling them today or tomorrow so they'll be gone soon. I agree, it does look messy. I've been contemplated getting the zen buildings, the fairy-tale ones just look so much more fun. Inner conflict. I plan on turning the cabin house into a log hotel thing. Thank you for all your criticisms, it got my brain going about what needs to be fixed. I'll do yours in a minute!My little review for noahmeow's town, New Bark:
Things I like:
- I like the trees surrounding the plaza! I did the same thing with mine.
- I really like the path you've used! I might've seen it around before, but it's not one I see constantly in other towns. It has a nice intricate, original, hand-crafted, and woodsy feel to it. The other tiles you have around town (like the flower-boxes and wooden paths) match well with the main path, which is good. I also love the crop patterns and the scarecrow together in one part of town.
- The park above Bam's house is very well done!
- I like the flower color-coordinating that you did around the totem pole.
- Overall I like your town, and I especially like parts that fit with the rustic/woodsy atmosphere of your town name, of the paths, and so on.
Criticisms/Advice:
- I think some yellow/orange and blue flowers would look nice to coordinate next to Bam's house, instead of the red/white/pink carnations that are currently there. The flowers below Bam's house could also be a better arrangement, probably. There's a block of blue, a block of orange, a block of black, a block of pink, and a block of purple. It makes me wonder what those blocks of color are supposed to visually achieve, since there's nothing especially colorful nearby to coordinate with them.
- You have the fairytale town hall, which is much fancier (it's supposed to look like a palace with its probably Russian-inspired architecture) than the woodsy feel of your paths and the rest of your town. So I think the default, or even zen, town hall might fit your town better (but it's fine if you prefer the fairy-tale one, just my two cents!).
- I'm all about unity and things flowing naturally, and I admit that a few places in your town, like the pyramids and the Stonehenge, don't seem to me to "flow" with the surrounding areas, or the town at large, much. Same with the fancy castle, with a rustic cabin just next door. But I understand if you like a variety of different PWPs and house styles, so you want to include them all in your town!
I'll address the interior of your houses separately here:
The log cabin -- great exterior!
- I like the ski/cabin combination in your log cabin house, but not sure why the museum signs are there.
- I also love the cabin refurbishing you did in the left room of that house, and the use of the mush wall is effective!
- The other rooms look under construction
The castle -- pretty nice exterior!
- In the main room I immediately get the feeling that I'm inside a fancy castle to match the outside, with the music and the princess furni.
- The left room is pretty cute, but it might could be organized better if I had to find a criticism.
- The back room is a nice kitchen, but I'm not sure about the standees (tree, grass, hedge, etc.)
- The right room is interesting, I like it!
- Downtairs -- a bit messy, but I get the impression it's supposed to be messy hehe (with the sloppy furni and all)
- Upstairs -- a pretty cool garden room, I like it!
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Landscape - I love love love fall towns! The path in the tree square is perfect. I definitely give people appreciation when they make natural paths, it's a lot of work to maintain. Landscape wise, it's a beautiful town! If I had to give a criticism, i'd say re-do the flowers around your fountain so they're colour coordinated better. That little point in front of Charlise's house is dying for a PWP. I think it might be too small though sadly. :cI've never received a review of my town, and I think it would be pretty neat! My dream address is 4800-2245-2005, feel free to visit and give feedback
To make the visit quicker & easier, I suggest that you don't even bother with:
- Fern's tent. She's the character I use for resetting for villager houses, so I don't bother to customize her tent or customize her appearance or anything. (But I plan to build a house for her eventually, once I get my dream neighbors and don't need to reset for houses anymore.)
- The side rooms, and the upstairs room, in Lyra's castle. (The main room is decorated, though, if you want to see that.)
Estel - Loved the outside with all the white flowers, looked all royal. All the rooms flowed with your white expensive theme. Loved the middle-right room, it was small but elegant! This house was honestly so lovely, it made me jealous. I loved you didn't just throw whole sets in there. No complaints in this house!
Violet - It looked like a little cottage, and I loved it.
Lyra - I know you said to not really focus on this house, but I looked in it anyways! Refurbishing with ores is always a good idea. I think I liked the other houses better, but all the furniture matched the stained glass!
Overall, a very cute town! All your hybrids were fun to run through mwuahaha
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I'll definitely consider your advice and improvements, and thanks for the compliments too! ^_^
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