☆ Ahri's Dream Review ヽ(*・ω・)ﾉ ✳

[Sanaki]

Just finish your dream town and need a review? I decided to reopen because I got lazy with the last one because of how many Dream Addresses came in but now I'm ready to do them all because I want the badge also. I am also lacking inspiration for my own town and would like to get some ideas.

I will post a top 3 once I do enough reviews.

RULES

☆ I will not review your town if you don't fill out the form completely.

☆ I assess landscaping, villagers, villager placement, flowers, etc.

☆ I give constructive criticism, I don't water down anything. You aren't obligated to take my advice.

☆ Don't refer to your signature for your Dream Address.

☆ Don't get mad if I don't like your town ヽ(*・ω・)ﾉ

FORM

Mayor Name:
Town Name:
Dream Address:
What Type of Town?:​

 

[tarakdeep]

Mayor Name:tarakdeep
Town Name:smashvil
Dream Address4600-2456-0517
What Type of Town?:zen

 

[Sanaki]

Mayor Name:tarakdeep
Town Name:smashvil
Dream Address:in signiture
What Type of Town?:zen

Read the rules, plus your signature doesn't work.

 

[tarakdeep]

Ya sorry I fixed it

 

[Sanaki]

Have you updated this town since my last review? Because I don't want to do it again if I already have seen it

 

[tarakdeep]

You reviewed my town before?

 

[Sanaki]

Yeah, I'm Mayor Elsa.

 

[tarakdeep]

O lol well thx I feel. Dumm

 

[Sanaki]

It's not like you knew

 

[Sid2125]

Mayor Name:Sydney
Town Name:Olympus
Dream Address:490025873496
What Type of Town?: there is no real theme it's not quite done and there is stuff everywhere but I would like some advice on what I should do with the rest of my town

 

[Sanaki]

☆ Don't refer to your signature for your Dream Address.

>_>

 

[chronic]

North West

 

[Sanaki]

Mayor Name: Dee
Town Name: Inwood
Dream Address: 4800-2169-3530
What Type of Town?: Old, Pacific Northwest forest in late autumn

I will update later today with some noticeable changes . Let me know if you'd rather prefer the updated version

Well if you'd like a more accurate review then I suggest giving me the updated version But it's up to you~

 

[chronic]

I'll send you a PM when It's updated-- I've been playing a lot these past few days

 

[TeeTee]

Mayor Name: Cherry
Town Name: Harvest
Dream Address: 5800-2153-8372
What Type of Town?: Fairy-Tale Deer Town

 

[Sanaki]

Mayor Name:Sydney
Town Name:Olympus
Dream Address:490025873496
What Type of Town?: there is no real theme it's not quite done and there is stuff everywhere but I would like some advice on what I should do with the rest of my town

Overall I think your town is decent. Your paths are unique, not the style I'd choose, though. I do like how you lined the paths with bushes. The house placement is pretty good, but some flower patches are random and unorganized. I feel if you organized your flower colors more it would look better. I'm also not a fan of the modern stuff (sorry ;x) but you made it look alright. The zen garden is pretty cute but a little disorganized right now. For villagers I feel like Kyle and Papi's houses are extreme eye sores and really take away from that area of the town. ;-; They are cute villagers but I'm not a fan of the houses. Wolfgang, Cherry, Phoebe, Julian I am fans of and are cool. But you did say it's a work in progress, so I wish you luck as you renovate and complete your town.

What I really suggest would probably be a park or something, or at least a lot more public works projects. I suggest getting the Uchi ones such as the picnic blanket and bus stop along with the rose arch and making it prettier, also putting your dream town's dream in the daylight would really help bring out the colors.

Overall I would say that your town is a 6/10 in it's current state.

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I'll send you a PM when It's updated-- I've been playing a lot these past few days

Just repost your form here.

 

[ethre]

Mayor Name: Shaymin
Town Name: Ponyvill
Dream Address: 4800-3468-9192
What Type of Town?: I was actually originally going for a fairy-tale theme, but that sort of exploded in my face when I started thinkin up other ideas. So I guess I'm going for a pretty theme now. You're seeing my town in a REALLY ugly state at the moment, so I apologize. ^^

 

[Sid2125]

Thanks for your review I will have to come back when I get finished.

 

[Sanaki]

Mayor Name: Cherry
Town Name: Harvest
Dream Address: 5800-2153-8372
What Type of Town?: Fairy-Tale Deer Town

YUUUUSH I was hoping you'd want me to review your town, the deer are my favorite species.

Oh my goodness your paths are perfection lol, I love the little grass detail in the paths. I also love the pyramid and sphinx idea, might I suggest a sand pattern on the ground? I saw this in a video on youtube, somebody made a small desert area and I really liked it. The carnations around the trellis look so cute, along with the windmill. Oh my I actually like the area with the Eiffel Tower PWP, the roses/tulips match the color. I also love the tiles for the plaza, they are so cute and subtle. I felt like the Jungle Gym PWP was sort of random however since the roses don't really reflect the fairy tale theme (In color) since it's right next to the town hall it feels like a huge change of scenery. I really like your cafe's placement and decorations around it. I feel like around your picnic blanket you could have white/pink carnations, the orange tulips don't really match in this area.

Oh my goodness lol I walked into Diana's house and it's all bugs and random furniture ._. Might I suggest filling it with pink roccoco furniture or make a theme for her house? xD Villager houses along with the pattern mule's houses are nicely placed and I like how they aren't all bunched up (I usually like them to be together and precise in the way of placement so it leaves room for landscaping, but you did really well.)

Overall your town is a 8/10 in my eyes.

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Mayor Name: Shaymin
Town Name: Ponyvill
Dream Address: 4800-3468-9192
What Type of Town?: I was actually originally going for a fairy-tale theme, but that sort of exploded in my face when I started thinkin up other ideas. So I guess I'm going for a pretty theme now. You're seeing my town in a REALLY ugly state at the moment, so I apologize. ^^

I believe I reviewed your town already unless you updated the Dream Address in Elsa's Dream Review thread. c: If it updated though I'd still like to review it~ (≧∪≦)

 

[Sanaki]

bump~