▲▼▲WonderK's Dream Review Thread▲▼▲

[WonderK]

Welcome to my dream review thread. I've seen some people make threads like this in their grand quest to obtain their dream badges so I decided to make one as well. Hopefully I will get to visit a lot of fantastic towns, and at the same time, obtain my dream badges (bronze, silver, gold). I don't mind if you're town is undeveloped or in the works. I'll still provide you with feedback on whats looks great and what you need to work on. Also, feel more than free to visit my DA as well.

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What are you waiting for? Start posting those dream addresses!




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[jasa11]

6700-2142-4575 2 houses are in WIP !

 

[Mayorofarcadia]

6700-3594-9438

Aaron's house is wip

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

In the signature.
Reimu's right room is a wip I'd like advice on.

 

[xanisha]

I would love it if you would review my town my DA is 5200-3732-3031

 

[Rodeo]

4700-2132-6593
It's almost done. I need to place down more PWPs.

 

[ethre]

Dream code is in my sig!

 

[IncendiaryPyro]

It's not that great, but oh well. Mind visiting? c:

 

[rescued]

Dream code in my sig. :3 Any comments/suggestions are welcomed! I'm still trying to make it perfect. <3

 

[WonderK]

Jasa11's town of Freeland

Overall, I think your town needs work. You're paths are quite un-organized and run all over the place. I kept getting lost and had to look at the map to know where I was going. I suggest using your beaches to breed a lot of hybrid flowers. The flowers in your town don't match and are spread out everywhere. Your PWPs projects are quite diverse. It's cool, and also at the same time, it's not. You should try to have PWPs that match each other or designate certain areas of your town that have certain themes with PWPs. Also, your PWPs seem to be placed in spots without a care in the world. You should try to organize them a bit (make them symmetrical to each other). Your houses on the other hand are pretty awesome. I'm particularly talking about your house. Wonderful harry potter theme!

Mayorofarcadia's town of Arcadia

Wonderful patterns for the paths. It really matches the fairy tale theme you're going for. Organization of your path works is OK. The flowers you're using are fantastic. They certainly match the fairy tale theme and your pattern colors. I suggest putting more fairy tale lights around your paths. Really light up your paths and make the presentation more glamorous. The PWPs you have currently are great and are put in good spots (some organization needed). Going on to your house; it's pretty cool. I think your kitchen is awesome. It certainly makes mine look undeveloped. Overall, great town. I noticed some bare patches here and there. I'm guessing it's still a work in progress.

Yukari Yakumo's town of Gensokyo

Just giving advice on Reimu's right room. You should try putting more gracie furniture in the room. It's alright to have duplicates of furniture as long as it's not cluttered. I also suggest trying to put in some orange/blue roses in the room along with more plants. Other than that, the room looks pretty great.
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[Guero101]

My DA : 5800-2701-1467

 

[LadyVivia]

5100-3407-2179
I've been working on this town A LOT ever since I visited your town..

 

[BerryPop]

Please visit ninten! It's a wip but the da is 5100-3625-9746

 

[WonderK]

Xanisha's town of Laputa
Right off the bat, I must say I'm quite the Myazaki fan. Noticed the Laputa theme right away. Your paths are great. So are your flowers. I have a bit of an OCD issue with the rocks being in your paths, though. Your PWPs are also poorly placed. They lack thought in where they are and why. Your fairy tale theme is pretty cool. I suggest putting more bushes near your paths. Your house is OK. It does lack some organization. Basement is absolutely amazing.

Rodeo's town of Erebor
To be frank, your town is horrible. There's is not a single coherent thought in any organization what so ever. Your paths zip everywhere, your flowers are everywhere and don't match, your PWPs are placed randomly, and your path pattern design doesn't even look that great. Your house is also quite the same. It's bad. Seems like your house design is mostly around pictures of villagers you bought from people than it is an actual house. Very little organization.

Sylveon's town of Ponyvill
Must say, your path design is quite nice. I noticed there are a lot of bare patches in areas. I'm guessing you're still working on it. Some of your PWPs are placed in the middle of no where with no meaning of their existence. Try to organize your paths better. I suggest putting trees and bushes next to them. Also, try to pick some flowers that match the color of your paths. Your character, Mew, has a cool roman theme going on. Just thought I'd point that out. Candy's library themed house is astonishing. Never seen a library theme before. Celebi's house is OK. Try adding more furniture into the rooms. It's a bit bare. ​

 

[feavre]

Love reading your reviews and eventually I hope mine will be done

 

[vlesditor]

4600-4179-7754

I'm quite the newbie, as I'm really just messing around with different tilesets/path organizations. I also haven't finished a lot of improvements, and I don't know anything about collecting villagers! That being said, I would love some suggestions/ideas about the pathway tilesets.

Also, of course, I haven't tried to breed or place any cool flowers, so please ignore the flower mess!

 

[mayorgeorgia]

Hi! Please could you review my dream town, It is still a massive WIP but I would like some feedback! Dream address: 6300-2839-5269

 

[Xsy]

Hey, WonderK.

4900-2179-2720

But let it be known:
-Iggly ruined a path, so that's why the area around his house seems ... unused. Waiting for him to move.
-Goldie kinda ruined an area too. Both of these people need to leave my town.
-I have put 0 effort into my house. Literally none. Its just a mess of crap that I just needed to drop somewhere.
-Bank's house is a nice little bank, though, so feel free to check that house out. :3
-There are a few gaps here and there I'll need to fill with more flowers, but I'm too lazy to get those done now.
-The beach is where I store my spare flowers... nothing special there, either.

Other than that, I would love any ideas or criticism.

 

[springpup]

i'd love some feedback on my town! i'm thinking of resetting. DA is 4100-4166-4561!

please note that Rhonda and Aurora moved into the middle of my paths and i tried my best to fix it. Also, the grass around Rhonda's house is bad because muffy lived there and then moved, only to have Rhonda move into virtually the same spot. Gaston and Spork are two villagers i'm currently trying to get rid of and that's why there are no paths leading to their houses. Chadder is moving away in a few days and-again- moved into the middle of a path.

 

[tarakdeep]

mines in my sig the second code