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The Hidden Owl
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alicerulez
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I like your dream town, especially how you mixed together different colors of flowers. For example, Pancetti's house was surrounded by orange and yellow flowers while annalise's house was surrounded by purple, pink, and white flowers. Your house is very...cool. Your house is just composed of customized sets, well, except the basement, which is very distinct. I remember seeing that design somewhere though. Your other character's house, Naomi, is pretty small. But, appearances are deceiving because the inside is very noteworthy, I can feel you had something like a camp in your mind. I can see how hard you worked on your town because of the various public work projects scattered around your town. Your paths, such as your stone path and brick paths are very unique. Usually people go for "pretty and eye-catching", but you however really sprang for the natural feel. I can also see that you are working hard to breed your own flowers because on the beach there are clusters of hybrids in the diagonal formation. On the other hand, I don't like how your cafe is so close to the cliff, I have to really squeeze through to get to it. Also, your trees make it hard to see and I am constantly hitting bushes and wondering why my character is not going forward. All your tree stumps, I noticed had a normal design on top. I recommend you buy a silver axe from someone to change that. Hm...I say you put some shells on the other ramp too, so it matches c:. The right side of Brewster's is empty except for a hand-full of flowers, in front of Marina's house is empty, and behind your town hall, it is totally empty. Why is that? Are you planning to put public works projects there or more flowers? Finally, what is your overall theme? I can see your town looks natural with the clovers and mushrooms, but the idea is vague. Your theme could be like: fairy tale theme, candy theme, or you just want the basic look. This is just my opinion though, it may be different for others. I rate your town 7 out of 10...? Not so sure, I'm bad with these things and I probably just stated some random things for the entries xD
The Hidden Owl
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ahh thanks for reviewing!
Araie
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Alright, so here is my review for your lovely town. Sorry if ti is not the best.. this is actually the first review of a dream town I will ever be doing, so bear with me, haha.
First of all, I really like the name of your town! Not very creative, but it still sounds rather nice and fitting. Anyways, very good on thinking of the brick pathway! I think it just gives the town a nice oldie-ish feel to it, and honestly, it's in a good way! Regarding my travels, I went right from the Plaza. I then saw a handful of famous mushrooms, which is actually rather surprising, because most people don't like to use famous mushrooms because.. well.. that don't go well with much. But, you made them look rather well! However, when I came upon Naomi's' house, I was rather surprised at how undecorated and small the house was. This obviously shows that you may want to spend a bit more time on your other characters to make the characters themselves look nicer, and their houses well furnished, but it doesn't have to be like your mayor's house! It can always be just one simple big room. Like, for example, make it a bakery or some time of small establishment! Just a couple of recommendations that I really wanted to suggest though, haha. It's fine if you don't want to do them. Your town. You da boss.
Anyways, I pathway to Marina's house looks very fitting with the pink and white, so a plus for that. I also like how you added a windmill as well! Very small just nice touch to add to all of it. But, to the right of Marina's house, is just a big, open unfilled gap.. which honestly kinda bothers me. (If you have the public works projects for it,) Why not put a park? I have seen people put them in THEIR towns before, and they looked really nice and well done! Just more suggestions from me though, haha. (But seriously, fill the gap..
) I then continued back to the bridge near Naomi's house. The bridge, however, was just the original one that you get when you first start a new town, so if I were you, I would maybe suggest on redoing that. (Probably just being nitpicky now, haha.) I then saw a new type of pathway, which is always nice, of course, to have a variety. Other than that though, everything was very well done! The flowers matched the villagers houses, there were lots of PWPs that fitted very well, and, overall, I would say that the top part is very nice! (Other gap by the police station though.. nuuuu..) I then followed the path that led to your house. Now it is time fooooorrr.. HOUSE INSPECTION! (Hope you cleaned it. 
) I must say though.. your house is very nice! All of the rooms are very well decorated! I must say that I do rather like the top floor and back room though.
However, your basement seems rather sloppy to me. It just doesn't feel like much of a room.. and I like room ROOMS, so it just not my sort of style at least.
Other than all of the negatives I have pointed out, I say that your town is beautiful and very well done!
I rate this 8/10! I hope you enjoyed reading my review! (Or if you just skipped to this part.. that's fine too, I guess..)
First of all, I really like the name of your town! Not very creative, but it still sounds rather nice and fitting. Anyways, very good on thinking of the brick pathway! I think it just gives the town a nice oldie-ish feel to it, and honestly, it's in a good way! Regarding my travels, I went right from the Plaza. I then saw a handful of famous mushrooms, which is actually rather surprising, because most people don't like to use famous mushrooms because.. well.. that don't go well with much. But, you made them look rather well! However, when I came upon Naomi's' house, I was rather surprised at how undecorated and small the house was. This obviously shows that you may want to spend a bit more time on your other characters to make the characters themselves look nicer, and their houses well furnished, but it doesn't have to be like your mayor's house! It can always be just one simple big room. Like, for example, make it a bakery or some time of small establishment! Just a couple of recommendations that I really wanted to suggest though, haha. It's fine if you don't want to do them. Your town. You da boss.
Anyways, I pathway to Marina's house looks very fitting with the pink and white, so a plus for that. I also like how you added a windmill as well! Very small just nice touch to add to all of it. But, to the right of Marina's house, is just a big, open unfilled gap.. which honestly kinda bothers me. (If you have the public works projects for it,) Why not put a park? I have seen people put them in THEIR towns before, and they looked really nice and well done! Just more suggestions from me though, haha. (But seriously, fill the gap..
) I then continued back to the bridge near Naomi's house. The bridge, however, was just the original one that you get when you first start a new town, so if I were you, I would maybe suggest on redoing that. (Probably just being nitpicky now, haha.) I then saw a new type of pathway, which is always nice, of course, to have a variety. Other than that though, everything was very well done! The flowers matched the villagers houses, there were lots of PWPs that fitted very well, and, overall, I would say that the top part is very nice! (Other gap by the police station though.. nuuuu..) I then followed the path that led to your house. Now it is time fooooorrr.. HOUSE INSPECTION! (Hope you cleaned it. ) I must say though.. your house is very nice! All of the rooms are very well decorated! I must say that I do rather like the top floor and back room though. However, your basement seems rather sloppy to me. It just doesn't feel like much of a room.. and I like room ROOMS, so it just not my sort of style at least.
Other than all of the negatives I have pointed out, I say that your town is beautiful and very well done!
I rate this 8/10! I hope you enjoyed reading my review! (Or if you just skipped to this part.. that's fine too, I guess..
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