Alright, so tell me ideas so i can improve it.archy1121 said:Your story is too normal RPGish.
Alright, so tell me ideas so i can improve it.archy1121 said:Your story is too normal RPGish.
hehe, hehe...The JJ said:Alright, so tell me ideas so i can improve it.archy1121 said:Your story is too normal RPGish.
The JJ said:What other idea? The one I said was that someone comes to destroy past earth and some other stuff I don't remember. But other people recommended that stuff. I had totally other ideas that you blew off.xeladude said:Your new story is pretty much ]Im changing my name and I've changed the story line. Also i have screen shots and i'll post more soon. Also the other idea was Bacon Boys so don't blame me. But please don't say it fails without saying why.
@ JJ: Also, the name could change, and I hate the "collect the "X" amount of items to save the world. It's so annoying and overdone.
uhh ill tell you.. add some like wizards and sorcerers and stuff :veryhappy:archy1121 said:hehe, hehe...The JJ said:Alright, so tell me ideas so i can improve it.archy1121 said:Your story is too normal RPGish.
*runs*
No, just no.gandalfail said:uhh ill tell you.. add some like wizards and sorcerers and stuff :veryhappy:archy1121 said:hehe, hehe...The JJ said:Alright, so tell me ideas so i can improve it.archy1121 said:Your story is too normal RPGish.
*runs*
Never seen you before.Benisawesome said:I'd love to be a co owner, I'm online pretty much every day for about 2 hours.
The game could be a Christmas present!The JJ said:Im thinking of Making BB Co-Owner, Hes helped me so much. Also Bacon Boy i will stick to your idea then. Man i need to edit my game alot now. It should be dont by XMas and i should be able to post it on a website.
@Niko: Ty PM me ur AIM
@Arcy: If your not really going to help then please leave. I know that all RPG Games have the same storyline, but think of any other games. Most of them are about saving the world. I liked BB idea but then people started saying its unoriginal ect. Also im not asking for a story line, Im asking for ideas and improvements on mine.
@Benisawesome: NO
Dw, I've added it.Bacon Boy said:The game could be a Christmas present!The JJ said:Im thinking of Making BB Co-Owner, Hes helped me so much. Also Bacon Boy i will stick to your idea then. Man i need to edit my game alot now. It should be dont by XMas and i should be able to post it on a website.
@Niko: Ty PM me ur AIM
@Arcy: If your not really going to help then please leave. I know that all RPG Games have the same storyline, but think of any other games. Most of them are about saving the world. I liked BB idea but then people started saying its unoriginal ect. Also im not asking for a story line, Im asking for ideas and improvements on mine.
@Benisawesome: NO
Try adding dungeons and bosses though still. Try to make objectives so the game is long, not short. (Also, use my music.)![]()
Okey dokey.The JJ said:Dw, I've added it.Bacon Boy said:The game could be a Christmas present!The JJ said:Im thinking of Making BB Co-Owner, Hes helped me so much. Also Bacon Boy i will stick to your idea then. Man i need to edit my game alot now. It should be dont by XMas and i should be able to post it on a website.
@Niko: Ty PM me ur AIM
@Arcy: If your not really going to help then please leave. I know that all RPG Games have the same storyline, but think of any other games. Most of them are about saving the world. I liked BB idea but then people started saying its unoriginal ect. Also im not asking for a story line, Im asking for ideas and improvements on mine.
@Benisawesome: NO
Try adding dungeons and bosses though still. Try to make objectives so the game is long, not short. (Also, use my music.)![]()
Well, wouldn't it be stupid if it was lets say England? There is not a point. But i like the saving the family idea, I'll use it in my story line.archy1121 said:Hm...
Maybe change it from the world to something smaller. Perhaps where lew was from, or some important thing, etc. Just not the world, its overused.
I KNOW!
Hav eit about saving his Family.
I mean more of a small village.The JJ said:Well, wouldn't it be stupid if it was lets say England? There is not a point. But i like the saving the family idea, I'll use it in my story line.archy1121 said:Hm...
Maybe change it from the world to something smaller. Perhaps where lew was from, or some important thing, etc. Just not the world, its overused.
I KNOW!
Hav eit about saving his Family.
Hmm, Like someone evil is trying to destroy a village?archy1121 said:I mean more of a small village.The JJ said:Well, wouldn't it be stupid if it was lets say England? There is not a point. But i like the saving the family idea, I'll use it in my story line.archy1121 said:Hm...
Maybe change it from the world to something smaller. Perhaps where lew was from, or some important thing, etc. Just not the world, its overused.
I KNOW!
Hav eit about saving his Family.
Hm...The JJ said:Hmm, Like someone evil is trying to destroy a village?archy1121 said:I mean more of a small village.The JJ said:Well, wouldn't it be stupid if it was lets say England? There is not a point. But i like the saving the family idea, I'll use it in my story line.archy1121 said:Hm...
Maybe change it from the world to something smaller. Perhaps where lew was from, or some important thing, etc. Just not the world, its overused.
I KNOW!
Hav eit about saving his Family.
To build a hotel. =Parchy1121 said:Hm...The JJ said:Hmm, Like someone evil is trying to destroy a village?archy1121 said:I mean more of a small village.The JJ said:Well, wouldn't it be stupid if it was lets say England? There is not a point. But i like the saving the family idea, I'll use it in my story line.archy1121 said:Hm...
Maybe change it from the world to something smaller. Perhaps where lew was from, or some important thing, etc. Just not the world, its overused.
I KNOW!
Hav eit about saving his Family.
How about he is trying to wipe out a countryside to build some giant tower thing to um...
Hm, I can see something having to do with what he is building, butI do not know what it would be.
Thats a good idea, but how can i turn this to a proper RPG Game using BB idea? (if u want i will post his idea)archy1121 said:Hm...The JJ said:Hmm, Like someone evil is trying to destroy a village?archy1121 said:I mean more of a small village.The JJ said:Well, wouldn't it be stupid if it was lets say England? There is not a point. But i like the saving the family idea, I'll use it in my story line.archy1121 said:Hm...
Maybe change it from the world to something smaller. Perhaps where lew was from, or some important thing, etc. Just not the world, its overused.
I KNOW!
Hav eit about saving his Family.
How about he is trying to wipe out a countryside to build some giant tower thing to um...
Hm, I can see something having to do with what he is building, butI do not know what it would be.