Their Time To Shine

[Propaganda Man]

Their Time To Shine
Chapter 1


It was a quiet Sunday day, the sun was shining, cars were moving down Doomsberry road, and there was a car heading to Doomsberry Stadium, and in this car was Coach Evans. Coach Evans was the coach of the Doomsberry football team, and he was unlocking the gates preparing for Doom

 

[ac1983fan]

What is with the colors?

 

[UltraByte]

What is with the colors?

Agreed. What are they for?

 

[Bastoise99]

Maybe to symblize something.

 

[THEBOBINATOR]

I saw him today, and he told me this:

black:naration
orange:thinking
blue:dioloug(sp)

this is just to make it easer to read, in terms of diferenteating dioloug and thoughts.

 

[Propaganda Man]

instead of saying how it looks, can you tell me how the read is if you read it?

 

[Bastoise99]

Not bad. I'm curious to see how this story will evolve.

 

[Propaganda Man]

thank you. It is going to be hard, you don't ussaly see books on football :lol:

 

[Propaganda Man]

i will try to make this weekly, BTW how do you like the ending of this chapter.

 

[Mino]

The colors are to prevent confusion as to what's saying what.

 

[Bastoise99]

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