just updated; would be happy to know what people think
4400-5891-6850~ any advice welcome ;v;
it's been awhile since I took a nap. will have review here once I'm done snoozing
PinkPaws
Town:
Likes:
-Cherry Blossoms!! XD
-Nice patterns compliment weather
-PONPONPON!
-...

THE HECK?! How did you get golden roses in your pond?! SERIOUSLY!! HOW?! I MUST REPLICATE IT!!!
-Nice log bench near river
-nice use of round topiary
-... AGAIN???!!! Now it's pink and white carnations in the river!! HOW?!
-path on the beach is actually kinda nice; never seen that before
Dislikes:
-hot spring is lonely and no path leads to it
-path seems to go around flower arch and wisteria trellis. going through can be much nicer.
-park area can go unnoticed without path
-pwp's between cliff and path look odd
-villager homes all in a row look fairly plain and too organized and leave the rest of the town feeling empty
-lots of empty spaces
Homes:
Olivia's House:
Exterior: matches town perfectly
Main: nice and great designs
Right: interesting kitchen, though cake sitting on the floor is weird.
Left: nice, but I don't quite know what it is... a very nice utility room? Love the designs on the tables
Basement: kinda nice, but kinda hodgepodgey
2nd Floor: again, nice but hodgepodgey and a little empty
Jay's House:
Exterior: matches town perfectly
Main: chilly! I like. The ice shelf and bed are in the way of the doorways though
Right: ...hm. rococo and 7/11... needs some focus and furniture
Back: a little empty, but I think I like where this is going
Left: fully expanded but totally empty.
Basement:...hm. just hm.
2nd Floor: playroom floor with messy and rococo... well if that floats your boat...
Suggestions:
-try planting those clovers going through the trellis and arch
-more trees and bushes
-try removing some of the pwp's on the southern cliff and adding more plants instead
-add another table or two in Olivia's right room for the cake and other items on the floor
-Jay's house needs some direction and organization. And furniture.
-maybe some bamboo near the hot spring
-PWPs: bell, zen bell, zen garden, wind turbine, zen clock, fairy-tale light
Rating: 3.75/5
Final Thoughts: It was rather hard to judge. The highs were high and the lows were low. You have some great stuff and some room for definite improvement. I'd suggest you visit my town since we seem to have some similar tastes. I think that-
...what the...
...a picnic basket, illuminated heart, and lighthouse... on the beach...
well...
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