Trying to get my dream badge, if anyone wants I can do a quick pop in of there town? Quote me if you want me to review it![]()
I'd like this, too!
Trying to get my dream badge, if anyone wants I can do a quick pop in of there town? Quote me if you want me to review it![]()
I'd love it if you did that. c:
...that is, if you haven't already before. I've lost track.
I'd like this, too!
Name: Francine
Town Name: Maryford
Dream Address: 6900-5843-7524
Name: Anthos
Town Name: Castalia
Dream Address: 4900-4109-2605
Would love some feedback on my town. I'll be sure to repay the favor, as I'm working on my dreamer badge.
I like reviewing DA's, so if you don't mind I'll provide some feedback on yours!
Imma assume you don't have a Beautiful Town Ordinance enacted? I'd suggest enacting it for a day and updating your DA when it goes into effect so no dead flowers are there~
Hm, flowers and bushes seem to be very scattered. There isn't really a consistent type of thing going on with the flowers, their locations, colors, types, etc. They're all just, well, there. Same for the trees as well. Scattering isn't bad, but it makes everything feel sloppier than it should, yknow?
The fountain in front of the town hall looks pretty nice! You've also got some good bridge placements, along with a good Cafe and Police Station placements~ I can tell you have a campsite type of idea going on near, well, the campsite, so I'd probably recommend some more trees/bushes surrounding that area. A lot of the other PWP's seem kind of out of place though... like the random totem pole and log bench. The log bench would fit a lot better near the campsite imo. Basically everything in general is just kinda spread out and a bit disorganized. BUT, that can most definitely be fixed!
Maybe write down which PWP's you definitely want to keep so you can do some hardcore demolishing. Get a bit of a better idea as to where things will go and how they'll incorporate with paths, flowers, and trees. If you don't like pattern paths, sort of get an imaginary path going using trees, flowers, and bush starts to get you started. Organize your flowers too! You can organize by either color or type, but I recommend color. Ask yourself what colors of flowers you'd prefer and which you wouldn't, and focus on keeping those in your town.
Oh, if you do post feedback on mine, please note that it's still very much a WIP so things that are bare aren't permanently bare, but rather I've not discovered what to do with them yet.