The Legend of Zelda: Viliatris Strikes

[Mino]

That was great BULERIAS! There is one thing I would change, the past with the grenades. I would hardly think that is LoZ-like. Change it to bombs. Like the ones in LoZ:FSA.

I know, I HATE that part!

THen why not just edit it? Change it to bombs. There are timed bombs in LoZ, it'd fit perfectly.

 

[Bulerias]

That was great BULERIAS! There is one thing I would change, the past with the grenades. I would hardly think that is LoZ-like. Change it to bombs. Like the ones in LoZ:FSA.

I know, I HATE that part!

THen why not just edit it? Change it to bombs. There are timed bombs in LoZ, it'd fit perfectly.

Just edited it

 

[Bulerias]

If any of you have ever read Lloyd Alexander's works, Chapter 4 will be very familiar.... aka The Black Cauldron.... eheh, Chapter 4 coming sometime in a week...

 

[Bulerias]

Anyone else wants to post some feedback?

 

[Bulerias]

Chapter 4

 

[ƒish]

that was long @_@




yeah... you have some pretty weird names in there too

 

[Bulerias]

that was long @_@




yeah... you have some pretty weird names in there too

Yeah, but did you like it, overall?

 

[Mino]

Gah... *don't want... to... read*

I completely forgot about the rest of the story...

 

[Bulerias]

Gah... *don't want... to... read*

I completely forgot about the rest of the story...

:|

Oh well, I guess I'll just stop writing this.... *hopes that you disagree*

 

[Mino]

Gah... *don't want... to... read*

I completely forgot about the rest of the story...

:|

Oh well, I guess I'll just stop writing this.... *hopes that you disagree*

I meant at the moment! I've already read it. -____-

 

[Bulerias]

Gah... *don't want... to... read*

I completely forgot about the rest of the story...

:|

Oh well, I guess I'll just stop writing this.... *hopes that you disagree*

I meant at the moment! I've already read it. -____-

OK, I'll keep writing it. Soo... do you like it?

 

[SysteMeltDown911]

i love it! great plot.

 

[Bulerias]

i love it! great plot.

Thanks! The plot will get deeper later in the story.... and for people who don't know, this is 10 years after The Windwaker.

 

[Bulerias]

Gah... *don't want... to... read*

I completely forgot about the rest of the story...

:|

Oh well, I guess I'll just stop writing this.... *hopes that you disagree*

I meant at the moment! I've already read it. -____-

OK, I'll keep writing it. Soo... do you like it?

So, PIKMIN, do you like it?

 

[Mino]

Gah... *don't want... to... read*

I completely forgot about the rest of the story...

:|

Oh well, I guess I'll just stop writing this.... *hopes that you disagree*

I meant at the moment! I've already read it. -____-

OK, I'll keep writing it. Soo... do you like it?

So, PIKMIN, do you like it?

Yep. :yes:

 

[Bulerias]

Gah... *don't want... to... read*

I completely forgot about the rest of the story...

:|

Oh well, I guess I'll just stop writing this.... *hopes that you disagree*

I meant at the moment! I've already read it. -____-

OK, I'll keep writing it. Soo... do you like it?

So, PIKMIN, do you like it?

Yep. :yes:

^_^


^_^


^_^

The story will get deeper the next couple of chapters...

 

[Mino]

I still don't like the names, thuough.


They're a little... "


:huh: "

 

[Bulerias]

I still don't like the names, thuough.


They're a little... "


:huh: "

Yeah, I know, but I posted a guide to them somewhere in this thread...

 

[Bulerias]

Posted again for your convinience -

Gratod Brothers

 

[Mino]

Yes, the god's names... Those were hte ones.