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any suggestions its a remake of little red riding hood in the grandmas view.
plz dont laugh at my last name


Little Red Ridding Hood Matthew Darling


Hi there! I
 
only_half_evil333 said:
any suggestions its a remake of little red riding hood in the grandmas view.
plz dont laugh at my last name


Little Red Ridding Hood Matthew Darling


Hi there! I
 
It's interesting... I like how you made the grandma's side of the story though. You could use a little work with your detailing, though.
 
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