♥ Reviewing Dream Towns ♥
- Thread starter Bearica
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It's messy. The flowers are unorganized and the board-thing (can't recall the name right now) in front of Diana's house has no design on it. It's a little boring and there's a lack of (interactive) PWPs. Maybe put a bench or something somewhere? (A log bench would look cute in the top left part of the map since you can't do a whole lot in those spaces)Go for it.I'm always curious to what people think. DA is 4900-3863-5400. Warning though: My town suuuuuuuucks.
Other than that I'd focus on just organizing the flowers, really. It definitely helps make your town look more organized. Maybe it hasn't been updated in a while, since there's still snow on the ground?
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Aha, I actually visited your town in my last thread! It's a very nice modern town indeed. The best I've seen yet. :>
Ouch. You can see I've been organizing them, but I'm not finished. A little harsh. I also have a few bench's around, so I don't think you looked very well. Reviews are about balancing the negative and the positive.
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Sorry! I don't mean to come off harsh, but I also don't like to sugarcoat reviews as it helps no one.
Uh, well. There's a difference between sugarcoating and highlighting someones strong suits. It's harsh because you gave me absolutely nothing positive and it was barely constructive without anything to really go off of. The only thing I can take away from it is "More interactive pwps".
TheGreatBrain
Senior Member
Hi, I have two in my sig.I guess you could choose one, or do both if you like.Thanks so much.I'll check yours out too, if you like.
What do you want me to say? I'm not going to highlight strong suits if I don't feel there are any. I felt it was boring and unorganized and could use more PWPs. The pathing was nice? I didn't really see any theme or anything cohesive to tie it all together, honestly. If you don't want criticism, why come to a review thread? :/
Well, if you don't like my advice, feel free to post elsewhere. I gave you my opinion and advice, it's your decision whether or not you take it.Uh no. I don't mind criticism. What I really want is some decent advice.
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Well, the first thing I'd suggest is paths - I'm not sure if there's a specific theme you're going for (like zen, fairy-tale, etc) or not, but paths help a lot with cohesiveness and organization. Making it go from house to house and whatnot. Once you place paths (or make natural paths, if you like those more!), lining them with flowers, bushes and trees makes them look really nice!
Putting flowers in an order like red rose->white rose->red rose-> white rose, etc makes it look organized as well.
If you want to start pathing, I'd start with chopping all of your trees down and moving any flowers to the beach so you can just see the flat land - it always helps me plan where my paths are going to go when I do that. And then you can go back and landscape around as you please. Also, more pwps! Even small things like streetlamps and clocks help.
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Ah, I've visited your towns & reviewed them in my last thread. If you'd like I can dig those reviews up and re-post them.
Oh! Well, a lot of people here (in the Re-Tail & TBT Marketplace forums) sell golden tools! And since golden axes don't break they help a LOT with landscaping.
LinDUNguin
Bait-Snatching Grandpa
You can go ahead and check out mine if you'd like c: I haven't updated it since I started playing again this June because I'm waiting on a Sunny Day @ 1 pm to do so again. I've since changed a few things landscaping-wise, and have worked more on my chars' houses, but you won't be able to see that...Any and all feedback would be appreciated!
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If you want me to make certain suggestions, then sure!
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