Right now, my DA isn't an accurate representation of my town, so the next poster is free to review AwePanda's town again.
Imma be writing down this review as I walk through the town by the way.
First thing I noticed was the use of the default tree pattern. Not bad per say, but not really fitting for a town pattern, y'know? Your paths are also 1x1 and don't use borders and that's just a personal pet peeve of mine, so don't take my disdain towards that personally~ Oh, and for the items on the ground, I'd recommend putting them in wrapping paper so it looks neater! You also don't need a golden axe there either since Lloid offers you an axe.
Okay, your path goes to 2x2, heck yeah. The purple compliments the fall colors well and the matching flowers are nice too~ I'd recommend some trees/bushes along the path as well to mix things up a bit~ There are also some sections that are a bit TOO full of this one single path. Like, the entire leadup to Retail and Town Hall. It just feels like there's an overabundance of this one path, so maybe toning down the usage of it around these ares would be helpful.
Going behind Retail, the wisteria trellis is in a bit of a nowhere land, and the police station is right in front of a bridge.
Sadly the bridge is well placed and you can't move the police station, but I won't hold that against you since you couldn't move the station even if ya wanted to.
I like the bushes around the mossy stone PWP! I kind of wish they were more symmetrical, but you have a house plot right next to the PWP so I can forgive it not being totally symmetrical. Oh, the illuminated arch is a pretty PWP, but only when it's lit up. I'd recommend updating your DA at sometime after 6pm so the lights on it are lit up. The area with the fence, zen bench, and streetlamp is very cute as well. Maybe surround more bushes around that too? The campsite area is nice and tranquil as well, and I like how it's hidden behind all the trees~ I noticed near the train station you have one streetlamp on the right side of it, perhaps add that same streetlamp to the left side as well? Symmetry is key!
Okay, interior review time!
First room is really cute! I LOVE the Lovely Set, and the villager pictures being set up where they are looks pretty nice as well. You made the most out of this room and that takes a lot of effort. My only tripe was the golden closet thing. Doesn't really match the pastel pinks/whites in the room.
Left room: HECK YEAH A SWEETS ROOM! Seems a bit unfinished though, maybe try to get some orderable food to add into the room?
Middle room: Cute lil' kitchen~ It's really well-organized and easy to navigate and walk through! -takes inspo screencaps for my future kitche-
Right room: Oooh, a mermaid/aquarium type of room, I actually haven't seen that mix very often! It's a tad on the plain side, but it still looks comforting, aside from that Napoleonfish dear GOD that thing is creepy
Upstairs: A bathroom type of room, huh? This also feels a bit unfinished, but then again, it IS a bathroom/washroom... can't really do all that much with it. THANK YOU FOR THE SCREEN IN FRONT OF THE TOILET.
Basement: SHROOMS. 420. 420/10, I APPROVE.
Overall: The town feels a bit underdeveloped and there's a few placements on the outside that could use some touching up, same with the pathings. However, there is definitely potential in this little town of yours and I can tell you've tried pretty hard with what you've got so far, so congrats to you for it! I'd give you a solid 7/10, but with some touchups that number could very easily go up!
The lego path was a cute pattern too but the patterns do seem a little mismatch! ovo 
