Review the dream town of the poster above!!

[boorah]

Hey everyone, I've noticed a ton of people enjoy reviewing other dream towns and having their own towns reviewed. There's frequently many threads about this but the amount of towns to review tends to get overwhelming for just one person to do, so I thought this might be a neat idea to try out!

So it's simple, post your dream address and a review of the above user, and whoever comes along next will review your town in exchange and so on and so forth!

Some things to keep in mind...

-Please don't post unless you intend to participate, otherwise it messes it all up

-Noone likes getting a two sentence review of their town- you don't have to be an amazing writer, just try and put some effort into your review and you will likely be receiving the same kindness!

-Be nice! Criticism should be constructive!

-It may be a good idea to make a "Placeholder" post to indicate that you will be reviewing such and such's town and whoever takes the next look should check out your town, and NOT the one that you are currently dreaming about to review! You can edit your review in when you are ready

-The more reviews you give, the more reviews you'll get!

Hopefully we can all have a good time dreaming about some nice towns and helping each other make our towns are great as possible

I'll start it then!

4800-4397-4266 - the town of Mythic!

 

[MatchaMoonlight]

Oh! I actually visited your town last night via the dream suite, so I will review yours. Overall, it was a really great town. I loved your campsite area, and the area near it with the hammock and stuff. Another part that stood out for me was the area near The Roost. The way you arranged the plants around there and the illuminated arch looked really nice. Your homes were all really impressive. I loved the fact that your rooms all seemed to have a theme. My favourite one was your camping room. It was so well done! Another plus is that you have adorable neighbours. Julian, Marina, and Diana! <333 I don't have anything really negative to say about it. My only suggestion would be regarding your flowers. I love that you arranged most of your flowers in a pattern, but I noticed in some areas the pattern seemed to end abruptly. Maybe just double-check that. Nice town!

TOWN NAME: Amyville
DA: 5100-3279-3612
THEME: Loosely based on Laverre City from Pokemon X/Y.
HOUSE: I have one house in my town, and I'd love for you to review it as well.
ADDITIONAL INFO: Please overlook the fact that one of my bridges is not fairy-tale. I didn't want to risk Isabelle telling me I couldn't rebuild it because it was so close to Bonbon's house. XD

 

[Swablu]

Reviewing the town; Amyville

Overall a great town with many pwps littered around in a cute way! There is still some places that look partially complete like around the house, re-tail and town hall ( saw water qr codes, not sure if there suppose to look that way tho ). I like how each room in the house was in a fashion for each villagers style, and the basement being for I believe the hex maniac or witch ( AKA the dreamer ), all I have to say is you should add different series in each room and not just have it a sweets set themes room with nothing else, maybe like a tea set or sugar? Either way, amazing path and layout! May want to add some more greenery like bushes around!


TOWN: Hanabera
MAYOR: Ezusa
DREAM ADDRESS; 5300-4769-7930
REVIEW ON; Ryuuzaki & Ezusa's houses, overall pwp placements and ways to improve town! (ESPECIALLY INFRONT OF STITCHES AREA PLEASE HELP)

 

[MatchaMoonlight]

Reviewing the town; Amyville

Overall a great town with many pwps littered around in a cute way! There is still some places that look partially complete like around the house, re-tail and town hall ( saw water qr codes, not sure if there suppose to look that way tho ). I like how each room in the house was in a fashion for each villagers style, and the basement being for I believe the hex maniac or witch ( AKA the dreamer ), all I have to say is you should add different series in each room and not just have it a sweets set themes room with nothing else, maybe like a tea set or sugar? Either way, amazing path and layout! May want to add some more greenery like bushes around!


TOWN: Hanabera
MAYOR: Ezusa
DREAM ADDRESS; 5300-4769-7930
REVIEW ON; Ryuuzaki & Ezusa's houses, overall pwp placements and ways to improve town! (ESPECIALLY INFRONT OF STITCHES AREA PLEASE HELP)

Thanks so much for your review and suggestions.

 

[boorah]

TOWN: Hanabera
MAYOR: Ezusa
DREAM ADDRESS; 5300-4769-7930
REVIEW ON; Ryuuzaki & Ezusa's houses, overall pwp placements and ways to improve town! (ESPECIALLY INFRONT OF STITCHES AREA PLEASE HELP)

Dreaming of Hanabera....

The first thing I notice when waking up are the beautiful fall colors! I see very few fall dream towns so that was exciting

The plaza looks nice and look- there are gifts! After changing and hitting Ezusa with the toy hammer a few times (LOL) I popped down into her house. Main room looks nice! Believe it or not I didn't know you could customize the cabin set to have that lighter colored wood- me likey. One thing I notice in this house is that you are never far from some tasty food! Can grab a bite in almost all the rooms ! I liked your eat in kitchen, and the upstairs is a really cute bedroom. I love how you added just a couple sloppy pieces to make it seem "lived in". I wasn't totally sure what you were going for in the basement...it seems like maybe just a sort of "hang-out" room? Which would make sense since that's how people actually use their basements IRL.

Back outside I start making my way around- everything looks so nice! Your town is really bursting with stuff to look at, you must have had a ton of ideas! I noticed your QR picnic blanket- do you prefer that over the PWP or still waiting for it to be suggested? It looks fine but I do miss the ability to sit down on it like the real thing offers. As far as placement of your PWP, most everything seems to be in order. I personally would switch the location of the lighthouse and geyser- since the Geyser would go well with the campsite and the lighthouse would be perfect on that corner cliff.

Up to the area in front of stitches house, you don't have too much room and that stupid rock is in the way- but my idea was to kind of open up that area by cutting down the row of trees on the right side of the path, and maybe move the path over 1 or 2 spaces to the left to add some more room. You could demolish your existing jungle gym, and make this area an official playground (stitches would love it since he's just a kid haha). You could have the jungle gym, tire toy, and maybe a drinking fountain or lightpost.

There wasn't too much to see inside of Ryuuzaki's house but what was there was quite nice. I liked the main room shop, nice use of the 7-11 pieces, and it looks like the owner lives upstairs? Lucky guy, short commute! My main complaint with this house is that it appears to be a shop, but seems a bit cutoff from the rest of your town and doesn't have good access via a path. That can't be good for buisness! Walking up to this house I was expecting like a reclusive cabin type deal.

Overall your town was VERY pretty with a ton of great little areas. I forgot to mention the vegetable patch! I loved this spot
BUT I think the town is a little bit busy and could use a bit of re-arranging to achieve a little bit better "flow". It was kind of tricky to navigate at times because you have a lot of one tiled paths that just sort of lead to dead-ends. It's clear you put a ton of work into the town and my complaints are just nitpicks really I would definitely visit again! Thanks for sharing.


Okay! Dream address is 4800-4397-4266 -The town of Mythic! Come on everyone join the fun

 

[Swablu]

Thanks for the suggestions! I was also thinking of a fire pit near stitches house and have stumps but in not sure. I just chose the qr blanket instead of the pwp because it couldn't fit in the place I wanted without killing any bushes off. I'm not sure if I can switch the lighthouse and geyser but I will try because it sounds better. Thanks for visiting!

 

[boorah]

Bump

 

[boorah]

Final bump before giving up on this! Totally thought more folks would want to jump in