Please Review my dream address!

[Cherry-Blossoms]

I just updated sunshine's dream. I can't share startown's dream address because it's not ready yet.

Sunshine's dream: 7200 4496 3921

Please tell me some good things and some things I could improve on, because I want my town to look nicer than it does right now

Thanks!

 

[Sawdust]

I hope this isn't going to sound too harsh, but you town has a lot of things lying around/not dug up. You should probably clean that up before updating your dream address. I was also a little confused by the paths - you use a lot of different ones and i couldn't always tell why. They were also often near cliffs or bodies of water which broke immersion. What I liked was the fireplace behind Stitches' house, it looks good surrounded by pears like that. The tent's placement is nice too. The floating cube (sorry, don't know the English name) works well with the lanterns.
Why... is there a bikini pattern in front of Poppy's house? The villagers' houses themselves all look nice from the inside. The style you chose for the train station fits the flower pattern found on the ground next to it and surrounding some paths (again, why only some? I can't really see a pattern there). The bridge placement is fine, I don't really get why you used the industrial-looking bridge on the left, though. The area surrounding the picnic blanket looks good but there's too many different flowers around the camping site for my tastes.
Your main house's main room looks good. I'm a bit confused about the room in the back and the room on the right, can't really see what the theme is supposed to be there. The room on the left is cute, but why is the stereo in front of the door when there's enough room to put it somewhere else? I love your basement, what a nice idea. A few fish would probably look good in it too but I can see that it's already pretty full. The upper floor is adorable as well, something in its center would be nice, though. I don't have much to say about the other houses since they're so small, but the 7-11 one could probably use some other wallpaper/flooring.
Overall, I think your town has a lot of potential but it'd look much nicer if you took the time to tidy it up (pick up things that are lying around, dig all the x'es up, get rid of rotten bamboo shoots, sort your flowers or arrange them in patterns, etc.). The way it is, it's a bit too chaotic for me personally.

 

[okun0ichio]

I fell into a pitfall -999points

Jokes aside though, I find the way you place the paths and flowers really strange, like the ring of flowers would just end abruptly with a path cutting through. The placement of paths around the plaza looks incomplete too and I don't understand what kind of look you were going for with the clothes you left by the town tree. There are also often really large patches of paths just lying around which makes the place look really bland. I see that you have spots where you did place the flowers nicely and I must applaud you for that but the other flowers in town look like they were just random spawns.

I also like how you have a house meant to be like a cafe but the style of the furniture don't really match so it looks kinda off. The house with the 7-11 set looks like a work-in-progress. I really like the main room of your mayor's house but I think you should move stufd away from the middle of the roon, particularly the closet which looks like it should be against the wall instead. The fish tank and sushi should not be behind the chair and the chairs should be away from the table such that they can be sat on. The furniture in the right room don't seem to go together. I think the second floor would be great with a few additional furniture items. I think the basement looks pretty cool. The left and back rooms look like works-in-progress too and would probably be looking better once you've filled them up in the future.

That's all I have to say for now and good luck on improving your town

 

[Cherry-Blossoms]

I fell into a pitfall -999points

Jokes aside though, I find the way you place the paths and flowers really strange, like the ring of flowers would just end abruptly with a path cutting through. The placement of paths around the plaza looks incomplete too and I don't understand what kind of look you were going for with the clothes you left by the town tree. There are also often really large patches of paths just lying around which makes the place look really bland. I see that you have spots where you did place the flowers nicely and I must applaud you for that but the other flowers in town look like they were just random spawns.

I also like how you have a house meant to be like a cafe but the style of the furniture don't really match so it looks kinda off. The house with the 7-11 set looks like a work-in-progress. I really like the main room of your mayor's house but I think you should move stufd away from the middle of the roon, particularly the closet which looks like it should be against the wall instead. The fish tank and sushi should not be behind the chair and the chairs should be away from the table such that they can be sat on. The furniture in the right room don't seem to go together. I think the second floor would be great with a few additional furniture items. I think the basement looks pretty cool. The left and back rooms look like works-in-progress too and would probably be looking better once you've filled them up in the future.

That's all I have to say for now and good luck on improving your town

The clothes are supposed to be for dream visitors to wear

 

[okun0ichio]

The clothes are supposed to be for dream visitors to wear

I know they are, what I meant is that they don't look very nice together.

 

[Cherry-Blossoms]

I know they are, what I meant is that they don't look very nice together.

Yeah mabye I should have a dress and pumps for girls and some shorts and a tee for boys and some boots

 

[KKMikkalson]

Positive feedback first: I think that your path placement north of the river seems well thought out and successful. I also like the star rooms in your main house! Also love the basement spa idea...might have to steal that one. I also want to encourage you to keep mixing and matching sets and furniture. Play with it and find what you think looks nice.

A few things to think about:
The paths south of the river could use some reworking. I would also encourage you to search for paths that match each other better. And add flowers! I cannot emphasize enough how flowers can change your town. If you're looking for non-hybrids, I have a bunch you can come and pick for free.