Please Come Visit My Town ^_^ (Dream)

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Hi i finally decided to upload my town to the Dream Suite
My town Azalea, is nearly a month old, and id really like people to visit it!
Critique it or whatever, on its layout and PWP :D
Oh and My House.. but only my main room and left room are finished

My Dream Address is
6300-2621-2505

Oh and only the bottom half of my map is pathed
 
I'll visit. I was looking for new dream addresses anyway. :)

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I love where you've placed your fountain & caf? (even though it's still being built) and the exterior of your house is lovely! I'm also really impressed with all the pictures you've managed to gather so far. I've gotten three and even that amount makes me proud. :D
Also, your event plaza and all of the villagers' houses are in really nice spots, you're right to be very content with this map.

I'm not too fond of your path design and the way it's been laid down, but that's a matter of taste. You could also do with some more trees. I think if you keep working on your town it will be amazing one day!
 
I'll visit. I was looking for new dream addresses anyway. :)

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I love where you've placed your fountain & caf? (even though it's still being built) and the exterior of your house is lovely! I'm also really impressed with all the pictures you've managed to gather so far. I've gotten three and even that amount makes me proud. :D
Also, your event plaza and all of the villagers' houses are in really nice spots, you're right to be very content with this map.

I'm not too fond of your path design and the way it's been laid down, but that's a matter of taste. You could also do with some more trees. I think if you keep working on your town it will be amazing one day!


Thank you ^_^
im planning on changing to a more complex path design eventually :) it just takes so long!
 
I'll go visit :3 Will critique once I'm done exploring!

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I like your town ^^ (I'm not that fond of towns with more than 2 ponds really) The path is great and I love the well and Cafe placement.
Your house exterior and interior is very nice and I like the bathhouse/bathroom area hehe.
Your villagers are all scattered which is awesome since they're not all bunched up, making tight spaces.

Perhaps more trees in small groups would be nice. Just what I like.

I would like to see more PWP's next time I visit :D
 
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