piercedhorizon
Senior Member
I will Visit it once I Load up my ds c: Ill put it onmy list
No offense... The feedback you gave didn't sound very constructive at all. What do you mean by weeding? What projects/areas seemed out of place? Which sections need the bushes? How are the paths not organized? I can't really improve my town with all the the one liners you've given me.
Also, the critique of my town name was the most egotistical statement I've ever seen in a dream review. v_v
The name thing was just a joke since our town names are so similar, not at all meant to be egotistical so relax :3
As for the weeding, I mean do actual weeding in your town. Remove the dandelions, the blades of grass and the clovers for a neater town.
The paths I found hard to follow at times and I don't think the blue and green patterns go with the other path at all.
The bushes I rescind, as you do seem to have some to section your areas.
Dang, girl, that's some nice landscaping! I really enjoyed this town. For one, you polished your path so well it looks as if it is part of the game. I also make my own patterns, and the "clean-up" is my LEAST favorite step, so I admire your dedication. The blue and green tiles were unexpected, but interesting. Speaking of those, I also enjoyed some of your other unique color pairings, like the blue roses with the sweet olives. It was just nice to visit a UNIQUE town that WASN'T all pink AND on the day of the cherry blossoms. (Many of those are gorgeous, but they get a lot of copycats.)
I get where BabyKay is coming from regarding the path layout, since some people like simplicity. But personally? I don't think you could lay out your paths much simpler without risking a boring setup. Most gardens aren't laid out like a city after all. The goal is to wander and literally smell the roses LOL. So while you might toy with her suggestion a little bit--I'm sure it works wonderfully in her own town--I wouldn't obsess over it. Zigzagging through the wisteria trellises was my favorite part.
Your home decor gave me a few ideas--I did NOT know you could put crap atop the striped bookcase, that is fantastic. Your blue polka dot room was quite cozy too. Now, overall, I did enjoy your landscaping more--but I think that's only because you obsessed over it a lot. I think if you picked up a home decorating magazine or something, just as you referenced actual brick patterns, a hard worker like yourself would produce some A+ material. I'm also struggling to figure out what to do with my big fat mansion (WHY did I give into Nook's hard sell??? DX), so that's what I'm doing (on top of dream visits, of course!). At the very least, you'll have a lot to talk about with your mother, if she enjoys decorating too. ;P
Granted, it IS just a video game, so...like...don't feel the need to stress out over the interiors. (God knows mine aren't perfect OR done, and I've been playing four years LOL. XD I just tell myself that the FUN never ends. XD) Yours are passable, and if I had to rate your town, I'd give it a 10/10, because for the most part, you really pulled off something original. Thanks for sharing!
Wow your town is so Awesome! I love the houses and your town is so decorated very nice. Keep up the good work
hey, i just visited your dream, it was lovely!! your landscaping is beautiful and your patterns are so charming!