Looking to visit dream towns

[theviolentlolita]

I'm pretty board and want to walk around some towns that aren't my own for a while. I'm not gonna do big reviews, but if you want i'll tell you a few thinks i liked about your town or areas i think could be improved.

I'll go to 3 tonight, then probably do more tomorrow. It's already 12 am here so I don't want to be up to 3 in the morning doing this XD

Dreams I've reviewed:
MetaTriforce
Lunatic
alexss79
ayeAmariah
Tom
Kitty2201

Dreams to review tonight:
nyenisu
ThomasNLD
Zukil

Dreams to review tomorrow:

 

[MetaTriforce]

You can visit my town. My dream code is in my signature. I don't want a big review, but a couple points on what you liked/didn't like would be nice

 

[Byngo]

Visit mine if you want. c:

DA is in my signature

 

[alexss79]

4800-3319-9032....check mine out and please let me know what you think.

 

[ayeAmariah]

Could you do mine? o: DA is in my signature! Please & thank you~

 

[Trent the Paladin]

Mine is in my sign. And yeah, I need more paths. :X

 

[theviolentlolita]

I'll do up to ayeAmariah tonight.

I just got done With MetaTriforce and just
Dang.
Your town is just amazing, and there are presents everywhere! What a cool town to visit. ^^
My favorite thing was all your different houses, especially the convenience store house. Idk why that one stuck out to me but I really liked it!
The two things I didn't care for I guess were that it was a little hard to get to some areas of your town like the one house behind all the money trees, and i felt like the playground area with the jungle gym was strangely empty feeling? maybe put in some colorful flowers around the edges to give the area life or something.

That's all! I really liked it!

 

[MetaTriforce]

I'll do up to ayeAmariah tonight.

I just got done With MetaTriforce and just
Dang.
Your town is just amazing, and there are presents everywhere! What a cool town to visit. ^^
My favorite thing was all your different houses, especially the convenience store house. Idk why that one stuck out to me but I really liked it!
The two things I didn't care for I guess were that it was a little hard to get to some areas of your town like the one house behind all the money trees, and i felt like the playground area with the jungle gym was strangely empty feeling? maybe put in some colorful flowers around the edges to give the area life or something.

That's all! I really liked it!

Thank-you for your feedback! I've been thinking about adding a little more to my park area, so I definitely agree with you on that.

Thank-you for visiting my town

 

[theviolentlolita]

Your welcome!

Dream 2: Lunatic

This ones another dang, mostly in the form of "DANG THAT PATH MUST HAVE TAKEN YOU FOREVER"

I also really liked this town! You really themed it out well, usually i don't like the use of that cherry blossom path because it looks weird most of the year round, but with it being spring it worked very well. I also don't usually like water tiles but once again you made it work and it worked well!
My favorite thing was probably that you didn't over use the bushes in your town. I see towns that line EVERY PATH with bushes and it gets annoying quickly but i didn't have that problem with your town. Also your pwp placement is top notch!
the only criticism I have is that the houses in the town could do with some sprucing up. I really like seeing creative homes so i'd encourage you to try to maybe use your awesome themeing skills to do something cool with those houses!

Very cool town!

 

[Byngo]

Your welcome!

Dream 2: Lunatic

This ones another dang, mostly in the form of "DANG THAT PATH MUST HAVE TAKEN YOU FOREVER"

I also really liked this town! You really themed it out well, usually i don't like the use of that cherry blossom path because it looks weird most of the year round, but with it being spring it worked very well. I also don't usually like water tiles but once again you made it work and it worked well!
My favorite thing was probably that you didn't over use the bushes in your town. I see towns that line EVERY PATH with bushes and it gets annoying quickly but i didn't have that problem with your town. Also your pwp placement is top notch!
the only criticism I have is that the houses in the town could do with some sprucing up. I really like seeing creative homes so i'd encourage you to try to maybe use your awesome themeing skills to do something cool with those houses!

Very cool town!

Thank you so much! <3

Yeah, the two alt characters houses are currently WIP. But thanks for the advice. c:

 

[theviolentlolita]

Your welcome!

Dream 3: alexss79
I could tell pretty easily that this was still a work in progress, which it great! That just means I get to look at your potential and how your creativity works, they say the best time to see a work of art is before it's done because you then get to see behind the genius!
The first thing I noticed was your path. I like it, it's very simple and easy on the eyes. the placement of the black and red roses around your house was very nice, i don't know why i don't see that color combination more often! It was a little weird when i first saw how close together two of your bridges were, but after i looked on either side of both bridges i saw why you did it that way and it bothered me less.
My favorite part of your town was the area between the town hall and the cafe. Very classy, it definitely has the modern feel you seem to be going for.
A criticism i'd have would be that there are just... too many perfect cherry trees. You should think about putting in other different kinds of trees into the town to make it seem a little more balanced, different fruit trees give little splashes of color that can help make your town seem more rounded. Also more flowers, but i'm pretty sure you know that and are working on it. XD

Other then that, pwps were placed well and the town easy to navigate. I can't wait to see what it's like when it's done!

 

[theviolentlolita]

Ok! Last one for the night! Is it funny dreams are making me sleepy? XD

Dream 4: ayeAmariah

I cant believe your town theme is moe school girl late on the first day to school. I can't believe it, and i love it so much. This town is now very dear to my heart. I want you to know i literally ran from the house to the school building, probably because it's 2 in the morning and i'm slightly crazy at this time of night, but i digress.
The paths and layout are nice, i like that it's open and doesn't try to block you into a set path. the front of the town is ver pretty and fun in particular. I also loved how you used chopped bamboo and bushed interchangeably, very unique!
One of the flaws is that some of the area seem pretty flat, but that probably has to do with the town not being complete. One thing you could improve on is making the "school" bigger and more like it's in use. Instead of putting science stuff in the basement of the main house, why dont you put it in the basement of the school and make it a lab? there are lots of different types of classrooms and i think you could do something really cool with that school!

It's coming along nicely! Well done!

 

[Kitty2201]

You can visit mine, DA is in my signature

 

[theviolentlolita]

I'll be doing more towns a little later in anyone is interested

 

[nyenisu]

you can visit mine if you want. i am still in need of hybrids/pwps, so it's still a work in progress~

 

[ThomasNLD]

You are also more then welcome to visit my town. My dream adress is in the signature. Just inn case you wonder, no.... I don`t like the house placement of Miranda. :\

 

[Zukil]

7800-2902-7327

Still a work in progress, I hope it's obvious.

 

[theviolentlolita]

Dream 5: Tom

It's nice being in a purely vanilla town for once. It seems like everyone decks their towns out to the nines anymore, so while you'd think a simple town would be boring it's more a breath of fresh air. Really, vanilla towns can work if that are done well. You say "i know i need more paths" like it's an annoyance. Like you get that every time you ask someone to look at your town. If you don't actually want paths, then screw them! You just need to find a different way to create direction through your town, and that's what it mainly needs, direction.
My favorite thing was probably the front room in your house, it flowed nicely. Also, thank you so much for not shoving couches and chairs that you cant slide into from the side up against a table. This is a pet peeve of mine that i find hard to overcome. Also I really like your map in general!

There's a lot of potential here, keep working at it and find your groove!

 

[ayeAmariah]

Ok! Last one for the night! Is it funny dreams are making me sleepy? XD

Dream 4: ayeAmariah

I cant believe your town theme is moe school girl late on the first day to school. I can't believe it, and i love it so much. This town is now very dear to my heart. I want you to know i literally ran from the house to the school building, probably because it's 2 in the morning and i'm slightly crazy at this time of night, but i digress.
The paths and layout are nice, i like that it's open and doesn't try to block you into a set path. the front of the town is ver pretty and fun in particular. I also loved how you used chopped bamboo and bushed interchangeably, very unique!
One of the flaws is that some of the area seem pretty flat, but that probably has to do with the town not being complete. One thing you could improve on is making the "school" bigger and more like it's in use. Instead of putting science stuff in the basement of the main house, why dont you put it in the basement of the school and make it a lab? there are lots of different types of classrooms and i think you could do something really cool with that school!

It's coming along nicely! Well done!

Thanks for the review! C:

I actually was thinking of removing the whole school thing once I expanded the house enough, and turn it into some kind of "Tea Town Mall" thing with a bunch of shops, restaurants, cafe, etc. But I think you've convinced me to keep the school!

 

[theviolentlolita]

Yay! I'm glad I convinced you to not change it! I really do like the school idea, so many people do stores and cafes they are kinda played out and i liked that the school was more unique. Or you can put a cafe in the school as a cute lunch area type thing. Idk i see more possibilities in a school the a mall, and more areas to be different!