Let me review your town!

You are so early in the process, it would be easy for you to restart and get a great layout. You could check out the possible layouts and decide on one before you restart? :)

are you still doing reviews? just curious is all. I see how many requests you've gotten
 
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are you still doing reviews? just curious is all. I see how many requests you've gotten

I'm still doing reviews :) I've just been out most of the day, so I'll get to it right away! But it does take at least 15 minutes for each town and I've got 12 in line :o

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Jesus Christ, it's a bit embarrassing with that mistake :i I'll correct it right away!
 
okay no problem haha ~ can't wait to hear my review. Im just working on landscaping atm so i just need a few pointers since i'm not the best at it.

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plus i wouldn't mind some input about possible places to put PWP's. I'm waiting on the wisteria trellis PWP suggestion from Muffy so i would like to know possibly where you might think a good spot to put that is :)
 
I'm still doing reviews :) I've just been out most of the day, so I'll get to it right away! But it does take at least 15 minutes for each town and I've got 12 in line :o

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Jesus Christ, it's a bit embarrassing with that mistake :i I'll correct it right away!

haha, I just didn't want to come across as the guy that has to point out everybody's mistakes
 
I'd love if you could review my town! Pretty much done with landscaping but would love another person's opinion :)

DA is 4900-4945-5032 :) thank you!
 
Vizionari:
I like the northern light! It’s a great time to update the dream address! Everything is so calm and nice. I really like how you have all these PWPs, lots of flowers(I sure do love hybrids :D) and the glow wands at the plaza are cute!

But I can’t help feeling it’s a bit messy? I don’t mean to sound rude, but it seems like a mess with all the flowers just placed in types/species, instead of colors? It might be a matter of taste, but I prefer color-cordinated flowers.
And the path in pink and yellow - I don’t really get it. Again; matter of taste, but I prefer the stonepath around the metal bench and the windmill, in the top left corner of the plaza. It looks so cute and it’s okay with a bit “messy” flowers, with the simple path! And the paths around the water pump are just awesome :D

If I were you, then I would make a simple path(perhaps the beige one you already have?) and make main roads around town, some places 2 patterns wide, other places perhaps just 1 pattern wide. I would make it easy to get to every house and building. Like Mint’s house. I don’t know how to get there, unless I followed the map - it would be nice with a path :) Unless you don’t want her to stay of course!
Afterwards I would get my flowers in systems and patterns(it might just be me who likes an organized town).
You have a great layout, some great PWPs with great placements(I love the spot with the caf?!) and it would be awesome if you made it more manageable :)

This is my opinion on your town and the most important thing is that you like your town! I hope you can use it :)
 
Vizionari:
I like the northern light! It?s a great time to update the dream address! Everything is so calm and nice. I really like how you have all these PWPs, lots of flowers(I sure do love hybrids :D) and the glow wands at the plaza are cute!

But I can?t help feeling it?s a bit messy? I don?t mean to sound rude, but it seems like a mess with all the flowers just placed in types/species, instead of colors? It might be a matter of taste, but I prefer color-cordinated flowers.
And the path in pink and yellow - I don?t really get it. Again; matter of taste, but I prefer the stonepath around the metal bench and the windmill, in the top left corner of the plaza. It looks so cute and it?s okay with a bit ?messy? flowers, with the simple path! And the paths around the water pump are just awesome :D

If I were you, then I would make a simple path(perhaps the beige one you already have?) and make main roads around town, some places 2 patterns wide, other places perhaps just 1 pattern wide. I would make it easy to get to every house and building. Like Mint?s house. I don?t know how to get there, unless I followed the map - it would be nice with a path :) Unless you don?t want her to stay of course!
Afterwards I would get my flowers in systems and patterns(it might just be me who likes an organized town).
You have a great layout, some great PWPs with great placements(I love the spot with the caf?!) and it would be awesome if you made it more manageable :)

This is my opinion on your town and the most important thing is that you like your town! I hope you can use it :)

Oh, thanks for the review! Glad to hear that you like the PWP's in town :) Unfortunately I have no intentions of replacing the main paths in town, the brick path was specifically used for only the residential quarter around Ai's house.

Yeah, if you take a look at my signature, it says I'm still working on flower arrangement :p

Also in my signature, I have Mint listed as a dream villager, so I have no intention of letting her move out. I kind of wanted the area around her house to be more foresty and natural, thus explaining why I didn't use any paths around her house. Still working on that though~
 
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Apple2012:
What a nice and simple town! I love the fall with the brown leaves on the trees, I love the night with the moon and the sound of some bugs.
The placement of your campsite is just spot on!
There is a fair amount of both trees and flowers, not really many hybrids on the top island, but it looks great!
I like the illuminated PWPs around your houses and in general on the other half of your town. They are all well placed and don’t drown in other things such as bushes, tons of flowers or other PWPs. Your path is really simple, great, fits your theme and goes around to all the things worth seeing in your town!

If I were to recommend any improvements, then I would say that perhaps you should use the free space outside of the paths? There are some places where theres is only trees, you could build park-like areas, a little forest with trees, bushes and benches or you could do something else! Perhaps some bamboo, a hot spring or something? It would make your town more exciting to visit!

But overall - it’s great as it is. It’s simple, there is a great use of the PWPs and a nice path. You have managed to make everything fit into your theme and even the houses seems to fit in! It feels completed and well done!

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Oh, thanks for the review! Glad to hear that you like the PWP's in town :) Unfortunately I have no intentions of replacing the main paths in town, the brick path was specifically used for only the residential quarter around Ai's house.

Yeah, if you take a look at my signature, it says I'm still working on flower arrangement :p

Also in my signature, I have Mint listed as a dream villager, so I have no intention of letting her move out. I kind of wanted the area around her house to be more foresty and natural, thus explaining why I didn't use any paths around her house. Still working on that though~

I'm sorry I missed the things in your signature :) But it's also cosy around Mint's house, you sure do get that foresty and natural feel to it! And like I said; it's a matter of taste :) And it's really nice to hear your idea with your town!
I would love to visit your town again when you are done with your flower-arrangements!
 
Oranje:
What a great oriental-fairytale feel at the plaza! I like the path! And I like the placement for the Reset Surveillance Center :D The pattern next to the water pump is just too cute!
You have a great amount of both trees, bushes and flowers and it looks great! It could perhaps use a bit of flower-organizing like you mentioned, but that’s a minor detail.
I love the flower arches to Rachel’s house! That’s so cute! :D And the hot spring with cedars looks great!

You say that the PWPs are finished? There are still some bare spots, so do you mean to fill them out with flowers/bushes/trees? I would fill them out with perhaps a bench or a cute PWP to make it look complete :)

Yusuf’s house - WOAW. What a brilliant main room! I don’t think I have ever been in a room that was so well put together! And the rest of the rooms are great as well! It reminds me of a palace with the samurai in the basement. I like it :D It really suits the oriental/fairytale theme!

Joshua’s house - A pirate’s life’s for me! :D Yay, what an awesome main room! It reminds me of Pirates of the Caribbean! I really like the whole underwater/surfer/pirate/Hawaiian/sushi/mermaid idea. The seashells on the floor is a really nice touch! I like the combinations of the different furniture series!

Lynn’s house - The tropical/bug theme is cute! The foresty feel in the mushroom/fall rooms are great and the top floor with the birthday cake reminds me of a children’s birthday :D

Rachel’s house - It’s clearly a palace/castle! I love it :D The entrance, the library in the back, the bath-room, the cutest tea-room I’ve ever seen! and the blue rococo bedroom :D Great colors, great house! The golden basement seems like a bit of a creepy surprise with the mummies and all. But what a stunning house!

Overall - I like your town! It’s really well color-coordinated! I love your path, I haven’t seen it before and it gives a great vibe to the fairytale-theme. It reminds me a bit of Aladdin :D
Your houses are well put together and even the music fits perfectly! It most have taken a LOT of time :D All of your houses are furnished in a way that I have never thought of and I love it! You have been quite creative with all the rooms :D
 
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