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[CrimsonFireWolf]

I want someone to do review of my town(Cro?Rojo)
i need feedback so i can see what to do so i make it look better if need to

Dream Address: 4700-2173-9203
it also in my signature

 

[ginx1028]

@Yukari
First Impression
Love the stone stair path blend in with the town tree, very naturalistic. But the pavement path broke away that connection...
Rivers path, love them designs! Inspired by Van Gogh's Starry Night perhaps? So much potential.
PWP
Wilted Tree with the Stone Hedges, great combination! Would recommend run around them often, create a dirt path that would look better then the current paths around them. Bus Station, Bamboo forest, great combination as well. Paths in that areas creates a harmonic feeling, might want to loose the flowers in there, leave green to be the central mono tone.
Houses
Reimu's: Entrance gives a new year vibe right off the bat with the red kotatsu and kodamatsu combination, love the arrange the furniture. 2F is the most impressive! The use of cloud floor and the bamboo knocking sound! It's so stunning that I'm considering of copying it lol, it's like a heaven in paradise.
Yukari Entrance lacks of certain subjective. Left room, the customized paper light is beautiful, cricket fits in with the room greatly. Basement, standard horror theme with the furniture nicely arranged. Have to ask though, what is that black sculpture with the pink eyes, can I catalog that?
Overall
I'm actually have to wrap up here due to time, but will definitely revisit your town in the future. It was definitely well thought out and planted, loved the Japanese themed rooms in your house.
While the rooms are excellent, you have more to do with the village landscapes in my opinion.
I'm honored to review you and have you reviewed, thank you for letting me review and visiting my town.

Overall score:4/5

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

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Mira
Appleton
7700-3698-8378

Likes:
-nice paths
-nice use of pseudo-paths
-good forest theme
-plaza area
-ReTail area
-nice use of Wisteria Trellis
-farm and park area (Winnie happened to be wondering there making it look lot more farm-like)
-statue fountain area

-Mira's house
*nice forest
*now that's quite a mess
*under the sea
*wintery cabin
*conservatory in the basement?
*flower field?

-Misu's house
*sweet's shop

Dislikes:
-path doesn't lead to some places

Suggestions:
-connect path to some villager houses and campsite/police station area
-Misu's house needs some expanding

Final Thoughts: very nice. might need just a little bit more to make it amazing.

Rating: 4/5
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[Yukari Yakumo]

thanks for the review
the statue with the eyes is the creepy statue and the river path was just one I stumbled onto online.
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ginx1028
Yggdrasil
5700-4052-3066

Likes:
-nice town name
-*wakes up* WOW!! Great plaza! Truly worthy of the name
-nice path
-everything is floating...
-illuminated/tower area is very nice
-nice use of pseudo-paths
-nice flag

-Ginx's house
*main room: very unusual
*right: nice ship
*back: the end scenes in 2001
*left: nice beach
*basement: succulent food; horrid d?cor
*2nd floor: took some decorating tips from Donald Trump huh?

-Path's house
*main: sparse hotel lobby?
*right: incredible edible eggs
*basement: makings of a nice store

-Path^2's house
*can hear the ocean
*main: true blue
*right: What the-! I thought the Zodiac set wasn't all out yet... Would you be willing to sell me some copies of them?
*left: very nice field
*basement: nice lounge area
*2nd floor: ready for the slopes?

Dislikes:
-need a little hint on path to Brewster's
-south-western area is too full of flowers
-Ginx's main room is so red... hurts the eyes
-Path and Path^2's houses need some interior work

Suggestions:
-move the cube farther away from Brewster's and move the nearby bridge to where the cube is
-create path/pseudo-path from the southern-most bridge to the campsite
-maybe let the bamboo in that area go wild around it

Final Thoughts: very nice and inventive. repeatedly impressed.

Rating: 4.5/5
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[Mayorofarcadia]

I'd really love a review ^^ my DA is 6700-3594-9438. Thank you!

Edit: Aaron's house is still being worked on. The main room is wip but the rest is okay

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

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CrimsonFireWolf
CroiRojo
4700-2173-9203

Likes:
-I think I know someone's favorite Pok?mon
-very red
-interesting paths
-zen/ReTail/city hall/Ronald's house area
-cherry blossom pattern
-Krystal's house + surrounding path
-campsite/Stonehenge area

-Ronald's house
*main: interesting
*right: Asian pirate ship?
*back: retro
*2nd floor: game room

-Andrew's house
*main: mellow yellow; nice beach resort theme; nice pattern on the fest lantern;
*right: nice space ship; interesting hologram setup; interesting music choice
*back: nice moon; what's the purple pattern on the stained glass?
*left: Doctor Jekyll I presume?
*basement: ever walk like an Egyptian hmm?
*2nd floor: interesting

-Phoenix's house
*main: nice cabin; looks like a matchbox waiting to happen
*right: halloweeny; interesting music choice
*back: mushroom kingdom anyone?
*left: monster mash
*basement: xmas
*2nd floor: sweet. I can just feel the cavities.

-Krystal's house
*main: ready for thanksgiving dinner?
*right: chilly
*back: even chillier
*left: alright are you Mr. Freeze or something?
*basement: well I certainly don't feel like swimming now
*2nd floor: nice. and at least the heaters on in here

Dislikes:
-so this is what it's like to play a Virtual Boy
-wind turbine's in an odd spot
-Ronald's house:
*main: argh! so much red!
*left: odd music choice

Suggestions:
-maybe move the wind turbine

Final Thoughts: very nice town. but my eyes hurt so...

Rating: my design sense says "4.75/5"; my eyeballs say "burn it to the ground."
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[CrimsonFireWolf]

Thank for the Review fo my town & it was really funny, overall it was a good review & So i got 4.75 well that pretty good score. i tell you why the reason, i did those things that you didn't like if it ok with you.

Cro?=Heart/Core in Irish , Rojo=Red in Spanish; that why my town has a red color feel to it

My Theme in the Main, 2nd floor & Basement Room of my Houses are part Theme of they Houses with the Side Rooms having there own Themes:

(Mayor)Ronald House is a Gorgeous Red with Favorite Rooms Theme

Andrew House is a Golden Cabana with SF Rooms Theme

Krystal House is a Girly & Mermaid with Winter Rooms Theme

Phoenix House is a Candy & Log with Fall Rooms Theme

the music in left room is oppose set to be on shuffle because for the reason it a music room so that why, the wind turbine is in a good area I think it match with the windmill for wind theme for pwp in that area. i think you forget to said about Ronald's left room & basement of his house. but otherwise every else in this review is spot on

 

[pollygone]

Can someone review my town? It's completed other than the resident houses that aren't quite finished yet
My dc is in my sig!

 

[TeeTee]

Can someone review my town? It's completed other than the resident houses that aren't quite finished yet
My dc is in my sig!

Announcement: I am back from vacation and ready to serve this thread again.
Big Hill
Polly
7600-2769-6172
7/10
Thank you for tons of snacks and outfits! You have a lovely town. I can see you are going for a sweets look.
However let's get down to business and focus what you need to work on. You need to focus on the structure of your town by using your path layout wisely. I often tell people path are there for decoration and guidance/structure. Your path lacks a little in guidance/structure. Most of your path looks clustered. You use too many path patterns and scramble them up a lot. The end results look a bit messy. Here are my tips for your paths:
1) Use a 2 wide path as your main path (preferably the brick path between Cody's house and Eloise's house)
2) Use the main path to connect all the buildings, bridges and houses (get rid of the narrow 1 tile dirt path: the bright colored candy grass grabs the attention AWAY from the 1 tile dirt path)
3) Make sure the water and candy tiles are not in the way of your main path
4) Coordinated your path well and follow a similar pattern throughout your town (great example of good path layout: between Cody's house and Eloise's house)

Next are houses (I am only doing Poly's House because the others are wip)
Poly's House:
Cafe Room: I wish there are leg spaces to walk around the kitchen and the dining areas.
Upstairs: It looks a bit empty... I suggest white Rococo series to fill it up.
Mermaid Room: The colors of the furniture mismatch. I suggest finding furniture that fit with the pink and blue of the Mermaid series. For example: lotus lamp, papa polar bear, pink regal series etc.
My favorite room is your main room because all the furniture share similar in color, not too clustered, I can access everything and the room doesn't feel too empty.

The general concern with your town is "cluster-ness." I feel like you are the person who loves pretty stuff and you just collect and pile them up. You need to work on collecting them and displaying them in an orderly manner. That way it doesn't look too messy.

~Cheers!

 

[Stalfos]

I'd love to see a review of my town. It's just been finished. Yay!

 

[TeeTee]

I'd love to see a review of my town. It's just been finished. Yay!

Skullbay
Stalfos
6600-4063-7895
9/10
Wow I love the flowers! I love the way you arranged them. Some flowers you arranged them by colors, some by species and some by patterns. Your path is very good too... it works well with your town because I felt like I was in a quiet little village. The path is very subtle and doesn't take away from the view of the flowers and trees around me. Yet it takes me to places I want to go. For example if I want to go to the town hall: all I have to do is look at the map once and get a general direction. Then I follow the path and I'll get there.
I love what you done with your house. Personally I am a big sucker for collecting furniture and I have to have at least 1 complete furniture series in a room. You have taken it further by adding other furniture pieces to the series you are working with. My favorite rooms are the Gorgeous Series w/ gyroids and Lab Set w/ Science furniture. The gyroids matching the gorgeous series' color and drumming away to the music is a fantastic idea!
The only suggestion I am giving you: make your park look nicer. I noticed the upper right corner of the park doesn't have any bushes. You need to plant some bushes near that rock or the deteriorated grass makes that area look like a bald spot.

 

[Stalfos]

Thanks for your kind words. I'll definitely try to fill out that top right corner of the park (good thing I got some spare bushes and hybrids).

<3

 

[MetaTriforce]

I'd love to get a review of my town! My dream address is in my signature

 

[MC4pros]

I would like a review! In my sig!

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

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MetaTriforce
Koholint
4700-2152-1851

Likes:
-interesting paths
-nice combinations of flowers
-park area
-roses match Eileen's house
-pokeball made of tulips

-Brock's hosue
*main: nice store
*right: nice Asian restaurant
*left: nice caf?(gave me some ideas)
*basement: arcade
*2nd floor: what mess. appropriate music choice

-Eileen's house
*main: nice.
*right: nice beach house
*back: nice Asian... garden(?). have a similar thing in one of my rooms.
*left: interesting. another restaurant, but totally different feel.
*basement: very tropical. something smells fishy...
*2nd floor: ladies and gentlemen! ready your dentures!

-Link's house
*main: well, it had to be that. think you've got every Zelda trope there is
*basement: now that is interesting.
*2nd floor: nice pic showcase

-Aerith's house:
*main: nice hotel setup
*right: traditional hotel room
*back: hip hotel room
*left: luxurious hotel room
*basement: exotic hotel room
*2nd floor: ritzy hotel room

Dislikes:
-overuse of flowers
-no path to Eileen's house
-fountains near plaza are rather hidden

Suggestions:
-remove the middle row of blue roses between the fountains, then plant some near the plaza so it creates a path between the two rows like so:


-might use brighter wall & floor in Brock's main room
-create path/pseudo-path to Eileen's house; like the fountains, try using flowers to lead the person on
-slightly less sad, more upbeat music for Aerith's lobby(Etube maybe?)

Final Thoughts: very nice, though, I feel as though the homes were more impressive than the town itself.

Rating: as a whole: 4/5; excluding houses: 3/5
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[TeeTee]

I would like a review! In my sig!

Amdavad
MC4pros
4100-3756-8919

3/5
It's a beautiful work in process. I can tell you are trying very hard to breed hybrids. The flowers are gorgeous!
Suggestions:
1) try to use a 2 tiles wide path (should be your main path) and connect all the houses, buildings, and bridges together. Keep in mind path helps the player to get from point A to point B.
2) arrange your flowers either by colors, species or patterns in the empty spaces not filled by path
3) you can border up houses and buildings with decorative tile or 1 wide tile path. It helps to connect buildings to your main path.
4) See if you can build a bridge to the left of your cafe building

Keep on building your town up! I cannot wait to see what you do with it! It's a great town you have.

 

[Swiftstream]

Swiftstream
Azalia
4600-2390-3329
Thanks in advance! <3

Also:
I've completed most of the landscaping in my town, but Lisanna and Latte's house aren't finished yet

 

[TeeTee]

Swiftstream
Azalia
4600-2390-3329
Thanks in advance! <3

Also:
I've completed most of the landscaping in my town, but Lisanna and Latte's house aren't finished yet

Azalia
Swiftstream
4600-2390-3329

4/5
I love your peaceful looking town. Lol I notice the cafe sign by Merengue's house. Should I eat a meringue or should I say "the cake is a lie?"
I like most of your paths. However I don't like the places where it's a hard squeeze and you used a 1 tile wide path. Those areas (including nearby Merengue's house) feels like I am walking on a tightrope. Any moment might be the moment I kill a beautiful flower. The most beautiful use of path has to be the path in front of Flora's and Mira's houses. I just like the symmetry in path and landscaping. Another thing you can work on your path is: unify the style of your paths (you have bricks here, stone there, dirt and flowers everywhere). It will make your town more neater and less clustered looking.
Your houses: I am going to say you are doing great on matching furniture and series together. Nothing looks too out of place. My favorite room is the basement bathhouse at Flora's house.
Oh yeah and one more thing: left of Maple's house looks empty... try building a topiary, illuminated PWP, arches, sculptures, even a water hose.

 

[Swiftstream]

Azalia
Swiftstream
4600-2390-3329

4/5
I love your peaceful looking town. Lol I notice the cafe sign by Merengue's house. Should I eat a meringue or should I say "the cake is a lie?"
I like most of your paths. However I don't like the places where it's a hard squeeze and you used a 1 tile wide path. Those areas (including nearby Merengue's house) feels like I am walking on a tightrope. Any moment might be the moment I kill a beautiful flower. The most beautiful use of path has to be the path in front of Flora's and Mira's houses. I just like the symmetry in path and landscaping. Another thing you can work on your path is: unify the style of your paths (you have bricks here, stone there, dirt and flowers everywhere). It will make your town more neater and less clustered looking.
Your houses: I am going to say you are doing great on matching furniture and series together. Nothing looks too out of place. My favorite room is the basement bathhouse at Flora's house.
Oh yeah and one more thing: left of Maple's house looks empty... try building a topiary, illuminated PWP, arches, sculptures, even a water hose.

Thanks!! ^^
I haven't updated in soo long x3
but I'll try to work on the areas you suggested! Thanks so much for the review! <3

 

[amemome]

if someone could help me find a good QR for paths and maybe leave a suggestion as for how I might possibly arrange flowers and paths in my town, I'd appreciate it.

Extra relevant(?) information: Only Zucker and Wolfgang are "permanent" in my town and I have no theme (perhaps it's floral/ natural but idk...)