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ACNiko
Eikendal
7300-2363-4675

Likes:
-nice paths
-never seen anyone use the Moai Head pwp
-nice designs

-player's house
*main room
*man cave basement
*second floor cafe

Dislikes:
-path cuts off or doesn't lead to some places it should; hides some pwps
-player house
*Moai Head and modern item in the princess room

Suggestions:
-extend path to the western beach entrance and more villager houses
-few more trees on both sides of the campsite
-try using flowers, bushes, and trees to create pseudo-paths
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-PWPs:
*bell, jungle gym, picnic blanket, cube sculpture, flower arch, bus stop

Final Thoughts: nice, but need to get to work perfecting it

Rating: 3/5
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TheGreatBrain
JOY
5600-3965-9382

Likes:
-very nice patterns
-nice to see a beautified beach
-city hall/station area
-town flag
-easter eggs
-ice rink
-Halloween!!
-castle garden

-Noel's house:
*Merry Christmas
*ski slopes

-Snow's house
*nice cabin
*farm(nice use of piggy banks and zodiac roosters)
*diamond mine
*all 7 short people

-Annie's house:
*purple rococo looks nice with creepy wall and floor
*witch's kitchen(?)
*graveyard
*Halloween party! First use of K.K. Parade I've seen and well done.
*Monster Mash! What's the painting of?

-Ella's house
*wedding chapel
*dining room
*ballroom
*throne room

Dislikes:
-Noel's house
*music choice in all but left room

-Ella's house
*music in right room

Suggestions:
-remove the flowers between the bridge and Annie's house
-Music:
*K.K. Birthday for Noel's main room
*Caf? K.K. for Noel's right room
*can't think of what to use for Noel's ski slopes
*Bubblegum K.K. for basement
*K.K. Etude for Ella's right room

Final Thoughts: very nice. would love to have the qr's for the snow and leaf patterns.

Rating: 4.5/5
 
Thank you Yukari! Your suggestions make a lot of sense and I appreciate that you took time to review my town. :D
 
aetherene * Etherene * 4900-2533-1201

Very nice town with beautiful checker style of flowers! Paths are oganized very smartly and the cherry blossoms are a nice touch! I especially like the lighthouse area! There's a lack of trees in some places, which makes me wonder if your going for a city vibe. That'd be great, but some pathways could use some bushes mingled with the flowers to give them volume. I also think the stone patterns is nice, but it's the only pattern. Some variation would be nice. Finally, the south is the show stopper of this town! It looks amazing! The north, while pretty in it's own right, seems lacking in comparison. Overall, it's a great town =)

Suggestions:
Deirdre's house is right in front of a modern bridge. I suggest thinning the tile path behind her house and have it hug about the river bed by the bridge. Essentially, give her a tiny, tiny backyard to help the obscured pop out more to visitors.
Some more bushes in South East would look nice. Same with around picnic area.

Freya's House:
  • Great mermaid room w/ pandas! Garbage can matches oddly well.
  • Mushroom is cute. A bit 'circular' for my taste, but still nice.
  • Cardroom is nice but feels empty.
  • Nice Cabana. A little empty. Cute accessories on table!
  • AWESOME GARDEN BASEMENT! Though some warm lighting would be nice.
  • Gracie room's nice, but could use a little something something in the center

Ryder's House
  • Cool front room. Nice symetry w/ plants.
  • Pirate idea is nice, wood colors clash way too much with vibrant fish set. Love the Zodiac tho!
  • Pave room looks pretty empty. Nice corner w/ bookcase tho.
  • Nice format on Ice Room =)
  • Suitcases of money are great! But I can't tell vibe of basement. Box half looks like scene from crime thriller and other half is cute/spooky.
  • Bug 7/11 is also perplexing, but wall looks great w/ convenience store look.

Arella's House
  • Adorable classic room. Very homey.
  • Princess room is nice. Cute placement of tea/snacks.
  • Sloppy set looks sloppy. Congrats. Nice attention to stains on carpet.
  • Kitchen/bath in one was something I wanted to try! Looks perfect!
  • Interesting trophy room!
  • Sweet room lookin' very chocolaty. Nice.
 
Thanks so much Angerfish for the review. :)

I'll see what I can do with my town more. I know in some areas, it's been lacking. It is meant to have more of a modern vibe to it, though not necessarily a city sort of town.

Freya and Ryder are my secondary characters and their houses are more for storing furniture, which is why a lot of sets are doubled up. (And Ryder's basement was originally supposed to be a mobster's basement with some shady dealings. xDDD)
 
would like a review of my town.
where should I put an Instrument Shelter and should I put some illuminated arches between Reimu and Mira's house?

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pollygone
Big Hill
7600-2769-6172

Likes:
-rain
-very nice patterns
-good candy theme
-wonderful presentation of all pwps

-Polly's house
*all. just all. what's the festival lantern in the left room altered with?

Dislikes:
-Cody's house
*try different walls/floors in main room
*main room messy
*basement undeveloped
*second floor needs a bit more variety

-Rose's house
*basement undeveloped
*can't access side rooms
*very messy layout

-Belle's house
*messy
*undeveloped

Suggestions:
-improve and organize the homes

Final Thoughts: town itself is nice; player homes need work

Rating: just town: 5/5; with homes: 4/5
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I'd like to request a review for my own town. It's got a more natural vibe to it, and it's nowhere near completed (having troubles with getting villagers to suggest some PWPs), but I'd appreciate some advice. Thanks!
 
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PotatoMuffin717
Stardust
4700-2500-5030

Likes:
-so many trees; momma loves her trees
-flowers
-nice presentation of pseudo-paths
-very nice forest feeling
-fountain/city hall area
-camping area

-Fishie's house
*main forest room
*back room: what am I looking at?
*second floor: very interesting

-Kituki's house
*right room: altered cabana
*back room: very blue
*left room: interesting cabin
*basement: nice caf?
*second floor: nice tropical spa

Dislikes:
-totem pole is hidden

Suggestions:
-maybe expand c's house. I'm not sure but it really works with the town theme as a tent
-clear up the area around the totem pole to make more visible

Final Thoughts: very nice town that boasts a superb forest theme

Rating: 5/5
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Yukari Yakumo

I already visited your town the other day because you said you had a zen theme town, but I will review it here too. Also, if possible may I get a review as well (DA is in my sig)? I just recently repaved my whole town, and I'd like opinions on it. :D

Likes:

*I like the upper corner by your town hall, especially the floor (What QR code is that if I may ask?) with the pink flowers on the ground. I like the placement of the spring and bus stop. They go together really cute.
*I like your path placement it makes your town pretty easy to navigate
*Your houses are beautiful!
*Also, your paths give a nice change throughout your town changing to different themes here and there, which is cool.

Homes: I loved ongoing asian theme/homey feel depending on the outside theme
-Reimu
*Refurbished regal furniture is really pretty, and the refurbished sunrise lamp looks awesome as well.
*Love love love the bath room. The colors go really well together giving a nice feel to the room.

-Yukari
*I like the creepy room, which is different from all the other zen style rooms
*All of your room are really well developed and go well together

-Marissa
*I enjoy the change from the asian theme (I'm assuming because it's in a different themed area of more forestlike deadtree etc)
*The mush furniture, cabin (I like the touch of the dream catcher) harmonize well with the outside theme
*I would suggest maybe making the outside of her home more Forest like as well (Ex. cabin exterior, the cardboard mailbox, wood fence)

-Alice
*Love the refurbished furniture! Your Alpine furniture looks bomb!
*The organization of the rococo set is awesome too with the knight and Dolly giving it a very symmetrical feel.
*Love the homey feel of this house.
*Beautiful bathroom (Loving the maid outfit touch).

Dislikes: You could try organizing your town to get a more unanimous feel/smoother transition of themes. Some of the themse/ PwPs still feel slightly haphazard, but that's just my opinion. :D

Suggestions: You could put 2 illuminated arches leading to the cafe instead of trees, and you could put the instrument shelter at that bottom right corner in that flower patch near retail. Perhaps, make the river path you have flowing through your town flow through to the more dead area, but not touching, just almost there, and then it dies off. Also, maybe completely take the path leading to the dead area/bonfire/stone hedge and change it all to that brown path you used, but keep the stairs leading to those areas.
 
6700-2142-4575,Its a WIP but give me a heads up on my HP theme :D.My main house and Hagrids is done others not yet
 
I would love a dream review of my town c: I updated it today and it's almost complete^^
Thank you! <3
DA: 7400 - 3717 - 0878
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Jasa11, Freeland
6700-2142-4575

*I liked how the town tree?s position is parallel to the town hall
*The paths are really cool, especially the little details like the spiders and all, fit the theme of your town very well c:
*I looove flowers, and your town is full of them xD especially the blue hybrids^^
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*Loved this little area with the cube in front of the train station, creative c:
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*I was very fascinated by your mayor?s house! Loved the main room and the library, the bathroom was best though haha^^
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*Loved the atmosphere in Hagrid?s house! Good job on that c:
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*The other homes are obviously still under construction, I really liked Josh?s home though! But maybe you should put some music on there too c:
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I really enjoyed visiting your town, and had a great time there! I love themed towns, and yours was very creative with all the paths & the well-organized homes as well c: Well done! <3
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I'd like a review of my town, if possible c: It's still quite under construction, I want the left part as a city and the right part as a forest, but my inhabitants keep moving into my forest ?_?
Mostly I'd like to know if anything is confusing, and I'd love pointers for more furniture for my rooms!
I'm 7300-2862-8450

I'll edit with a review for Lee-Chan!


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Lee-Chan: Cookie, Hiba (I hope that's your main character?)
7400 - 3717 - 0878

Pro:

1- Okay, first off, presents! I love town with presents and towns that don't make me run around in sleeping clothes. And you gave out such fancy clothesss.
Marshal is so cute I know why people want him. Good idea putting presents in front of his house, I wouldn't have gone in otherwise!
And generally speaking awesome work with the presents, they're hidden all over the place it's lots of fun! I'm sure I missed some and I did run all over the place.

2- Wendel. Giving out clothes! Yay! Always a cute surprise.

3- Ivory's house restaurant.
Oh man that was so cute and nice. There was a desert room and main room and oh man. All your little differently themed rooms with their own themes that was really nice. I might steal a few ideas for my own kitchen ;)
Great work with the layout, too, everything is easily accessible and not obscured.
One thing tho, I'm not sure why you put the seashell music boxes on the top floor? You can't really listen to a music box when there's already a music player, they'll just sound weird. Also generally the top room was my least favorite because the colours didn't match as nicely as in the other rooms. But I might just be picky.

4. Lollipops. Omnom.

5. Road to the bell is really cool. And it seems fitting in front of the police station, too. Same goes with the clock in front of the townhall.

6. Hibas house. Coffee! I love when people leave coffee. Also the little picnic blanket is a cool way to have a picnic place without actually using the project. AND you did something really nice with the drinking fountain there.
very cute and soft on the inside, too. I like the Pav? items with the blue flowers, that's a really nice touch.

7. In the right part of town, where there's this thin strip of land with a long road, you left presents by the side. That made it much more interesting. Great way to spiff up an otherwise boring part!


Contra:

1. Lou's house is just a tent and while you themed the inside after a tent really nicely (just needs a sleeping bag!) It seems kinda strange in your otherwise really city like town? I'd have expected it in a forest themed town, maybe, but in a city it's a bit out of place.

2. Anas house was nice but…*did it have a theme? Because if it did it bypassed me :c It seemed a little bit all over the place to me. The Gorgeous set is nice but didn't fit with the rest of the rooms.
LOVED the picture room, though. Man. That is a really really pretty room.

3. No road to the campsite? I know it's never active in dreams but it would've been nicer I think.

4. There was a wetsuit, but when I swam to the other side of the waterfall, there wasn't anything there. This would be the perfect place to put some kind of cute surprise, I think!


Fazit:

UGH how do you make such adorable and nice towns I can't take the awesomeness. I spent so much time running around and looking at all the pretty things it's just really, really nice. Lovely layout, lovely theme, and the evening sky really adds to it!
You did an awesome job on this c:

I don't want to leave I like my fancy clothes so muchhhhh
 
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I'll edit with a review for Lee-Chan!
Thank you so much for the review! And also thanks a lot for the constructive criticism, I will work on it c:
You're right about the tent, it's kinda out of place ^^" I made it like that because I use my 4th character for plot resetting xD
But since I completed all my dreamies, I'm thinking of turning it into something different now c: Anas' house didn't have a theme lol, it still needs a lot of work xD but thanks for the tips^^ and woah thank you so much for telling me this, I totally forgot to put something there on the beach! orz ;w;
 
Thank you so much!I loved the screenshots!I'll be finishing joshs(voldemorts) house pretty soon and then comes Hermione.I got a lot of visits when you reviewed :D.I'll review yours as soon as possible!
 
Mellow Dream Address: 5900-3237-4565
improved/updated, still wip
 
Can I have mine reviewed yet again? I pretty much threw all of my gray paths out the window :3 It's still a wip ofc.
 
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