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[Summ3rain]

Hi! I've only just created a dream address yesterday and would like some feedback! Houses are undecorated though, so please bear that in mind. DA: 6000-3912-2405

 

[Punchies]

Please do a review of my town. DA is 4100-2243-6150

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

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Summ3rain
QTville
DA: 6000-3912-2405

Likes:
-sakura
-nice patterns
-flowers
-Japanese schoolkid costume(personally always found them creepy, but points anyway)
-the river path that fits the season
-entire city hall area
-entire southern/eastern section

-Rainbow's house
*what a mess!
*wallpaper and flooring in right and back rooms

-Windy's house
*cool
*zodiac rainbow!

- Sunshine's house
*lunar base

Dislikes:
-Rainbow's house
*wallpaper and flooring in right and back rooms and basement
*mush room felt uninspired(and why so many hangers?)

-Windy's house
*little messy
*d?cor problems persist
*gorgeous room felt lacking
*basement needs rearranging and fleshing out

-Sunshine's house
*2nd floor is unfinished

Suggestions:
-maybe put a path going around the bottom of the flower clock
-flesh out player houses

Final Thoughts: the town itself is amazing. player houses need the same tlc.

Rating: town(by itself): 5/5; with houses: 4/5
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[Yukari Yakumo]

Punchies
Ylisse
DA is 4100-2243-6150

using pics to illustrate a few things

Spoiler

Likes:
-sakura
-interesting pattern
-Patrick's house
*man cave(?) on the right
*candy cafe

Dislikes:
-illuminated pwps next to zens felt off
-Tricia's house needs some love

-Patrick's house
*main room needs work on the layout
*most rooms felt rather hodgepodge

Suggestions:
-place a path nearer to the lighthouse
-remove some flowers around the hammock and picnic basket
-fix the path near the city hall


-PWP's
*windmill in the south-west corner
*bell, police station, fountain, bus stop, instrument shelter
*switch location of the flower clock and zen garden
*move the illuminated heart to one space behind where the illuminated tree is


*place street lamps or illuminated trees where the path begins towards the police station


then fill in the path on the left side


Final Thoughts: has some good things, but also has some odd quirks that need a bit of work

Rating: 3/5

 

[Summ3rain]

Thank you Yukari! Yes the houses are still currently for sets storage really. Will start decorating them to look like proper rooms and update again! Shame that there won't be Sakura next time :c

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

bump

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

ba bump


needing a review of my town.
want to know where should I put an Instrument Shelter, whether to replace the bushes south of Reimu's house with illuminated arches, and how to improve Yukari's and Reimu's backyards.

 

[Punchies]

Punchies
Ylisse
DA is 4100-2243-6150

using pics to illustrate a few things

Spoiler

Likes:
-sakura
-interesting pattern
-Patrick's house
*man cave(?) on the right
*candy cafe

Dislikes:
-illuminated pwps next to zens felt off
-Tricia's house needs some love

-Patrick's house
*main room needs work on the layout
*most rooms felt rather hodgepodge

Suggestions:
-place a path nearer to the lighthouse
-remove some flowers around the hammock and picnic basket
-fix the path near the city hall
View attachment 39320

-PWP's
*windmill in the south-west corner
*bell, police station, fountain, bus stop, instrument shelter
*switch location of the flower clock and zen garden
*move the illuminated heart to one space behind where the illuminated tree is
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*place street lamps or illuminated trees where the path begins towards the police station
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then fill in the path on the left side
View attachment 39319

Final Thoughts: has some good things, but also has some odd quirks that need a bit of work

Rating: 3/5

thank you ^^ will definitely work on it

 

[mayorvanessa]

Updated dream address is in my signature under the spoiler. C: I posted asking for a review last time but another one would be nice since my town has changed quite a bit, and Beau will be moving out soon. Sorry for bothering you guys but thank you, hehe
I need suggestions on where to place the instrument shelter as well. ;o

 

[Sidney2518]

I'd really appreciate and love a review! Mainly of my interiors, town doesn't have that much going on. DA is in my sig. The first one (Nuleaf) pretty please and thank you!

For some reason whenever I post on dream review threads the thread dies and I never get a review

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

Updated dream address is in my signature under the spoiler. C: I posted asking for a review last time but another one would be nice since my town has changed quite a bit, and Beau will be moving out soon. Sorry for bothering you guys but thank you, hehe
I need suggestions on where to place the instrument shelter as well. ;o

wanna trade reviews? heh heh

zzz...

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mayorvanessa
Astoria
7800-3856-9830

Spoiler

Likes:
-sakura blossoms!
-season appropriate path
-city hall/plaza area
-campsite with fire pit
-cot with basket of cherries
-Vanessa's house
*main room felt very elegant
*someone else who likes the palace bath idea
*good music choices

Dislikes:
-Vanessa's house needs some expanding
-need few more bushes and flower colors

Suggestions:
-plant some trees near:
*the bulletin board
*left of the bell
*left of the police station
*where the violets are next to Bubbles' house

-plant a flower or two next to the picnic blanket
-extend the path one space closer to northern side of the campsite


-PWPs:
*wind turbine at the cliff where the river meets the ocean(up and left of the bonfire) or in the north-westernmost corner

*hot spring, jungle gym, topiaries, wisteria trellis, geyser, stone tablet, statue fountain,
*Instrument Shelter location possibles:
~south of ReTail and west of the project currently being constructed

~between left or right of Carmen's house
~in the flower bed just to the right of the hammock


Final Thoughts: very nice; just needs some work in a few places

Rating: 3.5/5

 

[mayorvanessa]

wanna trade reviews? heh heh

zzz...

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mayorvanessa
Astoria
7800-3856-9830

Spoiler

Likes:
-sakura blossoms!
-season appropriate path
-city hall/plaza area
-campsite with fire pit
-cot with basket of cherries
-Vanessa's house
*main room felt very elegant
*someone else who likes the palace bath idea
*good music choices

Dislikes:
-Vanessa's house needs some expanding
-need few more bushes and flower colors

Suggestions:
-plant some trees near:
*the bulletin board
*left of the bell
*left of the police station
*where the violets are next to Bubbles' house

-plant a flower or two next to the picnic blanket
-extend the path one space closer to northern side of the campsite
View attachment 40463

-PWPs:
*wind turbine at the cliff where the river meets the ocean(up and left of the bonfire) or in the north-westernmost corner
View attachment 40464
*hot spring, jungle gym, topiaries, wisteria trellis, geyser, stone tablet, statue fountain,
*Instrument Shelter location possibles:
~south of ReTail and west of the project currently being constructed
View attachment 40465
~between left or right of Carmen's house
~in the flower bed just to the right of the hammock
View attachment 40466

Final Thoughts: very nice; just needs some work in a few places

Rating: 3.5/5

Thank you for the review! Sure, I can do yours later. C:
Also did you visit the one under the spoiler or in my signature? XD Luna changed my one, need to get my signature updated, lol.

 

[Jae]

I'd love a review, still trying to figure out where to put new PwPs when I get them. DA is in my signature.

 

[Born2BWild]

As always, my DA is in my signature (be sure to use the current one!). Visit me if you ever get the chance.

I'd love a review, still trying to figure out where to put new PwPs when I get them. DA is in my signature.

Your town is very nice.

Positives:

• Lots of hybrids
• Topiaries next to the cafe
• The four-leaf clovers in the sandbox
• KFC flag (lol)
• ROSIE!!!

Negatives:

• A bit more variety in the trees. Nothing but perfect apples as far as the eye can see is kind of boring.
• Town layout feels slightly cramped in several places (too many bushes/trees, etc.)

All in all, despite the nitpicking, the town looks pretty good. I'd give it a 7 out of 10.

 

[Glaceon2000]

I'd love a review. I'm still working on my town, I don't have as much PWPs as I'd like, but I think it's coming along pretty well. Also, please ignore the first room in my house, I just put random stuff that I like in there because I don't know what to do with it yet. Feel free to review my upstairs room though. Thanks. My dream address is in my sig.

 

[ACNiko]

I would love a review of my town. Please have in mind that it is far from finished.
I will also leave a few reviews myself, but right now I have very bad internet connection. I'll have good internet connection again on Moday, so I'll be back then.

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

I'd really appreciate and love a review! Mainly of my interiors, town doesn't have that much going on. DA is in my sig. The first one (Nuleaf) pretty please and thank you!

For some reason whenever I post on dream review threads the thread dies and I never get a review

ikr?

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Sidney2518
NuLeaf
5200-2204-8233

Likes:
-sakura!
-Jurassic Park Theme!
-nice flag
-Kabuki!

-Kit's house: trip around the world?
*right room: music choice makes it feel like room of a European in an exotic locale
*back room: Russian?

-Daniel's house
*Egg furniture already
*something smells fishy

Dislikes:
-lacking paths
-mixing paths
-path layouts confusing, incomplete, or just messy looking where they are

-Kit's house:
*main room felt cluttered

-Kat's house:
*small
*left room furniture clashed with music

-Daniel's house:
*small
*incomplete furniture sets

Suggestions:
-create paths between the houses and pwps
-plant some bamboo around the hot spring
-more trees
-spread the flowers out; around the paths would be good

-Kit's house:
*main room: remove a few pieces of furniture
*left room: rearrange furniture and music choice felt off with furniture maybe try K.K. Bazaar and have Cyrus alter the furniture to a darker color(starry night tee is what I'm thinking)

-Kat's house:
*needs expanding
*might darken the main rooms furniture and add tiki torches and tribal masks
*would switch the little boy fountain upstairs with another Merlion

-Daniel's house
*expand
*finish furniture sets

-PWPs
*bridge south of the plaza
*lighthouse on either side of the river's end
*bell, zen bell, flower clock, illuminated pwps, flower arch, wisteria trellis, picnic blanket, jungle gym, zen garden, cube sculpture, pyramid, stone tablet, fire pit, instrument shelter

Final Thoughts: needs a lot of work, but you have plenty to work with. Hop to it!

Rating: 2/5
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[Sidney2518]

Oh wow! Thanks so much for the review! Lots of great ideas to consider!

 

[TheGreatBrain]

Hi.I would love a review.
It's a storybook/4 seasons dream town.
Mayor Annie from JOY
5600-3965-9382
Thanks so much.

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

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Glaceon2000
Amity
DA: 5300-3790-1464

Likes:
-using flowers to create pseudo-paths
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Dislikes:
-Hannah's house needs lots of work
-rather empty feeling
Suggestions:
-use real paths at the same time as the pseud-paths
-can use trees and bushes alongside the flowers
-expand Hannah's house; is there any direction you'd like to go?

-PWPs
*lighthouse anywhere on the southern cliffs(except directly south of city hall)
*wind turbine where the flower path intersects south-west of Katt's house
*bell, cube sculpture, arch sculpture, instrument shelter, flower arch, illuminated pwps, geyser, log bench, statue fountain, flower clock, bus stop, wisteria trellis, fire pit, jungle gym, circle/square topiary, water pump

Final Thoughts: you seem to have put in a good bit of work, but you still have progress to make.
I'd suggest that you go dreaming in to find some inspiration.

Rating: 2/5
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