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[TeeTee]

For the Northwest Path, Renee has moved out. Therefore, I'm going to connect the path that led to her house up to the one connecting Zell's and Diana's.

Update Review on for Almity
Dream Address: 5200-3739-2817
The grassy path pattern you picked for the town plaza matches well with your pre-existing brick path. I like it very much. Also the path runs smoothly now. So I like it very much. Good job on the couple of hours of work.
In the future, you can start working on the greenery. You can put patterned flowers, trees, bushes around your path. My tip is: make the greenery look neat.

 

[TeeTee]

I want to request a review. I don't have many PWP's yet, but with what I have i'm pretty happy with my flower placement, tree placement, themes and pathing. Thank you

My dream address is: 5400-3613-6582

Review for Kittie
Town: Neko
Dream Address: 5400-3613-6582
Here are my suggestions:
For your path, I suggest sticking to one type of path or similar colored path. Also I am not a big fan of the 1 wide path for a main path. Mainly because they are too narrow and everything else overpowers them visually. I think narrow path should be used at surrounding buildings like fencing posts.
My other suggestion is to try connecting all buildings to their neighboring buildings. You can surround the houses with narrow paths then connect them to the main path like what I did with my villager's houses. You can try looking at my dream address for how I did my path layout. I used 1x1 and 2x2 path around my villagers' houses then connected them to my main path. Or you can use path to cover up the ground completely like my friend's zen town: 4800-2141-2574.
And for the deep forest area: I love the idea but it's hard for me to zig-zag my way through. It's best to create a natural path straight through the forest and have trees surround the natural path in a orderly fashion (kinda like Pokemon forest routes).
Thanks for letting me visit and critique. It's a lovely town and I'm sure it will look even lovelier in the future. I love the villagers and the natural scenery.

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I am interested a review of FoxRiver (not Gotham - still have way too much to do there.) DA in signature. Thanks!

Review for iheartbeau
Town: FoxRiver
Dream Address: 5200-2186-5867

First of all xD *high fives you for being a deer lover*
I like your path. It runs very smoothly. The only tiny problem I have is: why not put path on either side of Bam's house then the players can run directly from the train station to Bam's house and beyond?
My main suggestion to you is to work on the greenery. For example decide on what type or color of flower should border your path? Or should you plant trees and bushes in an orderly fashion? Should you have patches of flowers arranged by colors/patterns/species? I think you should think about those questions for a bit.
My other suggestion is the area by Wisteria Trellis... maybe make it into a botanic garden? Have Topiary, Statue Fountain, Flower Bed, Flower Arch, Flower Clock or Fencing added to the area?
Thanks for letting me dream and review your town. I like it I can't wait to see what you do with your town in the future. Also thanks for fating me up with those delicious treats at the town plaza. xD

 

[Sir Takoya]

TeeTee's going all out.

Dream code is in my siggie. My dream reviews are mean so I don't think I'll even try,

 

[TeeTee]

TeeTee's going all out.

Dream code is in my siggie. My dream reviews are mean so I don't think I'll even try,

xD I think I will leave your Dream Review for Yukari. Since I am working on Snowyuki's dream at the moment before I bounce outta here again.

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I would love feedback for my town as I am stuck with some big area and not sure what to do.

Upper right: planning to do garden/small park but not sure how, how to build a nice small park?!!!

Bottom left near my mayor house: lol perfect peaches orchard or half split out for my lovely garden area?

Review for Sn0wxyuki
Town: Windbell
DA: 47000-3333-7766
I like your town and the way you use your greenery. The flowers matches and contrasts to each other.
My suggestion for a park... hmmm make it a secret garden/park? xD For example have

Spoiler

Perfect Peach= x

You see how the middle has a hollowed out diamond shape? But you have a space of entrance at the N, E, W, S sides? It's like a secret park or garden.
You can build in a water fountain and a few park benches in the middle. xD But it's just an idea I have. I don't know how it will look but in theory it sounds romantic.

 

[kittie885]

Review for Kittie
Town: Neko
Dream Address: 5400-3613-6582
Here are my suggestions:
For your path, I suggest sticking to one type of path or similar colored path. Also I am not a big fan of the 1 wide path for a main path. Mainly because they are too narrow and everything else overpowers them visually. I think narrow path should be used at surrounding buildings like fencing posts.
My other suggestion is to try connecting all buildings to their neighboring buildings. You can surround the houses with narrow paths then connect them to the main path like what I did with my villager's houses. You can try looking at my dream address for how I did my path layout.

Thank you! I highly enjoyed your critique. I find your suggestions helpful and they will help me evolve my town!

 

[Born2BWild]

My town is a work in progress if there ever was one, but I'd very much enjoy some feedback on it. Specifically, I'd like some suggestions on A) where I should put my police station and B) whether or not I should replace my path.

Oh, and be sure to use my new dream address if you review.

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

My town is a work in progress if there ever was one, but I'd very much enjoy some feedback on it. Specifically, I'd like some suggestions on A) where I should put my police station and B) whether or not I should replace my path.

Oh, and be sure to use my new dream address if you review.

putting on my pj's

 

[sn0wxyuki]

xD I think I will leave your Dream Review for Yukari. Since I am working on Snowyuki's dream at the moment before I bounce outta here again.

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Review for Sn0wxyuki
Town: Windbell
DA: 47000-3333-7766
I like your town and the way you use your greenery. The flowers matches and contrasts to each other.
My suggestion for a park... hmmm make it a secret garden/park? xD For example have

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Perfect Peach= x

You see how the middle has a hollowed out diamond shape? But you have a space of entrance at the N, E, W, S sides? It's like a secret park or garden.
You can build in a water fountain and a few park benches in the middle. xD But it's just an idea I have. I don't know how it will look but in theory it sounds romantic.

OMG I HAVE NOT THOUGHT OF THIS!! XDD THANK YOU!! <33 yes and I love the idea!! xDD I was planning to put the gyesder?(or what it call) in the middle so occasionally water spray out from it xD but then your idea not fit perfectly father than my dull and straight arrangement xD yay thank you! I am glad I posted here for review xD I will try to do some once my time allow me to!

 

[AppleBitterCrumble]

I'm willing to reveiw any towns but to make it easy for me can you Visitor Message me saying "I would like a DA Reveiw!" and I will whenever I get the chance and I will post on here your feedback~

I would like a review please~

 

[Born2BWild]

putting on my pj's

Thanks! I'll check out yours in return if you like.

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

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Born2BWild
Animalia
DA: 5500-3732-5053

Likes:
-nice pebble pattern
-flower arrangement
-Steven's yard, kitchen with Brewstoids, 2nd floor cabanna deck

Dislikes:
-overuse of path, especially the sections north of the plaza and west of city hall
-flowers of only red, white, and yellow got tiring and stale
-lack of trees
-lack of pwps in southern section

Suggestions:
-make path areas smaller
-more pwps in southern area
-more variety in flower colors(use violets if lacking in hybrid count)

Rating: 2.5/5
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[Born2BWild]

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Born2BWild
Animalia
DA: 5500-3732-5053

Likes:
-nice pebble pattern
-flower arrangement
-Steven's yard, kitchen with Brewstoids, 2nd floor cabanna deck

Dislikes:
-overuse of path, especially the sections north of the plaza and west of city hall
-flowers of only red, white, and yellow got tiring and stale
-lack of trees
-lack of pwps in southern section

Suggestions:
-make path areas smaller
-more pwps in southern area
-more variety in flower colors(use violets if lacking in hybrid count)

Rating: 2.5/5
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Thanks for the suggestions! And yes, I'm aware of my monotonous "red, white, yellow" pattern, but it's mainly because I don't have nearly enough hybrids.

Any suggestions on where my police station should go?

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

Thanks for the suggestions! And yes, I'm aware of my monotonous "red, white, yellow" pattern, but it's mainly because I don't have nearly enough hybrids.

Any suggestions on where my police station should go?

I'd say either south-west of city hall(where the pink roses are) or in either area to the side of the path between the train station and plaza(i.e. directly left or right of the fountain).

 

[AppleBitterCrumble]

So is no one gonna reveiw my town or...

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

So is no one gonna reveiw my town or...

heh heh.
trade reviews?

going to dreamland right now.

 

[AppleBitterCrumble]

heh heh.
trade reviews?

going to dreamland right now.

Sure I'll review your town (Once my mom goes down stairs because i'm not allowed on AC on the week.)

 

[Sir Takoya]

I tell my thoughts and no one reviews my town. This system is broken.

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

AppleBitterCrumble
Tokyo
DA: 5700-2165-8223

Likes:
-KEN!
-nice pattern in plaza
-nice paths that fit the fairy-tale theme
-tulip clusters and topiary near train tracks
-lots of palm trees
-shells on the beach ramps
-placing of Ai's house; made feel like it was an extension of the plaza
-Ai's caf? and restaurant theme
-pseudo path to cube scuplture

Dislikes:
-no path in south-west corner
-Felix's house is empty(might be trying to fix that, so no deduction)
-Ai's house:
*felt like poor choice for floor in main room, wall and floor in right and back.
-Robert's house felt lacking
-two bridges right next to each other
-sand(?) pattern clump north of Felix's house

Suggestions:
-move one of the eastern bridges(I'd say the one on the left) to north of Felix's house
-fill out or remove the sand pattern north of Felix
-connect path in southern corner or plant trees/bushes/flowers to make a pseudo path(like what you did south of the plaza)
-chop down the leftmost apple tree near the cube sculpture to see the bushes better(if you really like it, might be able to plant a new one, one square down where the blue pansy is)

Rating: 4/5

 

[TeeTee]

I tell my thoughts and no one reviews my town. This system is broken.

Lol I think Yukari was just tired and skipped you accidentally. So I am back from the hospital and you will get a long review from me.

Review for Sir Takoya
Town: Kiahnaja
Dream Address: 5600-2140-5065
Your town looks gorgeous! The natural path fits in nicely with the flowers, bushes and trees. However some places are clustered and hard to navigate. I have a few suggestions regarding some places of your path:
1) The path from the Zen Garden to Wisteria Trellis could be widened a bit or maybe surround the Wisteria Trellis completely in path? It's just Wisteria Trellis have more twist and turns that's harder to navigate w/o accidentally stepping on the flowers.
2) Cut off the regular peach tree by Lolly's house? So it doesn't feel like Lolly's house is completely screened off to Bianca and Hikari's houses.
3) Put a path from Hikari's house to the Police Station. You can surround the Zen Lamps in front of the Police Station with path patterns.
4) There's a tight squeeze from Genji's house to the bridge. I would replace the trees with bushes so it doesn't look too visually clustered.
5) Clear the bamboo, peach tree and bushes North of Pekoe's house.
I love your houses! They show your personality but I do wish some of them are less clustered and have more leg room to walk across. I really wanted to touch those kitties at the back of the buffet line at Ashley's house or have access to hang with the DJ at Akimitsu's house.
Thank you for letting me critique your town. You have a great visually attractive town. Everything is bright and happy, but please be careful of the clustered areas. They are tight squeezes and I would hate to run and accidentally kill one of your flowers.

 

[Sir Takoya]

Thanks for the review TeeTee, I'll keep all of those things in mind. I'm just glad another person got to enjoy it.