Join the Dream Review Army

[Yukari Yakumo]

There have been a lot of dream review threads lately(did one myself) and most of them seem to get a lot of requests, but one person can only do so much.

Here's my attempt to alleviate this problem:
If you like a review, make a request here.
If you'd like to leave a review, do so.
That's it.

Since it's a larger pool of reviewers rather than one person doing 40+ towns all by themselves, I imagine this fashion might make a slightly bigger dent.

Only real requirements would be
1)when you leave a review, please leave the member name, town name, and DA
2)be constructive with any criticism

you are welcome to bump this thread

 

[MisterEnigma]

This is a great idea. I'd love to request a review, I recently updated my town, and I'd be more than happy to return the favor to anyone in need of any advice or feedback.

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

This is a great idea. I'd love to request a review, I recently updated my town, and I'd be more than happy to return the favor to anyone in need of any advice or feedback.

Thanks. I'll do yours right now.
I also need a bit of a review.

 

[TeeTee]

Thanks. I'll do yours right now.
I also need a bit of a review

It's a good idea. I wouldn't mind helping doing the reviews especially during long nights.
And I'll do a review for your town now.


Edit:
Review for:
Yukari Yakumo
Gensokyo
4300-3714-2577
Upon waking up at your town, I noticed your creative way of using your path. I just have a few minor suggestions for your path: 1) make your main path look like a grass path to match the grassy waterways and grassy flower patterns. 2) Path near Ken's house and the bus stop is a bit confusing, maybe try to organize your bamboos a bit?
Next are your houses and they are unique. I really don't have critiques for houses because I feel they show off a player's individuality the most. And your houses are very original and unique. My favorite would be Reimu's house because her house gave off a nice traditional Japanese house (minus the Ice room xD). Oh now I am hitting another rough place to navigate... it's the forestry around Alice's house. It feels a bit clustered but it's better than the bamboo forest around Ken's house.
Thanks for letting me visit your dream. I liked it. There are a few areas where it feels a bit clustered but other than that it was a very lovely dream.

 

[MisterEnigma]

Review for:
Yukari Yakumo
Gensokyo
4300-3714-2577

Spoiler

Upon first waking up in your town, I love seeing towns with different weather and times! Your town has a very unique and memorable vibe.The structured planning of your trees, bushes, and flowers really shows a deliberate and thoughtful planning process. Something also very unique about your town are your diagonal paths, I haven't come across too many towns personally that place their paths in this manner. The PWP's you chose for your town seemed to fit the theme very well. I also liked exploring your houses and seeing your creative set up with your rooms! Generally, a very fun town that shows your efforts and devotion.

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

Review for:
Yukari Yakumo
Gensokyo
4300-3714-2577
Upon waking up at your town, I noticed your creative way of using your path. I just have a few minor suggestions for your path: 1) make your main path look like a grass path to match the grassy waterways and grassy flower patterns. 2) Path near Ken's house and the bus stop is a bit confusing, maybe try to organize your bamboos a bit?
Next are your houses and they are unique. I really don't have critiques for houses because I feel they show off a player's individuality the most. And your houses are very original and unique. My favorite would be Reimu's house because her house gave off a nice traditional Japanese house (minus the Ice room xD). Oh now I am hitting another rough place to navigate... it's the forestry around Alice's house. It feels a bit clustered but it's better than the bamboo forest around Ken's house.
Thanks for letting me visit your dream. I liked it. There are a few areas where it feels a bit clustered but other than that it was a very lovely dream.

Thanks.
Have tried other forest patterns, but the brick I use seems to work best for only requiring the one design slot.
I made Ken's bamboo and Alice's forest so that they'd force a player to navigate around on a more scenic route rather than straight to it. Also wanted to partially hide Alice's house from the main path.

Fawful
Pharalan
DA: 4400-3491-6751

likes:
-unusual paths
-unusual flower grouping(yellow next to blue roses east of the plaza was interesting)
-Ellie's house:
*nice overall
*Egyptian theme in main room
*yard in the basement
-Fey's house:
*again, nice overall
*library in back
*gorgeous basement(what was the idea you had in mind with the theme? felt like posh hotel suite)
-Mimi's house
*full caf? with kitchen, bathrooms, and second floor office
*basement felt straight out of Alice in Wonderland(do you have the qr for the wallpaper?)

-Jonathan's spooky house

dislikes:
-Fey's house: mixing the classic with rococo felt odd
-apparent lack of pwps
-paths looped around

suggestions:
- more pwps

rating: 3.5/5
you have room to grow.

 

[MisterEnigma]

Fawful
Pharalan
DA: 4400-3491-6751

likes:
-unusual paths
-unusual flower grouping(yellow next to blue roses east of the plaza was interesting)
-Ellie's house:
*nice overall
*Egyptian theme in main room
*yard in the basement
-Fey's house:
*again, nice overall
*library in back
*gorgeous basement(what was the idea you had in mind with the theme? felt like posh hotel suite)
-Mimi's house
*full caf? with kitchen, bathrooms, and second floor office
*basement felt straight out of Alice in Wonderland(do you have the qr for the wallpaper?)

-Jonathan's spooky house

dislikes:
-Fey's house: mixing the classic with rococo felt odd
-apparent lack of pwps
-paths looped around

suggestions:
- more pwps

rating: 3.5/5
you have room to grow.

Thank you so much! Agreed on your advice, my villagers unfortunately haven't been pinging me with PWP's lately at all, but I'd love to get a windmill, bell, and more fairy tale themed items in at some point. I'll try to fix Fey's house as well, I think I'll stick to Classic since the main room is Rococo. The idea behind Gorgeous was sort of a suite, it was originally upstairs so I thought of it as a penthouse suite, but I moved it in favor of another set, I'm very glad you got that vibe! I do have the QR for the Alice in Wonderland themed room, as soon as I'm able, I can send it to you or post here if you like! Thank you so much, I really appreciate your insight!

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

bump

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

not giving up on this

 

[LaceGloves]

Review mine? My dream address is in the siggy.
It's still a wip.
I'll visit yours if you request it. c:

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

okie dokie

I'd like a review(I seem to be a junky for these things)
kinda need advice on home interiors and where to put some street lamps, torches, and a statue fountain
~
LaceGloves
Bellace
5200-3541-1162

Likes:
-oooh! autumn!
-nice patterns and that go with the season
-planned placement of flowers and trees
-every room in Lacie's house

Dislikes:
-feels a little barren of pwps
-.........very "cute" flag

Suggestions:
-a bridge to the south-east of Lacie's house
-some more pwp's

Rating: 4/5
~

 

[CR33P]

I'd like a review please
btw my town is wip

da: 5700-3411-3510

 

[TeeTee]

I'd like a review please
btw my town is wip

I would like to give you a review but what's your dream address?

 

[Milano]

I would like to do reviews ?
I can post screenshots/reviews on my tumblr and on this thread~

 

[TeeTee]

I would like to do reviews ?
I can post screenshots/reviews on my tumblr and on this thread~

Good idea, you can dream of my town and may I do a Tumblr post about your dream town?

 

[Milano]

Good idea, you can dream of my town and may I do a Tumblr post about your dream town?

I don't have a dream town currently, but I'll be happy to review yours!
Idk. I just love looking at towns and getting inspiration c: .
I'll post a link to the review once I finish.

 

[IrishMike15]

I'd like a review

Dream Address is 5200-3739-2817

 

[TeeTee]

I'd like a review please
btw my town is wip

da: 5700-3411-3510

To: Creepysheepy
da: 5700-3411-3510
xD I remember your town. The place north of Flora's house is still bare but I know you have PWPs planned for it in the future. The problem is... what are you trying to do with the path North of Flora's house? Are you planning to use a 3 wide diagonal path to go to the beach? If that's the case I think that could work wonders.
There are still some villagers' houses without path. I like what you did with your lighthouse and police station. Perhaps you can copy that style and surround your villager's house with path designs then make them link to your main path.
As a whole your town is looking better and better. I can't wait to visit it again in the future. Keep up the good job!

- - - Post Merge - - -

I don't have a dream town currently, but I'll be happy to review yours!
Idk. I just love looking at towns and getting inspiration c: .
I'll post a link to the review once I finish.

Thanks very much and lemme know in the future when you have a dream address cuz I would like to visit! ^^

 

[xTurnip]

I'll help review towns. :3

 

[CR33P]

@Tee
I was planning on doing a plaza thing with a cube sculpture in the center, but since i demolished a bridge i don't think that'll work. right now i don't have any idea what to do there.