Looks good to me :3
I like the pond placements and where the Town Hall is (imo), but I'm not too sure about the Re-Tail placement because I'm a lazy sludge and couldn't be bothered running back and forth to sell stuff XD
Although the houses near the Town Hall may be a bit annoying :/
I think that should be mostly up to you. You shouldn't ask us to decide for you since it should be your decision and not ours and since it is solely based on personal preference.
Some tips on figuring out whether you like it or not is by looking at the map and thinking about how you would organise it (where to place your house, cafe, campsite, PWPs). Also you can think of whether or not you like to have lots of water in your town or not (as this river is quite small compared to most). You could also consider whether or not you would rather have one or two beaches and whether or not you would rather have your town split in two by the river or have the river create a tiny peninsula (as on the map in your picture).
I really like it! Some factors I take into consideration are the starting villagers, native fruit, and train station color. But from the overall perspective, I think it looks great. Keep it
up to you, I don't like the uneven space though, I never searched for a good map, i got it the first day the game came out so i didn't know, didn't care and I'm still happy with mine