Dream visits+ feedback, I'll return the favor

[Ace Marvel]

Hi everyone, Im just starting to shape my town, so I would love to get suggestions.
I will visit yours too, and please be critical, if you think its the ugliest town ever please say it, but please tell me why, I really feel the TBT forums is an awesome community so your opinion is really important to me.

My Dream adress is 5300-3984-7161 Town is Vanille

 

[maddienicole]

I'll visit your town. Do you want me to send feedback here or in a PM? My dream address is 4700-3738-2688

 

[xanisha]

I will take a look~ I will post when I have finished looking it over

My dream address is in my sig, my town is not the best but I like it <3

 

[Ace Marvel]

I'll visit your town. Do you want me to send feedback here or in a PM? My dream address is 4700-3738-2688

Here is okay
Your town is really pretty and girly, lots of flower, I mean your beach is full of them.
Your paths are greats since the lead to all parts of your town, only sugesti?n will be maybe more trees or buches since some parts of your town look a little empty, also i dont know if you planned this but I get a beach town vibe from your town.

 

[maddienicole]

For some reason, your town reminds me a lot about about mine before I redid all my paths and such. I like how you have the bushes lining some of the paths (though some are blooming and some are not. I'd suggest lining specific ones up in a row so that it looks better, because the bushes don't bloom at the same times of the year). I like how you have some slanting paths instead of turns. I'd suggest trying to breed more hybrids (they often spruce up a town). You could also use more public service projects (even as simple as a bench would look nice in any of your areas). Other than that, I rather liked your town.

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Here is okay
Your town is really pretty and girly, lots of flower, I mean your beach is full of them.
Your paths are greats since the lead to all parts of your town, only sugesti?n will be maybe more trees or buches since some parts of your town look a little empty, also i dont know if you planned this but I get a beach town vibe from your town.

Thanks, I know there's a large area where there's nothing there. At one point, there were a bunch of villagers living up there, but they all moved out (I'm just sort of out of ideas of what to put there, but I'm working on it). I never really thought about the vibe of my town, but thanks for the feedback! I'll try and incorporate your advice into my town.

 

[xanisha]

Town of Vanille:
I currently like your town layout I think it is really nice ^.^ Also where you put the public work projects (like the campsite and the caf?) is nice in respect to your town layout.
I think you are on the right track with your paths they seem to go everywhere that they need to but maybe mix up the design a little bit you only have one path and it can get a bit repetitive, not a big deal just something to think of.
Your flowers, personally I like my flowers organized and you flowers just scream chaos, try grouping them all together, by type or by color, or use a mix of flowers to line the sides of some of your pathways.
Your bushes are really amazing I really love the bushes that make up that square buy your caf? and police station. I think it would be beautiful if you put a picnic blanket or a fountain or something in the middle of it. Or you can make the bushes it into a maze or something.
There seems to be quite a few weeds, buried things, and items laying around you may want to think about clean those up a little bit.
The houses are a work in progress I think, but I really like the upstairs in the house closet to the beach.
Your villages are really cute I really like Bruce and Flora.

 

[Ace Marvel]

I will take a look~ I will post when I have finished looking it over

My dream address is in my sig, my town is not the best but I like it <3

I really like the candyland theme, its like a fairytail kingdom!
Your roses, are everywhere and you you used the space really well, lots of open space, yet it fills full, if that make sense.
It really feels like a candyland kingdom, and your villagers go perfectly with that style.
Maybe one sugestion is to plant trees in some of your flower fields, so it have more dimension, but they by their own also look gorgeous, so thats all i can say

 

[xanisha]

I really like the candyland theme, its like a fairytail kingdom!
Your roses, are everywhere and you you used the space really well, lots of open space, yet it fills full, if that make sense.
It really feels like a candyland kingdom, and your villagers go perfectly with that style.
Maybe one sugestion is to plant trees in some of your flower fields, so it have more dimension, but they by their own also look gorgeous, so thats all i can say

Thanks so much
I think that planting trees in my flower fields is a great idea! I will look into it more

 

[MC4pros]

Please visit mine in my Sig.

 

[Ace Marvel]

Thank you both, I will definatly make my bushes the same type, and yea my flowers scream chaos, and I will defenetly will group them together by type!

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Please visit mine in my Sig.

You town is going to explore be careful, is full of creepers, I loved the minecraft reference, my suggestion will be to put patas, that people can follow so the dont destrow your flowers

 

[xxyume08xx]

Visiting Vanille:
Great start! I personally think the paths match the town very well. I'm assuming you have all your dreamies so the villager houses are set. As a next step, I would start lining your paths with bushes or flowers, kinda like what you did in the top right portion of your town where your cafe is. I would also start building public work projects since those can add a lot to your town. You could also get maybe single paths to lead to more isolated areas of town? All in all, great start, can't wait to see how it'll develop!

Would love if you could come to my town as well There are some parts that are undeveloped since I'm still trying to get my remaining dreamies to move in. xD

 

[AliciaNins]

Please visit my town, too.

 

[Ace Marvel]

Visiting Vanille:
Great start! I personally think the paths match the town very well. I'm assuming you have all your dreamies so the villager houses are set. As a next step, I would start lining your paths with bushes or flowers, kinda like what you did in the top right portion of your town where your cafe is. I would also start building public work projects since those can add a lot to your town. You could also get maybe single paths to lead to more isolated areas of town? All in all, great start, can't wait to see how it'll develop!

Would love if you could come to my town as well There are some parts that are undeveloped since I'm still trying to get my remaining dreamies to move in. xD

Thank you so much for the feedback, I sure will visit your town. I'll probably post the feedback tomorrow, almost 2 am here

 

[Ace Marvel]

Visiting Vanille:
Great start! I personally think the paths match the town very well. I'm assuming you have all your dreamies so the villager houses are set. As a next step, I would start lining your paths with bushes or flowers, kinda like what you did in the top right portion of your town where your cafe is. I would also start building public work projects since those can add a lot to your town. You could also get maybe single paths to lead to more isolated areas of town? All in all, great start, can't wait to see how it'll develop!

Would love if you could come to my town as well There are some parts that are undeveloped since I'm still trying to get my remaining dreamies to move in. xD

Thanks for the advise!

Very nice town, I liked the bamboo around the plaza, and how you place the public work proyects, and the flowers are really pretty, I also liked the open spaces, overol you have put a lot of work into your town. Onlu suggestion will be move your third house (The tent) to another place because I felt it was a little crowded in that area. Hope you get all your dreamies!

 

[CrimsonFireWolf]

come to my dream town

 

[Ace Marvel]

bump

 

[CrimsonFireWolf]

come to my dream town

the reason why i told to see my dream town because you need to design your path in your town little better. but that one area by east sea side look good, I iike the bushes in the middle of the path it look neat also you need to design your area by town plaza were the redd's shop is at it stick out when i came to your dt. one more thing you need to do is add more pwps in your town to make more lively & a & third Bridge would hurt, that all i can said otherwise i can see you are trying to make a effort for your town.

 

[Ace Marvel]

the reason why i told to my dream town because you need to design your path in your town little better. but that one area by east sea side look good, I iike the bushes in the middle of the path it look neat also you need to design your area by town plaza were the redd's shop is at it stick out when i came to your dt. one more thing you need to do is add more pwps in your town to make more lively & a & third Bridge would hurt, that all i can said otherwise i can see you are trying to make a effort for your town.

Thanks for the advise, I will visit yours and post feedback later

 

[Ace Marvel]

come to my dream town

Sorry I havent visit your town, it's finals week for me so I'm super busy, but i haven't forgot

 

[marigoldilocks]

Hello! I'm currently dreaming of Vanille right now! I'm not super knowledgeable on dream towns, I'm only saying this on my personal esthetic - what I would do were it my town.

You've got a great start! I know you probably have big plans, but are waiting to get them out. For instance, I knew what I wanted, but I had to wait for the funds, and more specifically, the villagers to suggest the PWPs in the first place. So I'll say I like the direction Vanille is going.

I would add my third bridge by Freya's house, to make checking the campsite easier. Also, I wish I had built up my campsite more, so I'd add the firepit and log on one side, the chair and cot on the other, maybe the hammock near the clump of fir trees to the left. Then I'd add more fir trees and holly bushes in that area to make it feel more woodsy. Also, I'd lay a path to it (even a dirt path - if you're not up making your own I saw a qr code one once.

I like the shrub lined paths. I also know how time consuming and tedios that is (currently doing something similar myself). It looks really classy. I also like the pathing you chose. For me, I'd leave the plaza naked just because it's a pain to refill the tiles after an event or Redd comes to town (I can see the outline of his tent).

I'm interested to see what you do with the big area between Sydney and Marshall's houses and the river. With that much open space, I might do a playground - jungle gym, tires, sandbox, etc - or maybe a mini monument tour. I like where your coffee shop is, and police station. Overall it looks pretty good, lot of potential for some creative ideas.

My dream address is in my sig. Playing around with my town (ignore the complete disater that is Jane's messy house, I needed her inventory space briefly and forgot put it back. I'm on that soon... Also I just got rid of a PWP and have space for one more, though which one? I'm open to suggestions!