Dream Town opinions?

[pollygone]

I've nearly finished my town, I just need to get my 10th villager and I've got to finish the rooms in my other characters houses but I've finished the layout and I've completed the mayor's house and I've left lots of stuff out.

It would be really nice if you could check it out! My dream code is on my signature

 

[krielle]

I just had fun roaming around your town and I only have one comment.
I'm not saying this to offend you or anything it's just my opinion ^^

If your 100% happy with your paths then ignore this <3

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Paths:
I honestly think that the brown paths were boring compared to the grass / peppermint areas.
It made too much contrast with the candy grass areas and I found it distracting ;n; You can
ignore this comment if you want, but I'm really picky when it comes to paths and our taste
is probably different.

I would recommend this path:

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[Lurrdoc]

I love your paths. I like the inclusion of presents and pieces of candy on the ground to match your paths. Not a single spot in your town is free, which I like, I consider that very developed. Thought went into every bit of land. ^^

Now for some constructive criticism. I question the placement of the flower arch. It looks like it's a place holder pwp, but it seems really out of the way. I would place it in a more frequently used area. I would develop the top right part of your town some more, maybe add a few more variations of hybrids, bushes, or trees. The stonehenge pwp felt a bit out of place around the candy and cutesy theme everywhere. Overall, though, I super enjoyed your dream and thought it was really nice. Your town plaza looks great too.

 

[pollygone]

I just had fun roaming around your town and I only have one comment.
I'm not saying this to offend you or anything it's just my opinion ^^

If your 100% happy with your paths then ignore this <3

Spoiler

Paths:
I honestly think that the brown paths were boring compared to the grass / peppermint areas.
It made too much contrast with the candy grass areas and I found it distracting ;n; You can
ignore this comment if you want, but I'm really picky when it comes to paths and our taste
is probably different.

I would recommend this path:

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I guess the paths ARE boring in comparison to the grass but I have tried out other paths and it just looked to over the top to me but thanks for the advice! That path is really nice though!

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I love your paths. I like the inclusion of presents and pieces of candy on the ground to match your paths. Not a single spot in your town is free, which I like, I consider that very developed. Thought went into every bit of land. ^^

Now for some constructive criticism. I question the placement of the flower arch. It looks like it's a place holder pwp, but it seems really out of the way. I would place it in a more frequently used area. I would develop the top right part of your town some more, maybe add a few more variations of hybrids, bushes, or trees. The stonehenge pwp felt a bit out of place around the candy and cutesy theme everywhere. Overall, though, I super enjoyed your dream and thought it was really nice. Your town plaza looks great too.

Haha honestly, it's taken about 6 months to cover the whole town. I'd completely forgot about the flower arch bit. I'm making that into a kind of photo opportunity. I was going to put out a veil and a suit or something XD
I haven't finished that bit yet I guess

I am trying to get more bushes, but no one sells them and it's so hard to find them. I'll probably collect a load, plant them then update my dream code again

 

[pollygone]

Bump

 

[Titi]

I'll be happy to check it out! I'll come back to tell you what I think.

 

[oath2order]

I kind of liked it.