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Criticize my town ~
- Thread starter jiny
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ThankiesDragonKerri
Senior Member
It's hard to see the presents behind the tree
I love the orange snacks you left along the path ^_^
You should organize your flowers more and maybe make a park with the extra space you have? Also maybe putting some cute signs up?
Your kitchen is super cute!!
Overall your town is cute but I don't know if you are trying to go to a theme. ^_^
I love the orange snacks you left along the path ^_^
You should organize your flowers more and maybe make a park with the extra space you have? Also maybe putting some cute signs up?
Your kitchen is super cute!!
Overall your town is cute but I don't know if you are trying to go to a theme. ^_^
Snacks? I never left snacks lol
Yeah sorry, I tried to make them noticeable.
I am trying to make a girly/pink theme, this is why I am cycling so I can get some girly villagers and cute ones ^-^
DragonKerri
Senior Member
Haha there were oranges on the ground and I ate them 
I love your path though!!
I love your path though!!
Haha there were oranges on the ground and I ate them
I love your path though!!
Oh I forgot to pick those up LOL
What did the presents have? I forgot what I put in them
DragonKerri
Senior Member
Oh I forgot to pick those up LOL
What did the presents have? I forgot what I put in them
There was a cake dress, veil, red boat shoes, tropical shirt and shorts, and a pink balloon
TheGreatBrain
Senior Member
Town of Camilia.
Ahh, what a darling path. The way you placed the paths in front of Faith's house is very unique. I love it. The face standee really goes well with your path, and it's super cute. It is a bit hidden, though. The town flag is also very cute. I think the flowers could use be a bit more organized, and some bushes would look nice.
Faith is an adorable character and she matches the town beautifully. I love the heart pattern you used on the lovely bed upstairs. Some more lovely pieces with that pattern added to that room would look so cute. This house definately needed a princess bedroom. and the rococo goes well too. Nice job.
Lola is a bit creepy.lol. I see that you just started her house.
I have a few unfinished ones in my new town, too.
I had a nice time visiting. Thanks for sharing.
Ahh, what a darling path. The way you placed the paths in front of Faith's house is very unique. I love it. The face standee really goes well with your path, and it's super cute. It is a bit hidden, though. The town flag is also very cute. I think the flowers could use be a bit more organized, and some bushes would look nice.
Faith is an adorable character and she matches the town beautifully. I love the heart pattern you used on the lovely bed upstairs. Some more lovely pieces with that pattern added to that room would look so cute. This house definately needed a princess bedroom. and the rococo goes well too. Nice job.
Lola is a bit creepy.lol. I see that you just started her house.
I have a few unfinished ones in my new town, too.I had a nice time visiting. Thanks for sharing.
Town of Camilia.
Ahh, what a darling path. The way you placed the paths in front of Faith's house is very unique. I love it. The face standee really goes well with your path, and it's super cute. It is a bit hidden, though. The town flag is also very cute. I think the flowers could use be a bit more organized, and some bushes would look nice.
Faith is an adorable character and she matches the town beautifully. I love the heart pattern you used on the lovely bed upstairs. Some more lovely pieces with that pattern added to that room would look so cute. This house definately needed a princess bedroom. and the rococo goes well too. Nice job.
Lola is a bit creepy.lol. I see that you just started her house.
I had a nice time visiting. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you so much! I deleted Lola though haha. I'm bumping this because I want to see if anyone would take screenshots of my town :/
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Town of Camilia.
Ahh, what a darling path. The way you placed the paths in front of Faith's house is very unique. I love it. The face standee really goes well with your path, and it's super cute. It is a bit hidden, though. The town flag is also very cute. I think the flowers could use be a bit more organized, and some bushes would look nice.
Faith is an adorable character and she matches the town beautifully. I love the heart pattern you used on the lovely bed upstairs. Some more lovely pieces with that pattern added to that room would look so cute. This house definately needed a princess bedroom. and the rococo goes well too. Nice job.
Lola is a bit creepy.lol. I see that you just started her house.
I had a nice time visiting. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you so much! I deleted Lola though haha. I'm bumping this because I want to see if anyone would take screenshots of my town :/
Mega_Cabbage
Meh
It's kinda empty IMO. There were random oranges everywhere and a watering can next to one of the houses. It seems rather disorganized to me with the incohesive PWP, flower, and tree arrangements. I liked the stone monument next to Lola' s house, but I guess it's just standing there alone now since you deleted Lola. The fountain not being centered in front of the town hall bothers me.
Work on:
-Landscaping organization
-Using PWPs in unison and arrangement
-Working your path so that PWPs are visible from the path
-Cleaning up random stuff on the ground
Work on:
-Landscaping organization
-Using PWPs in unison and arrangement
-Working your path so that PWPs are visible from the path
-Cleaning up random stuff on the ground
I'm resetting Camellia. I just wanted to know if people liked it or not.
Thanks for the suggestions!
Mega_Cabbage
Meh
Oh ok. Good luck finding the perfect map!
Thanks! I really hope I do.
GirlPolarBear
that tea girl
I do literal essays of people's towns + villager and your houses for 10tbt. It's so big it has to go in PM!
I'll look at your town and take some screenshots!
Thank you!!
