Trading 30 TBT if you visit my Dream Address

[Jae]

I'll give you 30 TBT if you visit my dream address review my town or give me a some suggestions on how to improve my town. I am also curious on opinions with regard to where you would place a Zen bell, Zen lamp, and Zen Clock. Thank you! Also, to make sure you're not making stuff up please be as specific as possible, pictures along with your suggestions would be nice. My dream address is: 4200-3792-0467

Thank you!

 

[PrayingMantis10]

lol. I'm coming over . I'm greedy. I want a KFC store and I think you need Julian too. He's very Zen!

 

[Jae]

lol. I'm coming over . I'm greedy. I want a KFC store and I think you need Julian too. He's very Zen!

LOLOL WHATEVER.

 

[PrayingMantis10]

LOLOL yourself . I haven't visited yet ! My Rosie is better than your Rosie anyway. As is my Ankha and Lucky.

 

[Jae]

LOLOL yourself . I haven't visited yet ! My Rosie is better than your Rosie anyway. As is my Ankha and Lucky.

Hell to the naw! Mine are def cuter. I want to know your dream address!! I'll pay you 100 TBT, popper, togepi egg, yoshi egg, easter egg, classic egg for your dream address.

 

[parnit101]

ill do it wait alittile tho

 

[Mario3DWorld777]

I'm on my way to the world of dreams for it right now.

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Great town!! You have a LOT of hybrids! I'm jealous... I have some hybrids, but not that many. Anyways, I don't really see any improvement needed, but if you're shaking your trees there's no room for fruit to fall, it just disappears. I wouldn't want that in my town, but this doesn't really affect your town, it's great!

98/100

 

[parnit101]

im so jealous of your hybrids so cool i have some but not many you really dont need to improve i am so jealous of your gold roses the only way it grows is without beautiful town and i dont want a different town

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btw im done

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thx

 

[tarakdeep]

ill visit urs if u visit mine 4600-2456-0515

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ur town was great and u have many hybrids. Were you put your public works is awesome and your villagers are all awesome. Im a fan. Also your town look big and there are many places to explore

 

[Jae]

Thanks guys! Don't be afraid to suggest or recommend things, though.

 

[PrayingMantis10]

You are obsessed with gold and blue roses. I'm not overly fond of either . You need to switch some of them out! Your beach is called a beach because there is supposed to be sand on it and not 5 trillion hybrids. Please feel free to take them to your friend's town the flower dumpster. The wind turbine needs to go. Do you have the Wisteria Arch? I did not see the zen pool. Do you have that as a pwp? Your town is lovely even though all your villagers say amazeballs! Sigh.... I will go put in a dream address now..


P.S. I do not want hate mail from your acolytes. Thank you

 

[Kyu]

You have one of the best zen themed towns I've seen so far :O

I feel like you should put most, if not all, of your zen pwp in the top half of the map because the bottom half feels like it strays a little from the theme.

Spoiler: Pictures!

I feel like a good place to place your clock could be here:

...or here:

This area feels really open so I think it'd be a good place for your zen bell and/or hot spring:

Your flag is kind of funny but doesn't fit in with your theme (I don't know if that's your intention or not):

This looks out of place, in my opinion:

I'm having an OCD moment over here:

 

[LyraVale]

Can I just say I'm a fan of the last 2 reviews? They were mucho entertaining.
I'll dream of your town for free and get back to you in a bit.

 

[LyraVale]

Ok, first off I have to say it's a beautiful, calm, zen town.
I love the cherry blossoms, it adds to the zen feeling.
I agree about the flag, I personally don't like it, and it doesn't fit in.
I get what you're going for with the wind turbine, cuz of the outdoor chair next to it. I'm not a big fan of the wind turbine either though, so I guess it just depends on how badly you want one in your town.
There's a long stretch of land between Fauna (<3 btw) and Rosie's houses...good place for the one of those zen pwp's.
I also don't like the trees right in front of the bridge next to Rosie's...it's kind of awkward to go around them.
To the right of that, where the apple orchard is, I'd put the zen bell, close to the river. You'd have to take down some apple trees, but there's already a lot of them. I wonder if you could squeeze it in in front of the rock, where the 2 trees are...but Isabelle is a jerk...so maybe not. I'd try though. Or even a little to the left of that, before the cedar trees start.
I looove the topiaries and the Cafe. I want to go there IRL.
Behind Fang's house, there's room for a pwp...maybe zen clock??
I like the park a lot, but the jungle gym and balloon arches were a little surprising...not sure about them.
A couple of zen lamps would be nice in the park.
And...I love the hybrids on the beach, cuz mine's the same. lol
Great job, though! I love dreaming of people's towns, and it was one of the best ones I've seen. Very neat and well thought out.

 

[Yookey]

I agree with Manits. You're missing a KFC. But a Taco Bell would do too. : P

I'll visit it in a bit. (No need to pay, I just want to see your town) : D

 

[Jae]

You have one of the best zen themed towns I've seen so far :O

I feel like you should put most, if not all, of your zen pwp in the top half of the map because the bottom half feels like it strays a little from the theme.

Spoiler: Pictures!

I feel like a good place to place your clock could be here:

...or here:

This area feels really open so I think it'd be a good place for your zen bell and/or hot spring:

Your flag is kind of funny but doesn't fit in with your theme (I don't know if that's your intention or not):

This looks out of place, in my opinion:

I'm having an OCD moment over here:

Thank you! I love all the though you've put into it, and I will definitely take your advice. I will go look for a new town flag now since the general consensus is that it needs to go haha. I haven't changed it since I started the game since I just wanted to get rid of the tree, but now I will look for a flag to match the town theme.

Ok, first off I have to say it's a beautiful, calm, zen town.
I love the cherry blossoms, it adds to the zen feeling.
I agree about the flag, I personally don't like it, and it doesn't fit in.
I get what you're going for with the wind turbine, cuz of the outdoor chair next to it. I'm not a big fan of the wind turbine either though, so I guess it just depends on how badly you want one in your town.
There's a long stretch of land between Fauna (<3 btw) and Rosie's houses...good place for the one of those zen pwp's.
I also don't like the trees right in front of the bridge next to Rosie's...it's kind of awkward to go around them.
To the right of that, where the apple orchard is, I'd put the zen bell, close to the river. You'd have to take down some apple trees, but there's already a lot of them. I wonder if you could squeeze it in in front of the rock, where the 2 trees are...but Isabelle is a jerk...so maybe not. I'd try though. Or even a little to the left of that, before the cedar trees start.
I looove the topiaries and the Cafe. I want to go there IRL.
Behind Fang's house, there's room for a pwp...maybe zen clock??
I like the park a lot, but the jungle gym and balloon arches were a little surprising...not sure about them.
A couple of zen lamps would be nice in the park.
And...I love the hybrids on the beach, cuz mine's the same. lol
Great job, though! I love dreaming of people's towns, and it was one of the best ones I've seen. Very neat and well thought out.

Thank you! I will remove the wind turbine soon, and replace it with something better. I'm still trying to get Zen PWPs from my villagers since they hate me and refuse to give me any... . I plan on changing the flag, and I'll figure out what to do with those trees haha.

You are obsessed with gold and blue roses. I'm not overly fond of either . You need to switch some of them out! Your beach is called a beach because there is supposed to be sand on it and not 5 trillion hybrids. Please feel free to take them to your friend's town the flower dumpster. The wind turbine needs to go. Do you have the Wisteria Arch? I did not see the zen pool. Do you have that as a pwp? Your town is lovely even though all your villagers say amazeballs! Sigh.... I will go put in a dream address now..


P.S. I do not want hate mail from your acolytes. Thank you

Ya ho!! I shall remove the flowers once my flower dumpster restarts her town and takes them all back (which will be never since she is so slow ) I LIKED YOUR TOWN BTW!! YOU HAVE SO MANY FLOWERS WHAT IN THE WORLD!! Also, still trying to figure out what flowers to replace some of the gold/blue ones with. I'll figure that out one day.

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I agree with Manits. You're missing a KFC. But a Taco Bell would do too. : P

I'll visit it in a bit. (No need to pay, I just want to see your town) : D

Hahhaaha I will get a KFC soon, don't worry!

 

[LyraVale]

Aw, Jae, thank you for the TBT!
Good luck with your town, it's great already, so I'm sure it'll work out how you'd like. =)

 

[nammie]

always love going to dream towns, will post a review in a bit hehe

 

[PrayingMantis10]

You need to replace your snotty Diana with Katt. Katt is a true rocker chick. She will give your town some much needed cred. BTW I don't see a popper in my shop inventory!

 

[nammie]

I love the paths you used, but I'm not a big fan of the fact that a lot of the paths, esp near the middle/top seemed to only be like... one... width thick?? idk how to describe it lol but they're very narrow! their narrowness + the abundance of trees made it hard to navigate sometimes...

also bc the area surrounding the camping cot is so green, I didn't even notice it at first lol maybe you could replace it with the outdoor chair? unless it was your intention for it to blend in?

since the exterior of your house looks all asian themed, maybe you could put a zen clock/lamp to the right of it? and I think a bell beside your town hall would look nice, like to the left where the bamboo and flowers are, but I don't think it's necessary bc the way you arranged it looks really nice already! your bottom half of the town doesn't look that... zen... compared to the top though, so I think you should def. put any more zen things in the top if you plan to

overall your town is really nice! and I'm super jealous you have the weeding day topiaries already ; o ;