story i made up tell me if its lame

[MGMT]

any suggestions its a remake of little red riding hood in the grandmas view.
plz dont laugh at my last name


Little Red Ridding Hood Matthew Darling


Hi there! I

 

[MGMT]

any suggestions its a remake of little red riding hood in the grandmas view.
plz dont laugh at my last name


Little Red Ridding Hood Matthew Darling


Hi there! I

 

[MGMT]

its for school and right now im averaging a B+ plz i want that A

 

[MGMT]

plz i need this badly

 

[UltraByte]

It's interesting... I like how you made the grandma's side of the story though. You could use a little work with your detailing, though.

 

[The Rutles]

its not lame